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After Death (Story)

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After Death (Story)

I sat in class staring at the clock, it was 2:35. "15 minutes left" I thought to myself grinning slightly. I looked back at my teacher who seemed to be rambling on about nothing, I put my head on the desk and began to dose off. It hadn't even been 4 minutes before a loud bang awoke me. "Lucas! Get your head off the desk and pay attention" said the teacher as he slammed his hand on the desk. I lifted my head slowly and looked at him. "Eeerm I'm awake." I said, rocking slightly. The teacher gave me a dirty look and walked back to the front of the class, as he was walking away i gave him the finger and laid my head back on the desk this time not falling asleep, I just stared at the clock. 2:49, "one minute!" I though to myself smiling from ear to ear. I counted down with the second hand. "10..9..8..7..6..5..4...3..2..1.." The bell rang incredibly loud and i grabbed my bag and jumped up. "So long sir" I said as i walked out of the classroom. "Hold on a second Lucas" called the teacher who walked out of the classroom. "i need to have a word with you" There was a part of me that just wanted to tell him to **** off and walk away but i decided against it and walked back into the classroom. I leaned back onto the wall and listened to the teacher make a speech about me not paying attention, sleeping in class, doing little work, ect ect. After i while my eyes wandered out the window, I was simply staring at tree when something caught my eye. There was something on the tree, just sat on a branch. It wasn't human although it was human shaped, it had large horns and a tail. At first i thought I was seeing things so i looked away, when i looked back the figure had gone, I figured it had been a trick of the eyes and thought nothing more of it. After about 40 minutes of being yelled at the teacher finally let me go home. I left the school in a foul mood, that teacher wasted 40 minutes of my time, I was walking down the road which always seemed a bit odd to me, I could never put my finger on it, I felt like i was being watched but there was no one there, in fact I don't think I've ever seen anyone on this road. In the 4 years I've been going to this school this one road is always empty, this was the first time I'd actually stopped to think about it. I turned around and my attention was drawn to a tree, the figure from before was sat on the branch, this was not a trick of the eye because i could see it clear as day. i could see it perfectly all it's features everything! It's face was human only it's skin was a dark shade of blue, it had horns on it's head and sharp fangs. It's eyes were burning red, no iris, no pupils just red. It's body was slim and brittle but he seemed strong. his hands were boney and long. I jumped back but i couldn't take my eyes off the creature. I stared into it's eyes for a couple seconds when out of no where it opened it's mouth and howled. I turned around and ran as fast as I possibly could, I got to the end of the street when i stopped dead, I saw something which made my heart sink and my legs turn to jelly, there were more of them about 10 or 20, litering the road ahead, I turned back round to see more of them i was surrounded. I heard them all howl and i fell to me knees and put my head into my hands "This is it" I thought to myself "I'm going to die" I sat there for about 5 minutes waiting, I figured I'd be dead by now, I looked up to see all the creatures from before had been killed, I looked up a little more and saw what appeared to be a women standing over me, she knelt down to me level and held her hand out "Are you okay?" . . . .
 
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I like it! You might try to separate them in to paragraphs though. It would be easier to read. +rep for you.
 
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+rep I'd definitely keep reading this.
 
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I looked up at the women and took her hand, she helped me up to my feet. I had so many questions and as i turned to her to ask a question she put her hand over my mouth. "It's not the time for questions, there could be more of them". I had no idea what was going on but i nodded and took her hand once again. We began to run down the street, I could barley keep hold of her hand as she was much faster then me, I felt as though i was being dragged so i ran as fast as i possibly could. We came to a street which i had never seen before and she dragged my into an alley way. "Okay, we talk now briefly" She said lowering her hood. She had long blond hair and eyes of purest blue, she had a glow about her she seemed almost angelic. I was about to speak but my voice escaped me. She looked around then grabbed my hand again. "****, there's more of them" She said dragging me away, I turned back and saw about 13 creatures flying in the sky. "They can fly?!?" I said scared out of my mind. "They can can do almost anything" She said while still dragging me through all the back alleys. after an hour of sprinting my legs finally And i lost consciousness, I have no idea how long i was out, but i had the strangest dream, I was all alone and everything around me was burning, buildings were crumbling to pieces and there were dead bodies littering the pavements, I could see creatures, not like the ones from before, these ones looked nothing like people, like the things of nightmares, I couldn't say for sure what they were but the closest known creature they looked remotely like would be dragons, only smaller and could stand on two feet. There were hundreds of them, flying in the sky, It hit me that the burning ruins around me were my home town, what was happening, the last thing i remember before waking up was a bright light emanating from my body and it grew, the light brew brighter and then an explosion, and explosion of light coming from me, filling the streets, filling the sky.
I awoke in a rather posh looking hotel room, i looked around to see if the women from earlier was here but i couldn't see her, I sat up and had a good look around, the room looked rather posh and expensive, at the foot of the bed was an extremely large television, the wallpaper was a cream colour with brown patters dotted around. The furniture looked rather expensive and incredibly comfortable, I was about to stand up when the door opened, I jumped back and fell over the bed i quickly got to my feet so as to not look a complete fool, there standing in the doorway was the girl from earlier, she slowly walked up to me and hugged me. "thank goodness your okay, I was so worried" She said holding onto me tightly, I grabbed her by the shoulders and moved her back so i could talk to her face to face. "Can you please explain to me whats going on?" I asked with a desperate look on my face. She looked away and moved to sit on the bed. "well i guess i should start from the beginning.....

Wow totaly forgot i posted that here. Well this is the second part, but there will be no more short snipets coz i'm gonna turn it into a book, and i have help with grammer and **** so s'all cool.
 
Re: After Death (Story)

rep. write moreeeeeeeee
 
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