Need help with a poem.

[TRA Rotid]

Need help with a poem.

OK, I have to do this English poem for tomorrow, but since we were told about it on Monday, I haven`t had the time to write it.
Maybe someone has some good lines... it doesn`t have to rhyme, but the first letters of each line have to form a sentence

Spoiler

Y
O
U
N
G
A
N
D
F
R
E
E

I was thinking about William Wallace (free - freedom!) and it should be funny, or some kind of humor in it. So, if any talented poets (we seem to have them here) are willing to help...

 

[Jasontated]

Re: Need help with a poem.

Yellow eyes in the Night
Out of mind I lose sight
Under dark with no light I fear the
Night and what it would or should bring
Gasping for air with hands so cold
As chanting of horror story's ring in my head
Never to return from this
Debt
For not cash is what he wants but for
Revenge on me.
Evil still dances in the night not to stop but to
Encourage sufication


umm well i am kinda dark and suck at making poems but i thought it would be fun to give it a shot so yea but if you want a F go ahead and use it

 

[TRA Rotid]

Re: Need help with a poem.

Yellow eyes in the Night
Out of mind I lose sight
Under dark with no light I fear the
Night and what it would or should bring
Gasping for air with hands so cold
As chanting of horror story's ring in my head
Never to return from this
Debt
For not cash is what he wants but for
Revenge on me.
Evil still dances in the night not to stop but to
Encourage sufication


umm well i am kinda dark and suck at making poems but i thought it would be fun to give it a shot so yea but if you want a F go ahead and use it

I would never get an F for this, mainly because it`s too good and secondly, I`d get a 2 or 1, not F.
Thanks, I think I can get some ides from it, but I can`t use it exactly the way it is, because it`s... well, too "dark".

 

[Jasontated]

Re: Need help with a poem.

Thank You = )