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Return to Samarkand

Little_Sparrow

Little_Sparrow

Hero of Skill
Jan 4, 2009
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Return to Samarkand

Here is a little post of what samarakdn would be like whe reaver and garth go there. The glowing blue light surrounded both men as they teleported away from the tattered spire. Finally the glowing stopped and they felt the tempature had risen, and the sun beating down on their backs. Unlike the Enlightenment of albion, where the air was polluted as was the sun, The air was crisp, and clean. The sun was warm and welcoming, and on the horizon was Garth's villiage. " Quite the paradise eh old chap?" stated reaver. " Yes, this is Samarkand" replied Garth. As they walked for about a mile they finally entered the villiage. They saw the sign saying welcome to Whispering willow. Thunder Bay quarter mile south. In the village square was a statue of a monstrous man in shining,golden armour, Beside him another statue of a beautiful lady, with dread locks, and a pole staff. " Who are the gents?" asked reaver. " Those are the famous heroes of Samarkand, Thunder, the tall one carried his little sister Whisper, the woman, by boat when she was a baby. They sought many harships along the way, but finally reached albion, they trained in the heroes guild. Legend states Thunder and the Jack slayer were rivals, And whisper and the hero, were friends." stated Garth. They travled more, until they saw an old Elder, with a rusty polestaff. She had white dreadlocks and wore blue pants and a blue shirt. You could tell by her face she has experianced a lot. " Welcome Garth. Or should i say: Great Great Great Grandson." " know this hag?" asked Reaver? " We both know her" said Garth in exreme shock" for this is Whisper!" To be continued. Tell me what you think. ?If you like it i will make a part two
 
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Spell check, my child. It will help you greatly.
I'd like to see some more detail and personality, it would add a lot more interest in the story (especially for Reaver enthusiasts such as myself).
This could be interesting, please do continue and take what I said into account.
 
Re: Return to Samarkand PART 2

The wind was blowing in a high pitch. Almost whispering things as it dragged sand from the ground along on it's course. Reavers eyes were focused mainly on his .48 dragonstomper in it's holster, in case things got ugly. And boy did Reaver hope things got ugly. Garth's eyes however were focused on the elderly lady. " Whisper, Hero of the ancient arena. Is i really you?""yes Garth" She replied" It is i, whisper. The one from the stories, the one who defeated the king sized scorpion in the arena." Reaver yawned in tremendous bordom. " Yes yes but why on earth are you still here? one would think you would be all dust and bones by now. " Mind your manners Reaver ! this is a true hero your speaking to" Shouted Garth. " Garth, Rea ver. I am not on this earth for much longer. I have learned the secrets of immortality from Scythe himself. But the effects are now wearing off." replied Whisper. " Samarkand is in great trouble. I am afraid the quarrels of my brother Thunder and Those of The Jackslayer, were not good. His dead spirit is uneasy and is searching the earth for his old remmnants, that the people of albion put ino strength potions. If he collects all 5 of them, he will return to life and be able to take over albion, The people of my age were much stronger than the people of today. You must collect these potions before him and destroy them!" Said Whisper rather quickly. " I dont see why we cant shoot the bloke square in the head and be over with" Said Reaver rather unfascinated. " You cant just shoot a spirit Reaver, the bullets will go right through. And Thunder was no ordinary man. His will abilities rival even mine, for legend says that he could bring down lightning and thunder from the very heavens, and destroy all who were in his way." Stated Garth. " Whsiper, where do we start our quest to stop your brother?" Asked Garth. " Go to Thunder bay and talk to the Archeologist. He was the one who distured my brother's tomb. But before you go, take these. They belonged to Jackslayer, or back in my day he was known as Paladin." Whisper handed Garth An ancient weapon Made of unknown origins. It had a Red handle, and a blade that curved and bended like a snake through grass. It looked as though it was made of gold, Almost blinding the two heroes in the sunlight. This was once known as the Dragon Solus. Give it to a hero with a black suit of armour during your travels, he will join you. She gave garth a glowing orb and strange robes. Inside the orb is the magic expieriance of the Jackslayer. And these are magical robes that protect magical blasts, and enhance your will abilities as well. And Finally she handed Reaver a Dark Black Bow And a Quiver of nerverending arrows. This bow was created by skorm himself, and is more powerful than your gun. " Hmmph, who needs an old twig with string anyways?" said Reaver rather cooley. " He is just in a bad mood. Thank you very much for these gifts Whisper i hope to visit you again one day and talk about the jackslayer." " The pleasure is mine Garth, Now go. Save Samarkand. The two heroes walked into the fading sunlight, as it was soon to be Twilight. Garth turned around quickly to thank Whisper again for her help, but where she once was, was just a small matress that she sat on. The winds almost whispering and almost saying " Good luck Heroes" but Garth just shook his head and caught up with Reaver. " Well old chap, looks like were having a good scrap soon." Said Reaver. Part three will continue if i get comments telling me to do so. Sorry about mistakes im only 14 and am too lazy to spell check. Also please leave comments on what you would like to see in part 3. It could be anything from as random as Reaver farting or to as exciting as seeing the Jackslayer! ^_^
 
