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Ok, this is the story that Darg and I have been writing over the past couple weeks. We're currently working on more chapters, and have talked about making this a graphic novel. I started with the first two chapters, and Darg did the second two, then next few will be a mixture of both our styles. You can vote on our story at the link below.
http://forums.projectego.net/sbn-darg-9722/
CHAPTER 1
"An old coyote went runnin' out one dark and windy day
Upon a ridge he rested as he went along his way
When all at once a mighty herd of red eyed cows he saw
A-plowing through the ragged sky and up the cloudy draw
Their brands were still on fire and their hooves were made of steel
Their horns were black and shiny and their hot breath he could feel
A bolt of fear went through him as they thundered through the sky
For he saw the Runners coming hard and he heard their mournful cry
Yippie yi Ohhhhh
Yippie yi yaaaaay
Ghost Runners in the sky
Their faces gaunt, their eyes were blurred, their coats all soaked with sweat
He's runnin' hard to catch that herd, but he ain't caught 'em yet
'Cause he's got to run forever on that range up in the sky
Doomed to breathin' fire
As he flies on hear his cry
As the runners loped on by him he heard one call his name
If you want to save your soul from Hell and runnin' on our range
Then coyote change your ways today or with us you will run
Trying to catch the Devil's herd, a feat that can't be done
Yippie yi Ohhhhh
Yippie yi Yaaaaay
Ghost Runners in the sky"
"So the story goes" said Sixgun as he looked out over the russet colored range. "You can never be too sure of what you'll find out there, as far as a coyote can see on the range, there are just some things you won't see 'till they hit you." Four coyotes walked along the ridge behind Sixgun as he sang. One of them, just as old as the the graying coyote and twice as mangy, spoke to his companions. "Too true, that bit of advice. You youngsters might want to listen up, for an old coyotes word out here on the range could very well save your hides one day." Red said as he swatted flies with his tail, which was far from it's former glory. "Damned flies. If there was one thing I missed about being young, it was being able to catch those damned flies." Red snorted as he snapped at the pests. A larger coyote walked beside Red. "Here old timer, I'm still young enough to help." Whiskey, who was big enough to be mistaken for a large wolf said as he snapped up several flies gleefully. Red spoke again "Thank you son, you do an old timer a great help." One of the younger coyotes, by the name of Quickdraw, spoke up. "Grandsire, where did you hear that song?" He waited a moment before Sixgun said anything. "Well son, when I was a young runner out on the range, herding for my father, my grandsire sang that just before every storm, when the thunder would cackle and the clouds were movin' along. He said it brought good luck, said that there was somethin' about that old howl that made the ghost runners acknowlege that we feared and respected 'em." The old coyote paused for a moment. "My grandsire was a very wise old coyote, and told me stories about times before those blasted land owners and their army came here, mind you not all them city folk are bad, but this was back before we halfbreeds were made. Said his sire was the son of a native brave, and that the natives swore there were spirits in the sky, and many said they'd seen 'em with their own eyes." He paused again for a moment and took a deep breath. "Have to excuse me, I'm not as young as I used to be." He laughed, a sound somewhat like a bark, that still held traces of his youth. "For all we old coyotes know, them spirits, they actually exist. No matter if they do or don't I'm not about to go darin' somethin' to skin my sorry old hide." He laughed again. "Why do you ask son?" Quickdraw's faded blue eyes lit up, as he pawed the dirt in front of him. "Well sir, I was thinking about how fast and hard a coyote would have to run to catch that Devil's herd." When he finished speaking his face pulled back into a grin, a sight both friendly and frightening at the same time. The last in the line of coyotes, whose fur was a jet black, spoke slowly and softly. "Like you'd be able to catch 'em Quickdraw, you're slower than a three legged jackass." The blue eyed coyote spun in a circle to face his shadow colored companion. "Well if you think you can out run me Slade, let's settle this!" Quickdraw barked playfully. Slade thought about it for a moment before streaking off across the range. "Catch me if you can pale-tail!" Quickdraw sneezed from the dust cloud Slade kicked up before disappearing in a flash of red and gold fur. "There's a reason you're the same color as a shadow, Slade." The red-gold coyote yipped as he gained on his companion. "Because you're meant to be in mine forever." He barked as he flew past his friend. The three older coyotes that remained on the ridge howled with laughter, and then Whiskey spoke. "I've got to admit, Slade may have the advantage when it comes to hunting with that shadow coat, but I've never met a coyote alive who could outrun Quickdraw." Sixgun now spoke up softly. "Maybe he is fast enough to catch the Devil's herd." Red nodded along. "Remember how pop used to talk about the blue eyed beast that the natives said would save us all? Wouldn't it be somethin' if the youngin' had it in him?"
