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It's Your Fault.

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It's Your Fault.

Personally I like to write Poems more then Stories. But at a time when my Mom died and I now how a horrible prick of step mom. I thought about a way out of my sadness but I never turned to it. So during my "dark" times. I wrote this:

So many troubles
so many pains
so much blood runs through these veins

so many thoughts
so little time
so many marks on these arms of mine

so many tears
so many fears
so many lost
so many gone

just one bullet
just one gun
just one shot
and then ill be done
i was just one person
just one soul
you had just one chance
you hated me ,you ignored
you heard my cries
now it will be you fault
that my body dies
as it floats down
more miserably than before
i just wanted to let you know
 
Re: It's Your Fault.

Dude o.O
THATS AMAZING :) Plus repage!!
 
Re: It's Your Fault.

Sorry.

I'm not emo :ninja:
 
Re: It's Your Fault.

somedude21;268641 said:
Sorry.

I'm not emo :ninja:

Jesus christ, you have no idea how much i hate you =_=
You dont have to emo to appreicate a work of beauty, but mind you i dont have to be anything to understand how much your stories suck ass.
 
Re: It's Your Fault.

I have to admit that's a very good poem, although a little depressing for my tastes.

+Rep.
 
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Ruuku The Kid;268643 said:
Jesus christ, you have no idea how much i hate you =_=
You dont have to emo to appreicate a work of beauty, but mind you i dont have to be anything to understand how much your stories suck ass.

Wow, man i'm so glad someone understands. Whenever I do something that involves me putting my emotions into something. There is always that one person that has to say something totally stupid.

somedude21;268641 said:
Sorry.

I'm not emo :ninja:

Ure not emo, that's fine so why do you have to say sorry that ure not emo. Becuase I don't care that you are or not..... I hate naruto but I don't go on ure thread and say.

Sorry.

I'm not a Narutard.
 
Re: It's Your Fault.

Zencidal;268650 said:
Wow, man i'm so glad someone understands. Whenever I do something that involves me putting my emotions into something. There is always that one person that has to say something totally stupid.



Ure not emo, that's fine so why do you have to say sorry that ure not emo. Becuase I don't care that you are or not..... I hate naruto but I don't go on ure thread and say.

Sorry.

I'm not a Narutard.

Agreed, i hate it so much, i mean im not emo but i dont hate on people who are, i mean i have some pretty good freinds who are emo's ( well not pretty good but good) plus where i come from, i'm a normal guy i wear what i want, i dont feel emotionaly about stuff, im just me :) but everytime i wear say a black hoody or get depressed about somthing im labeled emo o.o not that i care, but anyway that was a really good poem, don't worry about somedude, hes just a small time trouble causer and he fails miserbaly :)
Youve got talent and thats more then some people can say *evils somedude*
 
Re: It's Your Fault.

Be glad you're not a Saustard.

Ruuku, sit down, or shut up.
 
Re: It's Your Fault.

No......
Don't start a flame war, because im sure neither of us wants to get banned.....
 
Re: It's Your Fault.

Then don't say I fail "miserbaly".

And I'm sure you're "freinds" would want you to shut up if you rant, or can't tell what a flame war is.
 
Re: It's Your Fault.

People respect my viewpoint, so in turn I respect theirs.
 
Re: It's Your Fault.

somedude21;268661 said:

No...
Just stay out of my way and things will go smoothly....
 
Re: It's Your Fault.

Yea um...

that wasn't for you.

Idiot.

THATS a flame. Which starts a war. Follow me?
 
Re: It's Your Fault.

Ugh, I'm not gonna drag myself down too your level, you're a complete jackass, I don't see why i should flatter you with insults.
 
Re: It's Your Fault.

lolz.

Also, SNOWBALL FIGHT!
 
Re: It's Your Fault.

Just please get off the thread somedude and go start a flame war somewhere else, Thanks :)
 
Re: It's Your Fault.

NO WAI! *fires snowball*

HELP!!! Unfreezes in 9 seconds

ICE CRUSH!!!!!!!
 
Re: It's Your Fault.

Sorry for the needless spam ^^'' ill ask an admin to delete my posts.
 
Re: It's Your Fault.

Hey Hey, Ladies and Gentlemen, Faggots and Flood Frakers... Calm down, Somedude why do you have to be so spammy? and Ruuku why do you have to be so on the attack? either way good job Zen, +rep!
 
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