My Poetry

[Noctus]

DarkenedSoul & Vero Caerso's Poetry Gallery

Being the goth I am, I am also a poet. I make this thread at every forum I go to, and you have the privelege to be known as "one of the forums I go to".

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Cluster 1: Finished
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In Eternal Winter:

Tonight i face eternal winter
The fog, thick as ice surrounds me
Tonight, my soul is a blur
My thoughts are a frozen sea

In Eternal Winter, the truth lies
In Eternal Winter, your life dies

The path is lost to the twilight
I can do nothing but stare
My thoughts are lost in the night
And in one final nightmare

In Eternal Winter, your life is rare
In Eternal Winter, just one final nightmare

In Eternal Winter, you taste the frost
In Eternal Winter, your soul is lost

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Fate:
The inequity of fate
The line between love and hate
One day, it's on your side
One day, your luck is gone

One day, you laugh and you smile
One day, you bleed, in denial
One day, "What could go wrong?"
One day, Your hope is gone.

One day, You feel so tall
One day, all you do, is fall
One day, nothing scares you, fate is kind
One day, fear grips your mind

Through a spiral of words, hate, fear
No ladder to climb on. Your stuck here.

For eternity.
Until fate feels kind.
Until fate changes it's mind.

One day,
Eternity.

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(This one is quite emotional, but difficult to understand in parts)
One Last Goodbye:

Oh, how i need you
Oh, how i grieve now your gone
In my dreams, i see you
I awake so alone.

I said one last goodbye
But i never knew it would be my last
How would i have known you'd die?
But somehow, i knew

And i grieve
Oh how i grieve
I'm one lonely man
With one lonesome tear

In my dreams, i can see you
I can hear you
I can hold you
And when i awake, you fade away

I don't want to wake
I don't want to be alone
Why did you leave me?
Why?

My dreams haunt me
My loneliness haunts me, you i crave
If i can see you,
Haunt me to my grave

Who to blame?
I should have said it
Shouted it
Screamed it
Carved it into stone
That one last goodbye

I still feel the pain
I still feel the hate
The hate for myself

I should have said, before death did us part
One final goodbye, where you broke my heart

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One Lonesome Tree (Wrote when drunk, NO idea what it means...)

A lone wind, chill to the bone
A white landscape, a black reality
Where i wander, alone
Nothing but one lonesome tree

The outlook, bleak. Nothing but mist
Even my shadow has forsaken me
It's not as if i will be missed
Just this one lonesome tree

I cannot walk, i cannot feel
I stand in the bitter monotony
I cannot believe this is real

But one half year later
The white is green
The wind is laughter
And one dead tree.

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The Wind Enigma:

Beneath an open sky
Arms stretched out, crucified
A wind drifts by
On this wind i will ride

Carried away into the clouds
Carried by this untamed force
It consumes me like a shroud
Forcing me to run it's course

Miles away into the deep wilderness
Of the sky, Carried by enigma's kiss
This day i drift into heavens nest
I feel the cold crisp airs bliss

I drifted into darkness, as if a ride
I find myself in the fields

Arms stretched out, crucified
Crucified to the crisp air
On this wind i will ride
And it's course i shall bear

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Tomorrow:
Tomorrow, how i loathe you
As much as i loathe today
Don't come near me
I've never feared you,
But i do today

I was happy yesterday
But if you were to ask
What was good about yesterday
I wouldn't be able to answer you
Was i happy all along?

I fear you, tomorrow,
I fear you being as bad as today
My happiness, low
This is a game, i don't want to play

I never want time to go by
I'm afraid of change, i fear
The next sunrise, i'd rather die
How i wish i could disappear

How i wish i could fade away
How i just want yesterday

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Ice and Fire:

Feel the cold crispness in a winter night
Feel the heat of the suns glory and might
See the snow, falling into the meadow
See the light, shining on the winds that blow
Embrace the cold reality of frost
Embrace the fire and the cold that is lost
Be the ice, and freeze your soul in coldness
Be the fire, and burn your soul in darkness

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The Flames of War:

Tonight, i draw my blade in war
My flames shall scorch your heathen soul
Your time in reign has now died
I shall not now stand aside

Tonight, my blade will flow with your blood
And I will fight until i die
Tonight is not the night I fall
Not tonight, will I grace Valhalla's hall.