CHAPTER 2
Two coyotes ran here and there trying to box in the herd, yipping and snapping at the stragglers and the wanderers, while a third stood on a hill watching. It wasn't easy doing the job, but someone had to do it. If even a single season of harvest didn't go as planned, the whole area could lose food. Quickdraw and Slade had been doing this for several seasons now, under the leadership of Whiskey, who had been doing it for several years. He was still very much young and alive, unlike Red and Sixgun who were old enough to retire from the job. Ofcourse that was pack law, run steer for half your life and make it out alive, and you were taken care of for the next half. Whiskey snorted. "Three more years." he thought. He looked out over the herd once more as the two youngsters pushed them up the hillside he was standing on. "Make sure they graze on the good stuff and not them briars and thorns!" He yelled out. Quickdraw looked in Whiskey's direction, and nodded. Whiskey looked to the other coyote, almost nothing more than a shadow next to the herd. "Slade, move those two stragglers a little farther up." Slade vanished for a moment before Whiskey saw that the two cows started moving up towards the rest of the herd. Whiskey looked the herd over once again. "Good job boys, you can leave 'em there, and take a breather." He said, and saw thankful looks on the youngsters faces. The two coyotes sprawled out in the lush spring grass thankful for it's cushion like effect. Quickdraw looked up at the sky before speaking. "What do you think it's like up there?" Slade thought for a minute before he said anything. "Well I'd imagine it's like here, but better. Kinda like the great range in the sky they say it is." Quickdraw rolled onto his paws. "I guess we better get a drink while we can, I saw a stream out about a mile out to the north." Slade tilted his head in query. Quickdraw looked out towards a sloping hillside. "It's over there. We'd better hurry so Whiskey doesn't chew our heads off." While they walked through a valley filled with spring flowers and tall grass, Quickdraw hummed the song his grandsire had sang almost a year ago. It haunted his waking moments, thinking of what the song said about the Devil's herd being impossible to catch. "Wish I could try My paw at it." He thought. Slade looked over at his companion. "It bothers you doesn't it." He said softly. Quickdraw kept looking straight ahead, even though he spoke. "To be honest with you Slade, it's all I ever think about. I keep having this dream that our pack is up there on the sky-range, chasing that herd, but we can't catch 'em, they just keep pulling farther and farther away." Slade sniffed the air while replying. "Well not much you can do about a dream, just be satisfied being able to catch everything else on earth." He yipped merrily. The two youngsters stopped in their tracks. Quickdraw spoke first. "Foxes! I bet uncle Red is somewhere round here, trying to get some more of those plains rabbits for supper!" Slade chimed in a second later. "Red has to be the slyest old bastard I ever did meet." The two rushed down the hill into the fox encampment, looking here and there at the marvels that the gypsie folk usually had in tow, tents of tanned cow hide with colorful markings telling passerby who owned the wares they were viewing, and painted stones representing the differing aisles were strown about everywhere. Slade was eyeing one of the amberstone fox figures when Red came from out behind a huge log near the river. "Hello sons, and may an old coyote ask why you aren't tendin' the herd?" Quickdraw and Slade looked abashed for a moment, until Red laughed. "Don't worry you pups, I know a coyotes gotta have a drink every now and again, bet it was a bit of a suprise to see these folks way out here." Quickdraw looked from Slade to Red before speaking. "Yes sir, we came out here to get a drink before Whiskey made us run the herd back to the stead." Slade looked at Red quizzically. "You out here gettin' rabbits, eh old timer?" Red's eyes narrowed as he spoke. "You better be glad I can't tan your hide any darker than it is son. Yes I'm out here gettin' rabbits as you so rudely put it, tell that brute Whiskey that I've got some extra ones to fill that enormous gullet of his, and tell him I need to speak with him as soon as yall get back from grazin' them cows, somethin's come up with the gypsies and he needs to know, now git!" The two youngsters started to head towards the river with haste, as Red mumbled something that sounded like "Old timer, I'll give him an old timer..."
