All dried up, tied up and dead to the world.

[Firis]

All dried up, tied up and dead to the world.

Seeing a shard of my future pass me by,
Your reflection in it seems so vague...
A broken dream passes me, wrenches my heart so hard I must cry...
You held my heart and made me beg,
Beg for the day where I would be free,
Of the femenine nails stabbing me,
Snapping my spine and breaking my leg,
Raping my life, bloody tears by the keg...

Fires bring my blood to a boil,
Rub my wound with radioactive soil,
Filled with so much turmoil my eyes melt at your sight but as I claw at my chest I tell myself "Fight, fight, fight!"
Fight to keep that pain away for another day,
Fight not to fall in your trap, to not swim in your crap...

 

[Psychosis]

Re: All dried up, tied up and dead to the world.

There is a song called 'Dead To The World' by Nightwish. You should look it up, I think it would suit this text well.

 

[Firis]

Re: All dried up, tied up and dead to the world.

^I knwo Nightwish, haven't heard that song... I took the title from a song from my fav artist, Marilyn Manson the song is "All dried up, tied up and dead to the world."

 

[Firis]

Re: All dried up, tied up and dead to the world.

EDIT: I't didn't post my first post when I wrote this post, but it sums it up better.

I was actually listening to Marilyn Manson's "All dried up tied up and dead to the world." when I wrote this, he is my biggest poetic muse.

 

[Rad]

Re: All dried up, tied up and dead to the world.

Firis I freaking Love it!, write more or die?!, You are now my idol. :3

 

[Psychosis]

Re: All dried up, tied up and dead to the world.

I must say, I like it very much too. You've inspired me. I might have to give this poem writing a try.