My fire shall soon be a storm
Burning all in my path to victory
You shall lay, dead, scorched, and burned
The tide of the gods has now turned.

The moon will illuminate my flame
The flame used to win this battle
Once you lay dead, i shall be free
And my flame will burn on for eternity.

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Icy Winter Of My Soul

The cruelest wind reflects me
Just the frozen winter sea
No break in the cloudy sky
You will freeze, then you will die

Life is bleak, the land is white
Frost thaws with all of it's might
No break in the cloudy sky
You will freeze, then you will die

The coldest force of nature
The fog and snow are a blur
No break in the cloudy sky
You will freeze, then you will die

This is where i'm bound to fall
Where i have one final crawl
No break in the cloudy sky
I will freeze, then I will die​

 

[Noctus]

Re: My Poetry

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Cluster 2: Unfinished
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The Ensemble of Sorrow:

I see you,
When all life is lost
All hope is gone

I love you
But nothing will change
Whats already done

In meadows of heaven,
You dance in the grass
That final kiss
Oh, why was it the last?
My heart is broken,
But when i rot
I will get back
What i hate to have lost


I see you,
In my broken dreams
Or so it seems

I love you
You're so far away,
Why can't i stay (With you)

Theres nothing left for me
In this impure life
I'd rather pass on
Away from this strife
It's impossible to bear
Being away from my heart
You stole it from me
When we did part.

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Many Moons Ago

I lay in this meadow
Moonshine on me
Clouds rushing fro'
An endless sea

Many moons ago,
Skies were the same
Ark in a bow
Take my breath away

This freezing air
I breath in whilst I stare
As moonlight will blare
Through freezing cold air

A wilderness between us
Me and this moon
Through complete darkness
You shine right through

Many moons ago, it shone on this field
Through freezing cold air, darkness I yield

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Aftermath of The Storm/The Sun Emerges:

From blackened clouds
From smoke of storms
Where lightning reigned
A storm was born

Twisting the earth
Its blackened heart
The winds of terror
Slaying all in its path

Into thin air
The demon dissolves
The light returning,
The land resolved

The damage is done,
The wraith has played
What we did to the earth,
It's debt. Repaid.

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Tulimyrsky (Firestorm): (Yet another drunken one!!! )

Winds of fire, burn my soul!
Come forth and claim these lands!
Burn them to the ground!
Let new life grow from the ashes!

Burn all in your path, blow fire and soar
The fire in my heart shall roar for more
The illumination, lighting the sky
Allow this earths to burn and arise

Sail on the fire, be one with the storm
Burn with the blaze, sing 'till the dawn
The bloodred horizon, ablaze in thunder
The firestorm came, and took us under

The screams are our music
the world is our chassis
Of fire and destruction we painted
Across the wounded lands
So we could live again
And purity will reign
Corruption will be buried
Under the ashes of the Tulimyrky
I stand on this earth now. Darker.
Life is non-existant in this wilderness of flame




The burning death, has eaten through me

The wind will take me home...​

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Shining Through

The sky is wounded with oncoming storms
It cries on the earth, the storm is here
She painted fire across the skyline
And debris, on the surface of earth.

Starry skies covered in anger
Fear has blanketed our night sky
Give us this light, give us refuge as we wait
For the diamond of the sky, to cease to spin

It presses on. Fire and flames, spreading
Further and further, coming our way
Lightining either side, thunder exciting
The fear in our hearts, when death is nigh

The diamond disappeared, the skies turned blue
Up in the stars, the sun was shining through...

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Awaken from the Glass Cage

What is this place?
I can hear voices
Who are they?

