Cult of the Scared Moon.

[Cobalt Gamer]

Cult of the Scared Moon.

I could see them coming from miles away, two large SUV type cars tearing down the small country road, i flayed my arms around in an attempt to flag them over it worked. The black tinted window slowly lowered revealing a young looking women with what appeared to be her boy freind sitting next to her in the driving seet, her hair was blonde and she had the brightest blue eyes you have ever seen i was almost blind."hey do you know the way to camp halowits?" I asked in my shrill voice.
"Why yes, as it happens were going by that way, would you like a lift?"
I hesitataded "well if it's not too much trouble?".
"Sure it isn't right jonny" she looked over to her boyfreind
"huh, oh yeah sure" he replied in a dull voice. I opened the door and climbed into the SUV and was rushed with the stink of leather, i sat down and fastened my seatbelt. The seats were all a dark brown leather, the windows were tinted black and the dashboard was a manure colour.
"So why're you heading up to camp halowits? Is the camp up and running again?" asked the boyfriend.
"eerm yeah we got some money and decided to re-open it. Why is there some-thing i should be aware of?" i asked with a slight anger in my voice.
"Well i probably shouldn't mention it, don't wanna frighten the little city boy."
"No please go on."
"Well a couple of years ago there was one night, the moon was full and the sky was cloudless after that night no news or conunication came from the camp, when a team of investigators went to check it, the entire camp had been destroyed and alll the campers and councillers were ripped to shreds. But im sure nothing like that will happen to you guys." He said with a laugh.
"Johnny why do you have to be such a jerk." Said his girlfreind,
"Hey it's no problem, infact i quite like abit of mystery and horror." I proclaimed even though i was slightly scared.
"That accent i just realied, your from england right?"
"yeah thats right, London, you get many british people out here?" I asked will little intrest.
"No your probably the first in a long time. Well were here camp halowits, well enjoy your stay."

I climb out of the car thanked them for the lift and they went on there way, i assumed i was alittle early because of the lack of cars so i reached into my coat pocket and pulled out a cigarette case, i opened it up and took at the middle one and placed it in my mouth. I reached into my other coat pocket for my lighter, i lit my cig and took a long drag and blew the smoke up into the air "Not gonna be able to do this in a long time." I thouht to myself, i headed down the muddy road which appeared to lead to the camp, there was nothing but forest surounding me on all fronts, if i were the kindof man who worries about things i would be needing a change of pants about now, fortunatly i'm not, i continued forth and came to a clearing, "This must be the camp" I thought to myself as i made my way to one of the cabins, i headed for the biggest assuming it was for the councillers, as i got closer i began to understand why i was sold it do cheaply, most of the windows were broken and the whole place looked like it had been made by a child of five with come glue and ice lolly sticks. I sighed and walked to the door, I took one last drag from my cig and dropped it to the floor, putting it out with my shoe.

 

[DuckY]

Re: Cult of the Scared Moon.

I Like It, A few Minor grammatical Errors (mostly Comma's) But other that that, Good story so far. I'll be waiting for the next installment eagerly... + Rep.

 

[Firis]

Re: Cult of the Scared Moon.

you always get commented and repped and I dont good job +rep

 

[Cobalt Gamer]

Re: Cult of the Scared Moon.

I reached into my back pocket and pulled out a set of keys, picking the one with the pink label on it i placed it into the keyhole and turned, the thumb-ling of locks passed and i entered my home for the next few weeks, what a dump. The walls were cohered in moss, the tables and chairs were all either snapped or rotting, the carpet couldn't be referred to as a carpet, it was more like a row of diapers. I walked into the room nearly throwing up as i did, the place was a complete dump, i had 1 week before the kids would arrive by then this place would have to be spick and span up to all the health codes. I began to rummage around the room when i heard a car pull up outside, i walked back out of the room and stood on the porch, i had never been so relieved to get out of a room in my life.
As the car pulled up and put down the handle break i took out another cig and lit up, the door opened and out came a women, she looked like she was in her mid twenties, she had light brown hair so light in fact it was almost blond, her eyes were beautifully blue they were so enchanting i could have stared into them forever, she was wearing a pair of blue jeans, a black jacket and a pair of converse all stars.
"Hi, are you the person in charge?" She asked.
"Hey, yes I'm Luke Markson and you are?" i asked slightly blushing.
"I'm Maria Swanston, have any other councilors arrived?"
"No your the first" I said as i took a drag from my cig."Do you happen to know how many more councillors there will be?" i asked excaling the cigarette smoke.
"Well there's 3 more that i know of, Greg Drendel who should be here by Tuesday, Andy Asquith who should be here today and Casandra baldwin who's Andy's girlfriend so she should be here today too. Oh and could you please not smoke near me?" She said wafting the smoke out of her face.
"Oh sorry" i said as i dropped the cig and extinguished it with my foot." Well this place needs a lot of work and i have 10,000 Dollars to do it with."
"well I think I'll go check out the cabin." With that she walked off into the hell i like to call, councillor cabin 1.

It got to Late in the afternoon and the other two councillors still hadn't shown up, i was beginning to worry when maria came calling from the porch, "Hey come look at what i did!" She yelled when i was only a few feet away, I put out yet another cig with my boot and walked towards the cabin. As i entered the room had changed dramatically, the walls were not covered in moss, the carpet looked brand new, and the chairs well the chairs were still wrecked but other than that the whole place looked like some-bodies front living room.
"Did you do this in 1 hour?" I asked maria mouth a gawp.
"Yeah, I'm pretty good when it comes to cleaning" She said with a egotisticle smile.
"Well we should probably start on the other cabins?"
"Yeah we should at least make sure this one is clean enough to sleep in tonight first, just in case we don't get it done in time." she said as she picked up a broom.
"Yeah, you do that and I'll keep an eye out for Andy and his girlfriend, if they don't see any signs of life they may end up making a U-turn." i said but it fell on silent ears as maria was now in her own little world cleaning away, i stood there and watched her for a moment then went out to stand on the porch. I pulled out another cig from my coat pocket and lit it up, "Maybe this time i can smoke the whole dang thing" I thought to myself slightly angry. About 20 minutes passed when a red sports car came flying down the mud track and braking had covering Maria's car in a wave of mud as it did. Two people got out of the car and i walked over to them.
"You must be Andy and Cassandra right?" I asked as i went to shake the guys hand.
"Yeah mate that's us." Said Andy grinning like a little school boy."So are you the head honcho around here." He asked as he lightly punched me on the shoulder.
"Yes, I'm Luke Markson, we only have 1 week to make sure this place is-" I was cut short by a loud blood curdling scream coming form the cabin, it was Maris

 

[Firis]

Re: Cult of the Scared Moon.

comment... now stop MSNing me! +rep btw