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Hollow Smiles

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Hollow Smiles

As i pass through the throngs of people, a bustling multitude,
I see nothing but facades, hollow smiles and fake laughs
A society full of pretenders, a people concerned with etiquette
polite company is pretentious company, a vice-like grip on instinct
why consume time with such nonsense, as if life is triviality
to be wasted away on pomp and circumstance, a respectable fool's game
i wonder if the dying infants will learn to eat with the right salad knife
or if their concerns are more pressing than 'keeping up appearances'
aid would be a drop in the ocean to the superiors, but time is another matter
the babies see nothing but facades, hollow smiles and fake laughs
destined never to grow or progress into a state worthy of mention
as the curse of their class or caste proves too suppresive to overcome
they will never see the privileges that their superiors benefit from
a cloth from the table could clothe those not permited to eat at it
but it is instead wasted on these silver spoon ********
 
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I like this - sorry about the editing but it is against the forum rules to evade the swear filter ;)

+rep in any case :D
 
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No problem, I imagine it has to be done if I was breaking rules. The only reason I did it is that in poetry things like metre and syllabic count are important, and a word made up of asterixes has no rhythm, flow or syllables:P.
 
Re: Hollow Smiles

This is good. Keep it up ;)
 
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Fatalis;112882 said:
No problem, I imagine it has to be done if I was breaking rules. The only reason I did it is that in poetry things like metre and syllabic count are important, and a word made up of asterixes has no rhythm, flow or syllables:P.
Indeed...saying "silver spoon asterisk asterisk asterisk asterisk asterisk asterisk asterisk asterisk" doesn't quite roll off the tongue :lol:
 
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You're a great poet, not only your use of decribing things but the sheer meaning to it..just awesome. Bravo. Two rep points.
 
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