Ok, this is the story that Darg and I have been writing over the past couple weeks. We're currently working on more chapters, and have talked about making this a graphic novel. I started with the first two chapters, and Darg did the second two, then next few will be a mixture of both our styles. You can vote on our story at the link below.
http://forums.projectego.net/sbn-darg-9722/
CHAPTER 1
"An old coyote went runnin' out one dark and windy day
Upon a ridge he rested as he went along his way
When all at once a mighty herd of red eyed cows he saw
A-plowing through the ragged sky and up the cloudy draw
Their brands were still on fire and their hooves were made of steel
Their horns were black and shiny and their hot breath he could feel
A bolt of fear went through him as they thundered through the sky
For he saw the Runners coming hard and he heard their mournful cry
Yippie yi Ohhhhh
Yippie yi yaaaaay
Ghost Runners in the sky
Their faces gaunt, their eyes were blurred, their coats all soaked with sweat
He's runnin' hard to catch that herd, but he ain't caught 'em yet
'Cause he's got to run forever on that range up in the sky
Doomed to breathin' fire
As he flies on hear his cry
As the runners loped on by him he heard one call his name
If you want to save your soul from Hell and runnin' on our range
Then coyote change your ways today or with us you will run
Trying to catch the Devil's herd, a feat that can't be done
Yippie yi Ohhhhh
Yippie yi Yaaaaay
Ghost Runners in the sky"
"So the story goes" said Sixgun as he looked out over the russet colored range. "You can never be too sure of what you'll find out there, as far as a coyote can see on the range, there are just some things you won't see 'till they hit you." Four coyotes walked along the ridge behind Sixgun as he sang. One of them, just as old as the the graying coyote and twice as mangy, spoke to his companions. "Too true, that bit of advice. You youngsters might want to listen up, for an old coyotes word out here on the range could very well save your hides one day." Red said as he swatted flies with his tail, which was far from it's former glory. "Damned flies. If there was one thing I missed about being young, it was being able to catch those damned flies." Red snorted as he snapped at the pests. A larger coyote walked beside Red. "Here old timer, I'm still young enough to help." Whiskey, who was big enough to be mistaken for a large wolf said as he snapped up several flies gleefully. Red spoke again "Thank you son, you do an old timer a great help." One of the younger coyotes, by the name of Quickdraw, spoke up. "Grandsire, where did you hear that song?" He waited a moment before Sixgun said anything. "Well son, when I was a young runner out on the range, herding for my father, my grandsire sang that just before every storm, when the thunder would cackle and the clouds were movin' along. He said it brought good luck, said that there was somethin' about that old howl that made the ghost runners acknowlege that we feared and respected 'em." The old coyote paused for a moment. "My grandsire was a very wise old coyote, and told me stories about times before those blasted land owners and their army came here, mind you not all them city folk are bad, but this was back before we halfbreeds were made. Said his sire was the son of a native brave, and that the natives swore there were spirits in the sky, and many said they'd seen 'em with their own eyes." He paused again for a moment and took a deep breath. "Have to excuse me, I'm not as young as I used to be." He laughed, a sound somewhat like a bark, that still held traces of his youth. "For all we old coyotes know, them spirits, they actually exist. No matter if they do or don't I'm not about to go darin' somethin' to skin my sorry old hide." He laughed again. "Why do you ask son?" Quickdraw's faded blue eyes lit up, as he pawed the dirt in front of him. "Well sir, I was thinking about how fast and hard a coyote would have to run to catch that Devil's herd." When he finished speaking his face pulled back into a grin, a sight both friendly and frightening at the same time. The last in the line of coyotes, whose fur was a jet black, spoke slowly and softly. "Like you'd be able to catch 'em Quickdraw, you're slower than a three legged jackass." The blue eyed coyote spun in a circle to face his shadow colored companion. "Well if you think you can out run me Slade, let's settle this!" Quickdraw barked playfully. Slade thought about it for a moment before streaking off across the range. "Catch me if you can pale-tail!" Quickdraw sneezed from the dust cloud Slade kicked up before disappearing in a flash of red and gold fur. "There's a reason you're the same color as a shadow, Slade." The red-gold coyote yipped as he gained on his companion. "Because you're meant to be in mine forever." He barked as he flew past his friend. The three older coyotes that remained on the ridge howled with laughter, and then Whiskey spoke. "I've got to admit, Slade may have the advantage when it comes to hunting with that shadow coat, but I've never met a coyote alive who could outrun Quickdraw." Sixgun now spoke up softly. "Maybe he is fast enough to catch the Devil's herd." Red nodded along. "Remember how pop used to talk about the blue eyed beast that the natives said would save us all? Wouldn't it be somethin' if the youngin' had it in him?"
