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Creed

This is a short story I wrote, because I was having writer's block as far as my fanfiction goes...to some of you, the scenario may be very familiar. You can guess what it's from, if you'd like, lol. Enjoy!

Creed

Patience. That is the first word I ever heard out of my master’s mouth. “If you can’t have that, then I am wasting my precious time,” he had said, even before he had introduced himself. But patience does not come easily, no matter how much you want it to, even for people such as myself.

Despite that, it is patience that keeps me here, waiting, waiting, waiting for the right moment. Like so many akin to me, I linger like a hawk, letting my prey come to me, never rushing, only waiting. I will stand here for as long as I need to, not leaving to eat, to drink, to sleep, until my duty has been done. Such is my life, and such it will be until the day I die or am killed.

Stealth. That is the second thing my master told me. “You are no good if you can be discovered,” he had admonished. Yet like patience, stealth is hard to come by in this world. Humans were not meant to disappear from view, to hide in the shadows and be shielded from others’ eyes. At least, that is what the common folk think. But for my kind, it is our way of life, and we feel naked without it. Stealth is what keeps us alive, and what brings us closer to our prey. With it, we are hidden from prying eyes, from those who wish to harm us. Stealth is what brought me to the place I now stand, without a soul knowing that I am here, waiting, and watching.

Agility. That is the third and final thing my master informed me of. “It does no good if your prey can escape from you.” Of all the skills my kind need, agility is the most difficult to attain. Learning to strike in the blink of an eye, and disappear just as fast, is something that only the elites, such as myself, can accomplish. Those who are slow suffer, for they are the ones caught in the act, whatever it way be. It is agility that aids us when things get ugly, that helps us escape in desperate times. More than once, it has saved me, but many more times than that has it helped me accomplish what I set out to do.

Patience, stealth, and agility. It is these three things that have guided me through my life and made me who I am. Oh, there are many others that help too. You cannot be patient without intelligence, stealthy without strength, or agile without guile. And even still, there are more skills, more attributes that help me. But it is these three things that assist me now, as I stand at the top of this church tower, silently mapping out the town around me, lying in wait for my prey, and the perfect moment to strike them. So hawk-like am I, perched on the tower, that to the people below, it seems like that’s all I am. A hawk. A sharp eyed predator, ready to swoop down and claim my prize.

Suddenly, there is a change in the wind. The familiar bustle of the townsfolk has fallen silent, for now in their midst, sitting proudly on a black stallion, is the Commander, head of all militant activity in this land. He stops in front of a stage, where several gallows stand, limp corpses hanging from them. Dismounting his horse, he steps proudly up onto the stage, all eyes on him. Strutting back and forth, motioning to the bodies, he begins his speech, yelling passionately to the crowd. Immediately, there is an uproar. The men bellow, shaking their fists in the air. The women weep, the children burying their faces in their mothers’ skirts. Nonetheless, the Commander continues on. Several guards step up onto the stage, while others hold the crowd back. And then, from behind me, the church bell tolls. Its sound resonates loudly, and yet the crowd pays it no mind. But for me, it is my indication that the time is right. Swift as is possible, I crawl down the tower, finally leaping to the ground, ever silent as a shadow. No one notices me land, so quiet am I. Even over the roar of the crowd, I can hear the commander, calling out to them. Again, the church bell rings, this time far above me. Stealthily, I begin to force my way through the crowd, gently pushing people out of my way. Still, they pay no mind. Closer, ever closer, do I get to my target. As my excitement grows, I begin to more forcefully push people out of the way, shoving them so hard they nearly fall. And yet still, they think I am nothing but a commoner who has gotten carried away. Finally, I arrive at the front of the crowd, jogging now towards my prey.

In the blink of an eye, I snatch my pre loaded crossbow, firing it at the first guard. With a cry of pain, he collapses, but does not die. The second guard swings at me with his broadsword, but I dodge it, knocking him backwards with my bow. Now, there is no one and nothing stopping me from striking my prey. Using the guard’s body as a vault, I leap into the air, unsheathing my razor sharp dagger. Before the Commander can even pull out his sword, I fall upon him, plunging the blade into his unprotected neck. He tumbles to the ground, his weapon falling from limp hands. I pause for a moment to gaze at his grim face, but then my sharp ears catch the sound of one of the guards struggling to their feet. With a cry of rage, he sees me crouched on top of the Commander, and raises his sword, poised to strike. With lightning quick reflexes, I bolt, bounding off the stage and tearing down a side alley, shoving people out of the way as I go along.

