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Rango the Pirate

Should i continue writing?

  • Yes, i loved it!!

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  • No, don't quit your day job..

    Votes: 4 100.0%
  • Meh i think its ok, but your grammer and spelling fail kindly go die.

    Votes: 0 0.0%

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Rango the Pirate

Rango was a pirate, ooh but not just any pirate, he was THE pirate, his skills wre equal too if not greater then reavers, but Rango had weakness reaver did not. Love. This is the story of how poor old Rango had his heart broken then torn out, this is the story of Rango of blood stones final voage.

I Looked up to the sky and sighed "Looks like rain," i thought myself as the dark clouds circled above. I blew the long dreadlocks out of my face and picked up my hat, placing it on my head as i made my way to the boat, the sun had all but dissapeared from the sky it once inhabitted. My boots were cothered in mud and hints of blood, I made sure my red dragon and master cutlass were strapped too my belt before I climbed aboard my rather large ship. I passed a few of my crew as i made my way too the cabin in which my mistress slept, many pirates say there mistress is the sea, others say why have one mistress when you can sleep with em all, me im a pirate who has found love, not with sea but with a beautiful women, one who shares my passion for plundering killing and lest i forget RUM ooh how i adore rum.


ok i'm not gonna write anymore yet because, well i want see if people like it before i continue, im alittle rusty with my writing and dont want to waste time which could be put on my novel writing this if it falls on death ears so tell me what you think so far :)
 
Re: Rango the Pirate

its really good, keep going i would read everything you write :D
 
Re: Rango the Pirate

Keep on writing. I want to see if how Rango has his Heart torn out.
 
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