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Ideas:
Bring jackslayer into story
kill theresa
add cool demon door to story
add new creatures
make thunder come back to life
make story have a terribly bad and unexpected end, like samarkand and albion get blown up and thunder lives and enslaves all living until they reproduce in mass amounts and kill thunder then the world explodes
+rep If you use some of my ideas
 
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ill definatly do SOME of your ideas. enslaving albion and samarkand, and killing theresa. Tha a definate no. I like the new demon door idea and the other stuff though. ill do it. Right now its time for school so i have to go, write it at like 4:00 c ya
 
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The two heroes walked for a few hours, and upon nightfall the whispering winds had left them, but continually they heard cracks of Thunder. As they arrived to the outskirts of Thunder Bay, The largest city in Samarkand surrounding a bay, they approached a demon door. " If you want to get inside me, you have to get inside my brother. He lives outside the Tomb of the one you seek" it said matter-of-factly. " Demon doors of Samarkand are very hard to open, and posses much greater treasures than the doors in albion." Stated Garth. " hmm perhaps the great reasures inside have grea riches instead. Hopefully a few million pieces" said Reaver rather excited. The two heroes continued to walk to the city and found a Tavern with places to sleep. In the morning they awoke to the Sweaty, Blazing heat of the tropical sun. " hopefully we will found some local women to plough he old field, hey Mage?" said Reaver with a grin. " Their is no time for your " Ploughing" with the quest we were given." About an hour later they saw the wonders of he great city. The houses were many cottages, and were made of straw and mud. " this is the poor part of the city. The people here often die of starvation". " hah! good riddence, i have always hated the measly paupers" said Reaver rather cooley. suddenly Garth gave a powerful blast of a force which thre reaver down the street. He got up with a huge crack from his back. " You watch your tongue if you still want to keep it, for i lived in his very part of the city. And my parents died here from starvation! " Said Garth with anger in his eyes. " Garth, i had no idea old chum.... i..." but Garth didnt let him finish " save it. I dont want to hear your petty excuses, leave me. I want to be alone for a while. Meet me here in 3 days." What Did Reaver do this time?!?!?!?!?!!? Where is Garth going???? Find out in the next part of RETURN TO SAMARKAND!!! this is Little_Sparrow saying goodnight and enjoy.
 
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they have visions of rose but they don't know who she is
 
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Garth left the city, and went deep into the wastes of samarkand, with the sun beating heavily down upon him. He then came to a stop, and fell asleep beside an oasis.
In his dreams he was in a forest. There he saw a little cottage with smoke coming out of the chimney. He walked inside. Inside he swore he saw a reincarnation of the hero of Bowerstone. It was a girl ( unlike the hero) she wore a pink dress. And she gave garth a bullet. It was covered in blood and seemed at least 20 years old. Garth woke up, with the exact same bullet in his hand. His anger was gone about Reaver, and was more frightned about what just happened. Sorry ihavnt been masking stories for a while, i have been busy. It might take a bit longer now as we get deeper in the sory so i need to think about better posts. BYE FOR NOW
 
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