Yeah, you have a nice soft voice there.
I totally agree with that.
Although it`s always good to be on tune, you shouldn`t control your voice too much. If you start to sing more freely, more wrong notes come in, but as you practice, these should go away.
Also, if you sing high notes and have a "cramp" in your throat, bad things will happen (I don`t know how to call it in English - your voice "breaks" and a very high pitched sound comes out). Open your mouth and relax your throat.:lol:
I think you should make another version where you use your real voice.
I didn`t say much, but read Angel`s post. Believe me, I know a little about this stuff as well
. I learned how to use my real voice through yoga (and breathing) - we did it for like two months and it really helped. It`s amazing what proper training can do to your voice.