Without warning, another guard appears in front of me, drawing his blade. With as much effort as I can muster, I jump up onto a ledge on the side of a building, scrambling up the wall as fast as I can. Heaving myself up onto the flat roof, I scan my surroundings, plotting my next move. Ahead of me, only a few houses over, stands another cathedral. Remembering the church bell tolls, I knew that if I timed everything right, I might just be able to escape. Breaking into a run, I take another leap and soar to the next roof, while below, the guards run along, trying to catch up with me. Again, I fly to the following roof. The only thing that now stands ahead of me is the magnificent cathedral. Holding my breath, I launch myself off of the building, spreading my arms in a hawk-like way, before crashing down upon a hapless guard, breaking my fall. Without hesitating, I pull myself up and run to the church’s entrance, slowing turning around to face the guards, a mocking smile on my face. With a loud clunk, the heavy wooden doors of the church open, and several monks, all dressed in black robes like mine, with heavy hoods covering their features, stroll slowly out, hands help in a prayerful position. They surround me, clearly mistaking me for one of their own, and silently, I allow myself to be hidden by them. Desperately, the guards search in vain, jostling the monks in their attempt to locate me. As soundless as ever, I slip away from the group, carefully walking away from the guards and back the way I came.

As the sun sets, I melt into the shadows, smiling a cold, haunted smile, just for myself. It was nothing but another successful job done, another life taken. After all, what’s one life, more or less, when you’re an assassin?
 
Re: Creed

Well written and nice Assassins Creed style ^_^ +rep
 
Re: Creed

Lol, yep, Assassin's Creed would be right. I really enjoyed the scenario used in the trailer, so I wanted to do it in my own words, and in a way that you could see what the assassin's thoughts were.
 
Re: Creed

Black Dahlia;130689 said:
Lol, yep, Assassin's Creed would be right. I really enjoyed the scenario used in the trailer, so I wanted to do it in my own words, and in a way that you could see what the assassin's thoughts were.

A good idea and nicely thought out.
 
Re: Creed

Here's another short story, almost like a prequel to the first one. If people like it enough, I might turn it into a full story. Enjoy!

A Message in the Night



The horse thundered across the sandy desert, tossing its midnight black mane. Astride the horse sat a young woman, swathed in a deep black robe, her face covered by a heavy hood. She urged the horse onward, despite the fact that it was tired. Over head, the stars shimmered in the mysterious night sky, while the wind whispered over the sand. The unpleasantly cold air whipped past the rider and horse as they sped on towards the distant mountains ahead of them.

Asra had been sent by her people, the Saracens, as a messenger, to deliver an important letter to the Commander of Albion. She hadn’t been told what it contained, nor had she expected to, yet she had been informed that it was of utmost importance that she got it to the Commander as soon as possible.

Asra snapped the reins, pushing her horse harder. “We’re almost there, Nox. Just a bit farther, and then you can rest.” She felt crazy talking to a horse, but anything to pass the time by and break up the monotone sound of the horses hooves would suffice for her.

They carried on for a little longer, rapidly approaching the mountains. The wind had died by now, yet the air remained chill. The continuous pounding of the horse’s hooves began to lull Asra to sleep, but just as she began to doze off, she noticed the flicker of a few torches not too far ahead. Worried, she tugged on the reins, slowing Nox’s furious gallop to a gentle canter, and then to a trot. People rarely ventured into this desert, especially in groups. Asra slowed her horse to a full stop, squinting to see who it was, but she couldn’t make out any details. Asra dismounted, figuring she’d discreetly approach the group of people. Unfortunately for Asra, their leader spotted her first.

“Who goes there?” he called, drawing a sabre from his belt, “show yourself!”