My mind is spiralling
Thourhg tunnel-visioned dreams
The world is singing
Through white hot beams

I feel your hand in mine
The comfort of you
As I awaken, and shine,
To start line anew

Memories a blur,
But... I know your face
I knew it would be her
Sitting at my bedside, sweet embrace

"Is he awake? Is he here in this world"
I'm too weak to speak
But my eyes say more than words
Away from outlook bleak

Take me away from this glass cage
Let me see your soul
This is my life, let me turn the page
Let me achieve a new goal

Come to me as I awaken
Let me smell the sweet aroma
Light, nature, all that was forsaken
As I leave this coma

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Writers Block
(Possibly the most ironic poem ever...)

Oh, the irony.
I sit here again.
Paper on my face
Quill in my hand
Making art is hard...

My thoughts are blank
As is this empty page
When I put pen to paper
I take it away in rage

C'mon, worthless soul
Think of something great
C'mon, worthless pen
It is art we must create

Nothing comes to mind...
Nothing comes to me
Nothing but art I crave
Nothing. Really?

Wait, what is this
Sweet symphony?
Oh, the bitter poem
Basque in bitter irony...

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You Have Killed Us

The world is war, the air is greed
We care not of others, and let them bleed
The selfishness of today, rivaled by none
And if this continues, all shall be gone

We have squandered this earth, with greed and sorrow
Thanks to you, there will be no tomorrow.
And as you scream, "This just isn't fair!"
You made this earth. It's you who will bare.

What else is left? It's far, far too late
I'm surprised we havn't burned alive at this rate
As death breaths down our very face
Because you have killed this human race

So, go on, ruin it some more
Enjoy what you can, luxaries galore!
But tomorrow, when that one day is here
You can drop them all, a bathe in your fear.​

 

[Trawgdor]

Re: My Poetry

Nice poetry.
Much better than what I could do ^_^

 

[Dr KillJoy]

Re: My Poetry

Well done, nice choice of words much deserved +rep

 

[Phantom]

Re: My Poetry

Wow. That is what I call legendary.
Must take a lot of skill to write Poetry like that.

FTW! +rep

 

[Noctus]

Re: My Poetry

Awaken from the Glass Cage

What is this place?
I can hear voices
Who are they?

My mind is spiralling
Thourhg tunnel-visioned dreams
The world is singing
Through white hot beams

I feel your hand in mine
The comfort of you
As I awaken, and shine,
To start line anew

Memories a blur,
But... I know your face
I knew it would be her
Sitting at my bedside, sweet embrace

"Is he awake? Is he here in this world"
I'm too weak to speak
But my eyes say more than words
Away from outlook bleak

Take me away from this glass cage
Let me see your soul
This is my life, let me turn the page
Let me achieve a new goal

Come to me as I awaken
Let me smell the sweet aroma
Light, nature, all that was forsaken
As I leave this coma

Thanks for the praise guys. Ironically, all of you who said +rep never +rep'd me

 

[Xeon]

Re: My Poetry

I never got poetry, is it rap? is it music? I don't get it..

 

[Firis]

Re: My Poetry

^GTFO!

 

[Noctus]

Re: My Poetry

I never got poetry, is it rap? is it music? I don't get it..

...It's poetry.

Thanks for the wonderful feedback, I don't know how I would have got through the day without it.

A Bards Rhyme:

Through sunshine I wander
And through cover of night
These villagers, I plunder
The gold o' so bright

I sing a rhyme for thee
With a chord from my lute
For just a small fee,
From aristocrat to brute

I'll sing a tale
Of heroism and crime!
So to thee, I hail
Listen to me rhyme!

A bard is who I am
And I sing your deeds!
But give me my payment...
...A bard has his needs

 

[Noctus]

Re: My Poetry

bumpety-ump

Writers Block
(Possibly the most ironic poem ever...)

Oh, the irony.
I sit here again.
Paper on my face
Quill in my hand
Making art is hard...

My thoughts are blank
As is this empty page
When I put pen to paper
I take it away in rage

C'mon, worthless soul
Think of something great
C'mon, worthless pen
It is art we must create

Nothing comes to mind...
Nothing comes to me
Nothing but art I crave
Nothing. Really?

