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Old dirt road

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Old dirt road

I checked my watch, it was 9:47. She said she’d meet me at 9:50, I was beginning to worry as the harsh red sun rose higher into the sky, I kept my eyes fixed on the hill, the hill she would come running over at moment. I suppose I should explain what’s going on, my name is Luke Markson and I live in southern America in a little town called, Brodasham. I met one of the prettiest girls you’ll ever know in this town, she’s smart, funny and when she smiles, she makes everything in the world feel alright. We had been seeing each other for awhile before she told her parents, they were furious, how could there daughter, an angel from heaven, be seen with a bottom feeder like me, they forbade her from seeing me and he father told me if I got within 10 feet of her, he’d blow my kneecaps off. Today we’re running away, don’t know where, don’t know for how long , all we know is we need to get away from this place. Her name is Maria Swainston, one day id hope to marry her, but hell I’m thinking too far into the future, but it’s a future with me and her.
She came running over that hill like a dog chasing a ball, her Light brown hair shimmered in the sunlight, and the blonde streak down her fringe nearly blinded me, she ran up to me and wrapped her arms around me tight, I did the same. We stood for about 20 minutes before one of us said anything.
“ So you got everything you need?” I asked as I brushed the hair out of her face.
“Yeah, I really can’t believe we’re doing this.” She said smiling so happily.
“Well we are and as long as I’m with you I’ll be the happiest man on this here planet!” I said now gazing into her mesmerising blue eyes; I was bewitched by their beauty.
“You really are the greatest person I have ever met.” She said staring back into my eyes.
I brushed the hair out of her face once more, and then kissed her lightly.
The sound of birds twittering and dogs barking were everywhere, but that’s to be expected on an early summers morning, the trees provided some much needed shade. We had walk for 20 minutes long the fields of maze when I saw the gate which led to the old train tracks.
“Come on darling we’re almost on the wide open rails, where we can finally chase our dreams.” I said with much confidence. I grabbed her hand began to run, soon we’d be free of this horrid town and it’s wicked towns folk, soon we could be together, just me and Maria.

Word has spread in my family that im an ok writer and now my brothers got me doing his hwk =___= this is what ive got for a story so far. what dya think?
 
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Nice I liked it :) Rep for you
 
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