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Dawn of the Living Hollowmen.

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Dawn of the Living Hollowmen.

From The Desk Of Gaurd Captian Giles.

After the events 2 years ago bowerstone has become a ghost town. Hollowmen have completely taken over, my gaurds were all cut down as if they were just parchment. I believe i am the only one left in town, all the civilians are either dead or escaped but if they escaped they wont live long, from the reports across albion the hollowmen have comepltly taken over, there is an island off the shore of the mainland though 'Knothole island' I belive it's called the submarine which used to take the once mighty hero there still sits there floating in the water, if i can some how make a break for it i may be safe and find some warriors to help wipe out this vile infestation. I supose not many know what happened to Ruuku Enbako who silenced the so called hallowmen king, After his wish was made bowerstone was hollowman free for 6 months until they started showing up again, the numbers were small so they were no match for my gaurds but soon more and more began showing up, we were overrun i held them off for aslong as i could but in the end i was forced into my office. I have enough supplies for 3 more days thats when i'll make my move. If anyone reads this after i am gone i will send the submarine back please follow my instructions and i will waite for you on knothole island.

-Giles

The sun rose across the lands of albion, the ruins of once great cities seemed to dance as the sun hit them. Hollowmen roamed the wilderness and major cities, searching for survivors in the now barren lands of Albion. A hammer came crashing down onto a hollowmens head, while a cutless sliced another two in half and fire obliterated the rest. 3 hero's then arose in triumph, These were Albions new hope.


The sequel to my story 'Night Of The Living Hollowmen' I know it kinda sucks but i havn't written in awhile so i'm rusty ^^''
 
Re: Dawn of the Living Hollowmen.

I dont mean to be mean here now except the grammer was well erm pretty awful, capital letters and written numbers should be used not 2 or 3, it was pretty short but short good if your keeping it to diary entries like the first paragraph really its not a good idea to mix the two unless you did something likeeeee,

The three heros stumbled accross the barren wasteland, (fastforwards) ....... They entered the once magnificant city that was Bowerstone, it had fallen with what appeared little resistance to the Hollowmen. (fastforwards), they entered the room etc etc came across a parchment of blood stained parchment etc etc then publish your first paragraph

using the fastforward bit so it doesnt look like im hijacking this =p in work atm again so no comments on errors on my part thanks microsoft word has been locked down =p

feel free to mail me if you want any ideas to spin off on
 
Re: Dawn of the Living Hollowmen.

I love the diary idea!! Rep ofc.
 
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