Firis
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BARD time
(sorry didnt know where to put it)
i wanted to show off my poetry tell me if you like it...
The Hero and the Siren:
Hero brave and Hero strong, could not resist the sirens song, into her lair he went, while the sirens beast she sent. Sword high, low and all around swinging at the creature that he had just found. As he thrust his blade through its heart siren wept, for the Hero was only scarred. His hope could not be barred, his battle was hard, he wouldnt rest till he saw the siren charred!
he ran her through; she was slew.
Hate poem:
With eyes sewn shut they try to show me the way,
but all they show me is that they’re liars and fakes.
No matter how hard i try to forget what they said,
their words echo endlessly inside my head.
I won’t surrender to what they want me to be,
i won’t conform to be another in their corrupt fallacy.
There is a fire in me that only you can ignite,
to stop the pain and the hate that comes from their lies.
I’ve lost all sense of touch,i feel cold and distant,
it’s getting harder to fight the dark,i’m so strained from resisting.
I’ve stumbled through life with a false sense of direction,
because of their deceit which caused a fatal infection that has broken
my heart and stolen my vision.
I’m looking for that stranger inside of me,
the only person that i’ve ever wanted to be.
And as i stand here now with my heart laid bare for all to see,
the only left in my way is a reflection of me....
Bloodshot eyes: (more of a rant)
I hear the hate and the lies, yet no one can hear my cries past your thoughtless screaming. With bloodshot eyes I see your life, how your fate was balanced on the edge of a knife, but even though you were on a ledge; you took a pledge. To protect the weak and bring their abilities to there peak, and now your emotions leak. Bloodshot eyes show me you have created a pile of trash, filled with your old styles and scattered with ash and it all gets mashed.
You try and try but all you do is cry "Why oh why?" well i say "Hi I'll tell you why" cause you let yourself get raped by the world your life has been hurled, and with your back curled, the News controls your sight not allowing you to see the light, only showing you the dark well I say "Hark!!" the government hold's conspiracies, is anyone hearin me? start cheerin for me!
I diss this place we have become so primitive we forgot how to love, everyone just attacks, with a shove towns are ramsacked; we always want what we lack. I will rant until I pant, but I shant give up till theres peace, and these wars will cease, I see it all through Bloodshot eyes!
so i got any potential to be "... a better bard"?
(sorry didnt know where to put it)
i wanted to show off my poetry tell me if you like it...
The Hero and the Siren:
Hero brave and Hero strong, could not resist the sirens song, into her lair he went, while the sirens beast she sent. Sword high, low and all around swinging at the creature that he had just found. As he thrust his blade through its heart siren wept, for the Hero was only scarred. His hope could not be barred, his battle was hard, he wouldnt rest till he saw the siren charred!
he ran her through; she was slew.
Hate poem:
With eyes sewn shut they try to show me the way,
but all they show me is that they’re liars and fakes.
No matter how hard i try to forget what they said,
their words echo endlessly inside my head.
I won’t surrender to what they want me to be,
i won’t conform to be another in their corrupt fallacy.
There is a fire in me that only you can ignite,
to stop the pain and the hate that comes from their lies.
I’ve lost all sense of touch,i feel cold and distant,
it’s getting harder to fight the dark,i’m so strained from resisting.
I’ve stumbled through life with a false sense of direction,
because of their deceit which caused a fatal infection that has broken
my heart and stolen my vision.
I’m looking for that stranger inside of me,
the only person that i’ve ever wanted to be.
And as i stand here now with my heart laid bare for all to see,
the only left in my way is a reflection of me....
Bloodshot eyes: (more of a rant)
I hear the hate and the lies, yet no one can hear my cries past your thoughtless screaming. With bloodshot eyes I see your life, how your fate was balanced on the edge of a knife, but even though you were on a ledge; you took a pledge. To protect the weak and bring their abilities to there peak, and now your emotions leak. Bloodshot eyes show me you have created a pile of trash, filled with your old styles and scattered with ash and it all gets mashed.
You try and try but all you do is cry "Why oh why?" well i say "Hi I'll tell you why" cause you let yourself get raped by the world your life has been hurled, and with your back curled, the News controls your sight not allowing you to see the light, only showing you the dark well I say "Hark!!" the government hold's conspiracies, is anyone hearin me? start cheerin for me!
I diss this place we have become so primitive we forgot how to love, everyone just attacks, with a shove towns are ramsacked; we always want what we lack. I will rant until I pant, but I shant give up till theres peace, and these wars will cease, I see it all through Bloodshot eyes!
so i got any potential to be "... a better bard"?
Keep writing!