CHAPTER 2
Two coyotes ran here and there trying to box in the herd, yipping and snapping at the stragglers and the wanderers, while a third stood on a hill watching. It wasn't easy doing the job, but someone had to do it. If even a single season of harvest didn't go as planned, the whole area could lose food. Quickdraw and Slade had been doing this for several seasons now, under the leadership of Whiskey, who had been doing it for several years. He was still very much young and alive, unlike Red and Sixgun who were old enough to retire from the job. Ofcourse that was pack law, run steer for half your life and make it out alive, and you were taken care of for the next half. Whiskey snorted. "Three more years." he thought. He looked out over the herd once more as the two youngsters pushed them up the hillside he was standing on. "Make sure they graze on the good stuff and not them briars and thorns!" He yelled out. Quickdraw looked in Whiskey's direction, and nodded. Whiskey looked to the other coyote, almost nothing more than a shadow next to the herd. "Slade, move those two stragglers a little farther up." Slade vanished for a moment before Whiskey saw that the two cows started moving up towards the rest of the herd. Whiskey looked the herd over once again. "Good job boys, you can leave 'em there, and take a breather." He said, and saw thankful looks on the youngsters faces. The two coyotes sprawled out in the lush spring grass thankful for it's cushion like effect. Quickdraw looked up at the sky before speaking. "What do you think it's like up there?" Slade thought for a minute before he said anything. "Well I'd imagine it's like here, but better. Kinda like the great range in the sky they say it is." Quickdraw rolled onto his paws. "I guess we better get a drink while we can, I saw a stream out about a mile out to the north." Slade tilted his head in query. Quickdraw looked out towards a sloping hillside. "It's over there. We'd better hurry so Whiskey doesn't chew our heads off." While they walked through a valley filled with spring flowers and tall grass, Quickdraw hummed the song his grandsire had sang almost a year ago. It haunted his waking moments, thinking of what the song said about the Devil's herd being impossible to catch. "Wish I could try My paw at it." He thought. Slade looked over at his companion. "It bothers you doesn't it." He said softly. Quickdraw kept looking straight ahead, even though he spoke. "To be honest with you Slade, it's all I ever think about. I keep having this dream that our pack is up there on the sky-range, chasing that herd, but we can't catch 'em, they just keep pulling farther and farther away." Slade sniffed the air while replying. "Well not much you can do about a dream, just be satisfied being able to catch everything else on earth." He yipped merrily. The two youngsters stopped in their tracks. Quickdraw spoke first. "Foxes! I bet uncle Red is somewhere round here, trying to get some more of those plains rabbits for supper!" Slade chimed in a second later. "Red has to be the slyest old bastard I ever did meet." The two rushed down the hill into the fox encampment, looking here and there at the marvels that the gypsie folk usually had in tow, tents of tanned cow hide with colorful markings telling passerby who owned the wares they were viewing, and painted stones representing the differing aisles were strown about everywhere. Slade was eyeing one of the amberstone fox figures when Red came from out behind a huge log near the river. "Hello sons, and may an old coyote ask why you aren't tendin' the herd?" Quickdraw and Slade looked abashed for a moment, until Red laughed. "Don't worry you pups, I know a coyotes gotta have a drink every now and again, bet it was a bit of a suprise to see these folks way out here." Quickdraw looked from Slade to Red before speaking. "Yes sir, we came out here to get a drink before Whiskey made us run the herd back to the stead." Slade looked at Red quizzically. "You out here gettin' rabbits, eh old timer?" Red's eyes narrowed as he spoke. "You better be glad I can't tan your hide any darker than it is son. Yes I'm out here gettin' rabbits as you so rudely put it, tell that brute Whiskey that I've got some extra ones to fill that enormous gullet of his, and tell him I need to speak with him as soon as yall get back from grazin' them cows, somethin's come up with the gypsies and he needs to know, now git!" The two youngsters started to head towards the river with haste, as Red mumbled something that sounded like "Old timer, I'll give him an old timer..."