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Some fables are true

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Oliphet

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Some fables are true

Alright, this will be written from the perspective of my heroine from a point beyond the end of the game. It will be first person. Anyways, here goes chapter 1... first half of it anyway. If you think it's way too long, that's still a critique, so don't be afraid to give it.



Dearest reader, I implore you, if you are of feint heart or frail mind, do not suffer yourself passage through my story. It is not the story of whimsy and wonder you would then enjoy, but a tale of suffering and woe. The words before you will offer you no solace, only pain and agony as the knowledge they hold unfolds. The following is my true personal account of my own life. No events have been exaggerated, and have all been, whenever their was doubt of their clarity in my own thoughts, checked and double-checked with the multitude of persons also present during the events. While this story, as aforementionedly stated, is not for those who cannot withstand the truths writ here, it is important that those same truths never be lost to the world, for fear of their corruption, and descent into lies, myths, and fables.


Now, as to my identity, it has changed many a time, from my long lost natal name, given to me by my mother before I lost her, to Sparrow by my elder sister, Rose. For the sake of continuity, and to remove any clouds of confusion that might shroud the bygone scenarios, I will refrain from altering my name at any point from Sparrow, lest the constant shift befuddle you. However, as this autobiographical narrative will be mostly of recollections, lacking in the exacts of dialog, it will be few and far between that my name be mentioned. At a young age, I was orphaned with Rose in the slums of Bowerstone's Old Town district. We were poor, living in a makeshift hovel. Rarely was it we ate our fill, and then the taste was foul and bitter, bringing with it bouts of nausea and illness, if only for a while. So we learned to save our money, and not to purchase in abundance the moldy bread and near rotten remains of the richer persons' shopping, as to avoid further illness when medication was far beyond the bounds of our wealth.


I can remember my sister having dealings with a man named Arfur. My recollections of this scumbag are vague, and I am ill equipped to describe him as the only sole I've known to also know him is... whatever Rose's communications were with this man, led me to deduce that there could be said no words of virtue toward his character, and because of such, I gathered feelings of resentment and hate toward him, wanting naught but his existence to cease, permanently. I also remember Derek, a guard of Old Town, a rather nice fellow, still is, but not the most... suited for his job. His heart was in the right place, but it never occurred to anyone that his mind was within a mile of his heart. It wasn't uncommon for him to lose his bearings, and supplies. In fact, one day... yes, that is an apt starting point, as it does hold some of my earliest recollections of my childhood. And the darkest.


I was no more than a child at the time, near ten years of age, when this trader, Morgu, or something along those lines, came into our town, with wild promises of fantastic items for sale, and at five gold pieces a bit. Magic beautifying mirrors that worked only in the dark. Clothes that were invisible to the unintelligent eye. Dolls that were also knives and lanterns. Items that only a fool would dare to purchase. Among them, was a diamond in the rough, a gem amongst garbage. It was an Old Kingdom music box, which he claimed had the power to grant a single wish. Doubtless to say, if he believed this, he would never sell it, for greed would drive him to use the wish himself. He was either unable, or doubted it. Probably both. Rose and myself were quick to agree that the box was rubbish, only to invoke the calmed rebuttal of one who would later become a great friend and mentor to me.


The strange woman, whom I now know as Theresa, was amidst the crowd as were Rose and myself. Upon hearing our derogatory claims of the box, she spoke down to us, decrying the sad state the world must be in, if children were too world weary to believe in magic. Initially we were slightly irked by her underly subtle insistence upon the artifact having merit to its acclaimed power. As she disappeared into the snowfall, Rose and I were now ready to believe the magic, for if one as old as her could find it remotely plausible, she either knew something, or was insane. The problem was, we didn't have near five gold for the box, and would have to find a means to gather such an insurmountable sum, and spending such gold on a single object that could be a ruse, would cost as much as enough food for a week. We were risking much on this venture.


Immediately the two of us set out on our task, finding small errands we could run to get our needed five pieces. The guard, Derek, was the first person we stumbled across who could use our help. As per his usual manner of being, he had let some wind blow a few arrest warrants out of his hands and down the alley ways. He claimed that for helping him, we'd be just like little constables, and gave us the who line about justice being its own reward. We pushed for payment, and he agreed to a gold piece. We were already on our way to getting our first bit of gold, we just needed to find the warrants that were now scattered across the town's back alleys.


As he headed down the road in search for the warrants, we stumbled across an odd man named Barnum, whom was on one of his many ventures into business. It was a small box, which he claimed could grab our image with a click and flash of light, transposing it onto a piece of paper. We agreed to model its usage for him, if he was willing to hand over a gold piece. He was initially reluctant, but agreed with our offer, claiming that it would be wise for him to further invest in his product, out of some ill-based foreknowledge that it would be a rousing success. We posed, and he activated his box across our two waiflike figures before a picturesque backdrop of the town, all the while spewing nonsensical and incoherent words, spawned from a malevolent thesaurus. And just like that, we were now sparred his jabber, and had in hand our first true gold piece toward the box.


