The Tale Of Avisto's Thane

[SonofRaiden]

hey there. i have been wanting to do this for some time, but wasn't sure how to do this. I wrote a short story for my Final in Creative Writing and no one commented feedback when she showed the whole class. Could i get some criticism and tell me where you were confused if you were?

 

[MazeisMaze]

I thought it was a good story. in the beginning it sort of seemed liked Fable, but it must be just that I just played it.

 

[D3m190d]

tl;dr

More importantly: ...Why am I in your voting options?

 

[SonofRaiden]

because usually when i start a thread, you protest it, or you are an acessory to thread murder, or you disagree with my intentions. you didn't have to say TL;DR. all you had to do was check the box and that would be that

 

[D3m190d]

because usually when i start a thread, you protest it, or you are an acessory to thread murder, or you disagree with my intentions. you didn't have to say TL;DR. all you had to do was check the box and that would be that

Whenever I protest it, I have my reasons. And it seems that people agree with me.
Whenever I kill a thread- I don't. It's your thread that doesn't draw interest.
Disagree with intentions: Abusing the like system is discouraged. Gikoku agrees.

I said TL;DR because I just wanted to ask that one question, which was unrelated to the text you wrote.

Don't get me wrong though; I think you're a nice person, and this thread is perfectly fine as well.

 

[Gikoku]

Read it, thought it was pretty good. Nice work SoR.