A Special Gift

[TheJJMax]

A Special Gift

When I was walking, a package suddenly lay at me feet.
Curious, I picked it up, hoping for a Gift.
When I opened the wrapper, I found only one thing.
And that was the Grim Reaper.

Yes I know it's short and sort of sucks, but I was bored and I made it in a minute :lol:

 

[Shirosaki]

Re: A Special Gift

It's imaginative but it doesn't rhyme or have subtlety. By the name of the thread I thought you meant this.

 

[Cain]

Re: A Special Gift

When I was walking, a package suddenly lay at me feet.
Curious, I picked it up, hoping for a Gift.
When I opened the wrapper, I found only one thing.
And that was the Grim Reaper.

Yes I know it's short and sort of sucks, but I was bored and I made it in a minute :lol:

Sort of? I see no reason for a poem of finding the Angel of Death in a package to exist.

 

[Firis]

Re: A Special Gift

^There are several reasons, to Gunman: You've got your storyline, now you just gotta make it rhyme lol. I like hearing abnormal poetry.

 

[TheJJMax]

Re: A Special Gift

It's one of those poems that don't rhyme XD