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Red Liqour

Shelter your Families, Bar them all in, Do what you want, I'll still slay your kin.Run for the hills, run for the old boat, enjoy your life's ease, Til' I slit thy throat.Cry out in vain, yell a sad yelp, death will come swiftly, Granted my help.One more village falls, deaths toll growing quicker, your fields are now stained, with the intoxicating Red Liqour.

The Arrow

A slave he was sold, to a man 40 years old, quite expensive was this slave, Yet neither strong or slight brave.After his daily whipping, the man thought to himself "this one is obedient..he doesn't even yelp!".Delicate was the slave, brought in for house work, having such a great slave, was a stupendous perk, complimented he was, by those he did see, for his fine slave, age twenty three.The man had a son, fearful of blades, the slave was to teach, of the bow's ways.Lessons begun, the slave was quite skilled, yet after weeks of practice, not one boar had they killed.the man he was angry, the slave not teaching the son, he punished the slave, screaming "you worthless con!". the boy he did call, to the slave as he shot, he could not hit, so the slave he escaped from the sot.the slave was found, and resumed training, now the man saw the slave, teaching his boy, to shoot up in the air, up up, and ahoy!The man was mad again, he tried to punish the slave, but it began to rain. the boy called out "I cannot hit the bullseye!" the slave he did call "go opposite the winds lie!" two seconds later, the father chasing the slave, his eyesight was bad, so the rain stopped the knave, alas, as he felt, the arrows fine tip, he tasted his blood, right on his own lip.he felt around, the back of his throat, his clothes had obtained, a fine blood-red coat.
(morrowind poem conversion)
 

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Re: Poems

Isn't the second one a story from The Elder Scrolls series?
 

Hermit

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Yeah, poem-form
 

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All the same, they're pretty well thought out, and they rhyme very nicely.
 

Firis

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the first one was good, the second one sucked because you didnt create it at all you just ripped it and edited it... P.S your sig is the stupidest thing I have ever seen...
 

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that isnt a poem... that would be a ryhme...
 

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Hawk the great!
Stay at your school!
I must confess!
Firis seems cruel!
 

Firis

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yes I am... I am a critic to everyone not just him, that still isnt a very long poem... a poem would be like most of mine, as in at least 2 dozen words...
 

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I know this probably sounds very noobish, and I apologize in advance for getting off-topic, but what is this "+rep"? I'm assuming it's short for reputation or some such thing...
 

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yes it is...
 

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I liked your poem, Colton.:)

I give out rep, too.:p
 
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