Fabely two poem

[Cobalt Gamer]

Fabely two poem

The snow pure as white falls.

As a child falls with it crashing into the ground.
"Little Sparrow" the voice calls.
The streets so cold and deprived of sound.
Little sparow
The voice again breaking silence.
In the street so narrow.
A figure with keen sense.
And unmatched will power.
walked toward the fallen child.
Who she watched fall from the tower.
A dog runs over and begins licking wild!
The scene fades out.
A great journey lies ahead.
and many people will be dead.
Loves lost.
Lives regained.

I know it sucks =/ but i'm sleepy ><
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[Firis]

Re: Fabely two poem

notbadnotbadatallXD

 

[Eternal Devote]

Re: Fabely two poem

is not bad

 

[Zjuggernaut]

Re: Fabely two poem

It's pretty good. Seems sort of like a typical poem. Try something original ^_^.

 

[albionhustla]

Re: Fabely two poem

yo how do i start new thread

 

[fable freak 37]

Re: Fabely two poem

yo how do i start new thread

Ok i'm going to let you off the hook since your only starting here on the fable forums.Your posts go into the specific section that were layed out:
Help:Give advice,ask for advice,ask for help or give help.
Trading:Ask to trade,bid,auction off,help people trade(as in if you had to of something you could trade it to them to help them out).
Discussioniscuss topics about fable 2.

I'll answer you question though:
To start a thread you first go to the section you want to make a thread in and then there should be something above the sticky threads that's called "new thread".Click on that and you can make your thread.