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Red Alert

Firis

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Red Alert

Gotta fly and I don't know why,feel like i'm gonna cry, catch every tear and throw them at you.
A thousand ways to lose my mind, and I still haven't got a clue, losing it al lfor no reason; a mental treason.
Sippin Ginger Ale to keep my sould pale and harder than dragon scale.
Ain't got no reason, ain't got no rhyme covered in poisonous slime, can't turn life on a dime.
What a republic; General disembowlement of the general public.
Stinking fires of unkwown scent eat ash on lent, ash of an unknown face of an unkown age.
Never knowing where it's going the demon inside just keeps on rolling like a ball striking the pins but were not bowling.
Eyes a hate geyser; spitting green fire the world is a liar situation dire held high on a spire.
People bringing me down with only one to bring me up, but she won't, feeling pwnt.

Tis for someone.
 
Re: Red Alert

Some of the writing is pretty good but all-in-all i don't really get it. But keep it up. It could turn out really good if you work on it :)
 
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