Wait, what is this
Sweet symphony?
Oh, the bitter poem
Basque in bitter irony...

 

[Fabled Ravrn]

Re: My Poetry

I did not know you write poetry...

 

[Noctus]

Re: My Poetry

Naturally, being gothic, I'm a poet too.

Damn, I've just realised. I'm a goth stereotype.

 

[Fabled Ravrn]

Re: My Poetry

Would you consider that a race?

You know what, I'm going to make goth clothing and put it on a new creature and call him Joe

 

[Phantom]

Re: My Poetry

your poems are really good but please don't typo in the middle of your poem it shows how bad you type. So please don't typo again. And that idiot who doesn't know what poetry is then your a complete idiot the meaning of poetry is someone releasing their emotions into a something that they either write or type. So please don't say stupid things like that when people have obviously way better skills than you.

And this person who is the original owner of this account did not write this it was his friends so please do not blame him for this.

Bye ****ing bye homo's.

 

[Trawgdor]

Re: My Poetry

Well that was unnecessary.
Just because someone doesn't know what it is doesn't mean that you should criticize them. Also, if you will criticize him about his typos, you are a hypocrite. Just look at all your typos.

 

[Vero Caerso]

Re: My Poetry

Maybe it's because some people prefer not to be on the computer all day perfecting grammer.

Anyways.

Theres no need to fight, Just get over it or ignore it.

And if you look twice dude it wasn't the original owner of the account who said it.
So go be crabby somewhere else.

Anyways.
Nice poetry dude. Really good.

 

[Noctus]

Re: My Poetry

your poems are really good but please don't typo in the middle of your poem it shows how bad you type. So please don't typo again. And that idiot who doesn't know what poetry is then your a complete idiot the meaning of poetry is someone releasing their emotions into a something that they either write or type. So please don't say stupid things like that when people have obviously way better skills than you.

If you have here to bitch, GTFO.

As for these typos, a lot of these poems are written when I'm really emotional or drunk. Neither of which times I'm so concerned about typing.

There is one rule with poetry. When it's finished, you never ever edit it. Ever.

That is why I don't fix any typos I make.

EDIT:

You Have Killed Us.

The world is war, the air is greed
We care not of others, and let them bleed
The selfishness of today, rivaled by none
And if this continues, all shall be gone

We have squandered this earth, with greed and sorrow
Thanks to you, there will be no tomorrow.
And as you scream, "This just isn't fair!"
You made this earth. It's you who will bare.

What else is left? It's far, far too late
I'm surprised we havn't burned alive at this rate
As death breaths down our very face
Because you have killed this human race

So, go on, ruin it some more
Enjoy what you can, luxaries galore!
But tomorrow, when that one day is here
You can drop them all, a bathe in your fear.

 

[Zjuggernaut]

Re: My Poetry

your poems are really good but please don't typo in the middle of your poem it shows how bad you type. So please don't typo again. And that idiot who doesn't know what poetry is then your a complete idiot the meaning of poetry is someone releasing their emotions into a something that they either write or type. So please don't say stupid things like that when people have obviously way better skills than you.

And this person who is the original owner of this account did not write this it was his friends so please do not blame him for this.

Bye ****ing bye homo's.

As Traw said, you typo like a bitch too. Puncuation is important, dammit. Commas.. Yeah?

............. Splinter Cell.

By the way, good work. As Xeon said, I don't really understand poetry. I liked it though.

 

[Phantom]

Re: My Poetry

your poems are really good but please don't typo in the middle of your poem it shows how bad you type. So please don't typo again. And that idiot who doesn't know what poetry is then your a complete idiot the meaning of poetry is someone releasing their emotions into a something that they either write or type. So please don't say stupid things like that when people have obviously way better skills than you.

And this person who is the original owner of this account did not write this it was his friends so please do not blame him for this.

Bye ****ing bye homo's.

That Friend is now a member of these forums.
The one whos using A Randy Old Man gamertag.

 

[Trawgdor]

Re: My Poetry

Why's he using Steve's GT?