Critique?

[SORAYISS]

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the dude wanted opinions about his pic so what i cant let him know what i think? im sure he'll appreciate it, if not o ****ing well. Just trying to help him out

 

[SORAYISS]

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allright well i will admit i havent been thinking fully lately before talking or typing in this case but i have personal reasons for that, you dont know what i go through man **** get off my ****ing case. Call me a moron cause i curse alot? its been proven to releave stress call me a moron cause i told this guy what i truly thought? that should be done more often around the world, maybe people wouldnt live in some ****ing dream world and things would actually get done properly. So dont talk **** all the time since i first started on this forum youv been talking ****, i dont know if it because i talked **** about that RPG or what but get the **** off my case

 

[Dualist]

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Ugh, you're really starting to get on my nerves...

1. Type coherently

2. Don't curse in every sentence. It doesn't make you respected.

3. Give a reason for your critique other then, "u have no talint".

Thanks.

 

[Evan]

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allright well i will admit i havent been thinking fully lately before talking or typing in this case but i have personal reasons for that, you dont know what i go through man **** get off my ****ing case. Call me a moron cause i curse alot? its been proven to releave stress call me a moron cause i told this guy what i truly thought? that should be done more often around the world, maybe people wouldnt live in some ****ing dream world and things would actually get done properly. So dont talk **** all the time since i first started on this forum youv been talking ****, i dont know if it because i talked **** about that RPG or what but get the **** off my case

Yes. Cheez was living in a dream world when he made this and he needed you to snap him out of it. No, it was obvious he was aware his work was unfinished, he didn't say "ZOMG, look at my masterpiece, am I talented or wut?". He wanted to know what was missing and what couldve been improved, and out of the many posts you had in this thread, you didn't provide him with any help regarding what he asked for. That's what this is about, if you don't like something either give a valid reason why or keep it to yourself.

I apologize for all of us Cheez, I think with a few touch-ups (our suggestions) your pic will turn out just fine.

 

[Dark Drakan]

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allright well i will admit i havent been thinking fully lately before talking or typing in this case but i have personal reasons for that, you dont know what i go through man **** get off my ****ing case. Call me a moron cause i curse alot? its been proven to releave stress call me a moron cause i told this guy what i truly thought? that should be done more often around the world, maybe people wouldnt live in some ****ing dream world and things would actually get done properly. So dont talk **** all the time since i first started on this forum youv been talking ****, i dont know if it because i talked **** about that RPG or what but get the **** off my case

So adding a lot of *'s to a post relieves stress? I think it just makes peoples posts harder to understand. Granted i curse a lot in person but not in posts on a forum. Also the people here arent to be used as your own personal stress reliever. Constructive criticism was asked for not a flat out insult, if you have had a bad day and are in a mood then dont log on if it makes you take it out on others. Would save me some time in my day having to monitor all the reported posts ive been getting about you. Think before you post, theres an edit button for a reason. Thanks...

 

[Angel]

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allright well i will admit i havent been thinking fully lately before talking or typing in this case but i have personal reasons for that, you dont know what i go through man **** get off my ****ing case. Call me a moron cause i curse alot? its been proven to releave stress call me a moron cause i told this guy what i truly thought? that should be done more often around the world, maybe people wouldnt live in some ****ing dream world and things would actually get done properly. So dont talk **** all the time since i first started on this forum youv been talking ****, i dont know if it because i talked **** about that RPG or what but get the **** off my case

"AAARGH! STFU! GTFO! YOU MOTHER ****ING **** I ****ING HATE YOU ALL I'M SO ANGRY **** **** YEAH! YOU GOT NO IDEA!"

See how annoying that it? We've all got stuff, you're not the only one - so either deal with it, call the waambulance or keep it to yourself but in any case, this is not the place for you to take out your stress on other people.

A critique is meant to include constructive criticism - just saying "lol you suk" to whoever is not constructive and doesn't tell them where they are going wrong or how they can improve. See how others in this thread have pointed out what isn't working and how it can be possibly rectified? That's the way to do it - if you're just here to insult everyone then I fail to see the point in that.

 

[Azer249]

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lack of effort is my serious opinion or maybe just lack of talent..