Realizing that she was not welcome, Asra quietly snuck back to Nox, attempting to mount him as silently as possible. The leader of the mysterious group spotted her however, and leapt onto his own horse, motioning for his group to follow him. Before Asra even got the chance to urge her horse into a gallop, the group of men were upon her, surrounding Asra on all sides. Each one of them held a glimmering sabre in their hands, and a few also had daggers and crossbows strapped to their sides. Their leader looked Asra up and down, then leant over and whispered something in his companion’s ear. The man nodded, grinning evilly.

“Remove your hood,” the leader commanding, turning back to Asra, “And if you don’t we’ll do it for you.”

She was about to do as he said, but then remembered her orders. “Let no one see your face. You never know who could be out there, and if you happen to run into an enemy, it could be fatal, and the message would be lost.” Instead, Asra pulled the hood lower, making sure her features were covered.

“Oh, going to be difficult, are we? Very well then. Hasan, would you be so kind as to escort our little friend here back to our camp? We’ll question her there.” The man named Hasan grunted, coming up beside Asra and wrenching the reins from her hands, leaving her no choice but to allow herself to be lead away.

Once at the camp, Hasan hauled Asra off of Nox, throwing her to the ground. Noting the messenger bag lashed to the saddle, he called out to the leader.

“She’s a messenger, Master. Look, her messenger bag is right there.” He pointed to it, and his Master came closer. When he saw the symbol stamped on the bag, his face darkened.

“She’s a messenger for the Saracens,” he snapped, turning his murderous gaze upon her. “Well now, we can’t have them sharing secrets with the leaders of Albion behind our backs, now can we? Why don’t we just see what the message happens to be.” Before Asra could do anything, he reached into the bag, pulling out the letter that had been so carefully written. With bated breath, she waited for him to finish reading, noticing how his expression became even more furious as time passed.

“Well, well, well,” he hissed angrily, turning to his group of men. “Looks like they found out about our plot. Shame the Commander won’t be getting his letter at all.” He laughed cruelly. “They should have known that they wouldn’t have been able to pass through this desert without us stopping them.”

He paused, staring at them all one by one, before resting his gaze upon Asra. His expression hardened even more. “Kill the messenger and burn the letter. It’s clear we’ll have to act quicker than I thought, before the Saracens get another chance to send out a messenger. Hasan, I want you to send a letter by hawk to our friend. He may have to…complete his job a little earlier than I thought.”

With those harsh words, he mounted his horse again, snapping the reins and galloping off, leaving a handful of men to deal with Asra. One of them took the letter that their Master had left, holding it up to his torch, and watching with glee as it was burnt, the ashes scattering among the grains of sand. With an evil grin, another one of the men turned to Asra, raising his sabre.

“Don’t worry love,” he whispered to her, “this won’t hurt too much. I’ll make it nice and quick.”

With those words, he brought the weapon down, slamming it into Asra’s chest. She drew a final breath, and then new no more.

* * *​
The Commander stood in his office, reading over the scroll he had just received. It was the speech he was to be giving today, at the Bowerstone gallows. The crime rate had begun to climb lately, and so he had decided that a good lecture with a powerful demonstration was what the townsfolk needed to put a stop to it. He continued reading for a while, but was interrupted by a soft knocking at his door. “Come in,” he called in a bored tone of voice, without looking up from his speech.

Hesitantly, a lower ranking guard pushed open the door. “They’re ready for you, Sir,” he said in a slightly shaky voice. “There’s quite a crowd out there already.”

The Commander nodded. “Very well then. Let’s be off.” He noticed the guard’s nervous expression, and was immediately curious as to why he’d be like that. “What’s wrong? You seem worried.”

“It’s just…the crowd seems a little rowdy…It’s almost as if they don’t want you to go up there and give a speech,” he said in a scared tone, avoiding the Commander’s gaze.

He laughed, shaking his head at the guard’s folly. “Oh, come now, it’s just a speech. What are they going to do about it? Send an assassin after me?”

And with a last laugh, he departed, finally mounting his horse and heading out for the gallows.
 
Re: Creed

Thats pretty good. I love how you linked my two favorite games:D + rep and well done!
 
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