I strongly dissagree cheesy gave me hundreds of usefull tips on sig making and made me a lot lot better! but i like it maby dim one of the charachters out a bit more

 

[Zjuggernaut]

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lack of effort is my serious opinion or maybe just lack of talent..

Why are you a c*nt? You're honestly a real d*ck and you're starting to p*ss me off.

Back on topic,

Evan, the reason why I said for him to get rid of one render is because I personally love signatures with simplicity. Using two renders takes away that simplicity and for me, makes it harder to like.

That's my opinion though. Cheez, keep at it. It looks great.

EDIT:
For those mistaken, his current signature was made by Bkoz.

 

[Dark Drakan]

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Why are you a c*nt? You're honestly a real d*ck and you're starting to p*ss me off.

Theres no reason to keep the flaming going on.

 

[Evan]

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Why are you a c*nt? You're honestly a real d*ck and you're starting to p*ss me off.

Back on topic,

Evan, the reason why I said for him to get rid of one render is because I personally love signatures with simplicity. Using two renders takes away that simplicity and for me, makes it harder to like.

That's my opinion though. Cheez, keep at it. It looks great.

EDIT:
For those mistaken, his current signature was made by Bkoz.

I like simplicity as well, but I'm more impressed when a complex picture turns out fantastic. Either way I'll probably like it in the end as long as there's a focus point as you guys stated.

And oh, I didn't know that Regardless, I don't doubt his ability to create great sigs.

 

[SORAYISS]

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damn.. i must have been high yesterday whats with all the emotion. sorry about all the bull****, guess i was getting in touch with my feminine side or something. Dont even remember what the hell i was doing last night but anyways about whats been said, i didnt put him down i didnt say he sucked i said lack of effort or talent, i said that hoping he would respond saying if he actually didnt really try all that hard and maybe that was just a concept or whatever but looking back, honestly dont know what the hell i was thinking, and as for the cursing to relieve stress... im typing not talking so... dont know what the hell i was thinking. but in retrospect sorry cheese its pretty good could use a few touchups but overall its good :thumbsup:

 

[cheezMcNASTY]

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wow, i log off for a day and miss a thunderstorm


thanks for the constructive criticism everybody! it was ultimately very helpful, hopefully tomorrow after work i'll get around to trying some of your suggestions and post a version 2 before the weeks out.

and for the record, i've never taken a class in photoshop or read a tutorial. i'm self-taught so any amateur appearances could be attributed to that.

furthermore: thanks gikoku, i love this gif more than my dog. and i due owe the awesomeness of my current sig to bkoz who has unfortunately fallen out of activity.

if anyones interested, i try and dump the sigs i personally have made onto an otherwise neglected deviantart page unbeknown to the public...until now :lol:

check it out if you actually have any serious interest in my hobby.

Clicky

 

[Evan]

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Wow they look really nice. How do you make backgrounds like that? Is it a secret? :ninja:

 

[cheezMcNASTY]

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Wow they look really nice. How do you make backgrounds like that? Is it a secret? :ninja:

mostly filters and layer blending. some of it is designs i've made separately and cut out parts. mostly layer blending, though. it's a very <3able and easy thing to do that can yield great results. :wub:

 

[cheezMcNASTY]

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anybody have an opinion they wouldn't mind sharing on version 2?

i changed the pic and the effect... practically started over except for the background which is still that snowy white effect.

 

[Purple Nurple]

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Wow, I prefer this one, I really like the way the texture blends into the image.

I checked out your deviantart as well, I can remember that Bioshock 2 sig 'A person online', nah you do me too much justice

 

[Relinquished Reality]

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the right side looks really cool, but the left... idk, i cant make out what it is.

 

[cheezMcNASTY]

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I checked out your deviantart as well, I can remember that Bioshock 2 sig 'A person online', nah you do me too much justice

lol i figured who it was would pretty obvious given you're name is in the sig its-self

 

[Azer249]

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I like it looks a bit dodgey on the left i think it would look better in a more blue colour on the left if you do it in blue and put it on my wall illtell you what i think other than that AWSOME SAUCE!

 

[Gikoku]

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anybody have an opinion they wouldn't mind sharing on version 2?

i changed the pic and the effect... practically started over except for the background which is still that snowy white effect.

It's pretty wild, man.