Around the bend into another alley we found a gathering of children, as a local bully was asserting his dominance, and cruelty, toward a then weak, and defenseless animal. It was a stray dog, corned and whimpering as he lurked closer, casting an omnipotent shadow over the poor creature. Rose stood defiant to the punk, only to be felled by the vile sod. Angered, and unafraid of the degenerate, I drew the closest thing I had to a weapon, my toy sword, and I pounded the creep into the ground, until he begged for forgiveness and safety. I don't know what was more humiliating to him, losing to someone half his size, or losing to a girl. After he had fled, I helped Rose back to her feet. She was more than a bit surprised that he had actually hit her, as it was more than a tad taboo for a boy to hit a girl. Putting aside the lad's immorality, we turned our attentions toward the dog, comforting it, but making sure we conveyed that it couldn't follow us. We barely could feed ourselves, we didn't need another mouth as it were.


We continued down the road until we reached the bottom of a stair, atop of which their was the whimpering of a grown man. Queried by his whining, we ascended and confronted him. He explained to us his predicament, and his eagerness to rid himself of it, if it weren't for his fear of the beetles he so wished were vanished from his warehouse. We chidingly commented that we held no such fear, and would rid him of the vermin if he were to pay us to do so. He hastily agreed, making sure to add a worrisome comment about the maintenance of his stock. I agreed to let his stuff be, and only do damage toward the bothersome bugs therein. Upon entering his warehouse, the same man from earlier, whom I had seen many a time making rank communique with my Rose, appeared in the window, offering me equivalent payment if I were to ignore the beetles, and in their stead, destroy the boxes of supplies that lined the lower floor of the structure.


I was conflicted, here was the disgusting shell of a human being, offering me gold to smash boxes, which would lend to me having to avoid dealing with the beetles. Sure I had promised to leave the items be, but it could have been fun to smash them. And he did say that the man outside owed money, and refused to pay. I concluded that it was alright to carry out the man's work, after all, it was like taking what he was owed by the man. So instead of slaying the insects, I broke open, and strewed about the stock of the shed all about the floor. I'm sure that Rose would have been upset by my doing so, but we were still getting our gold piece, and the man was not paying his debts. He deserved this, didn't he? I thought so, at the time. Not anymore.


After thoroughly ransacking the storage held there, Arfur tossed me the gold piece, and I left, turning before I did to flick off his back. My sister and myself left the man weeping at his lost stock, and persisting beetle problem. It was rather good fun breaking the boxes open, but it pained me to see a man weep as he did. The sooner I left earshot of him, the better. As we raced back down the stairs, Rose made no mention of the seedy character I had dealed with just prior, as we were immediately distracted by a gust blowing a scrap of paper into our faces. It was a warrant, the first one we found, for this Lenny character. It didn't appear as if he had done anything wrong from what we could read off the sheet, but we made sure to keep a good hold of it as we continued looking for a means to earn more gold.


Not too far away, we saw a lady conversing with a drunkard. He complained about having lost his booze, and she relentlessly struck a chord of virtue amidst his choir of stench and filth. She denounced his pursuit of alcohol, reminding him of his goal of becoming sober once more. When he offered the four of us a gold piece to retrieve his stolen drink, apparently seeing duplicates of my sister and I, the lady offered us equal payment if we were to prevent his reclaiming the beverage. He claimed that a thief by the name Magpie had stolen it from him, and that this Magpie was a disgrace to all bums who earned their keep, as he stole his. Rose claimed that, as the drunk had bought his drink with his own money, it was his right to have it back, and that the lady had no authority to keep it from him. It made sense to me, what she said, and when we set off to reclaim the ale, it was to return it to its rightful owner.​
 
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Oliphet

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Re: Some fables are true

Second part of chapter 1:




As we turned to disembark on our quest for the missing ale, the dog from earlier bounded up toward us, a scrap of paper in its mouth. Stopping at our feet, he dropped the flier, revealing to us that he had located one of the many missing warrants that Derek had requested our aid in finding. We praised the mutt for his help, but repeated our reminder that he would be unable to stay with us, despite what a good boy he had been in helping us. We petted him a bit, and turned our attentions down the darker alleys in search of Magpie. He wasn't too hard to find, he was sleeping betwixt a hoard of stolen articles, including the bottle that we were sent after. Taking caution to not wake him, I tiptoed around his loot to the bottle, quickly snatching it before turning and running lest he rouse from his slumber. Jammed in the top appeared to be makeshift cork of paper, we assumed that it belonged to either the drunk or the thief, but it really didn't matter to us. We were about to get another gold piece, making three in total.


Returning to the lady and the tramp, we were rewarded for our efforts by the promised gold piece, and the sleazy half witted smile that lit the tramp's face as he was returned his booze. But before he attempted a swig of the liquid, he noticed the parchment, and upon removing it, claimed it was ours, and gave it to us, as he had no need of it. To our great fortune, the paper was another warrant we needed for Derek's gold coin. We were proud of ourselves, Rose and her little Sparrow were about to earn enough gold for the music box, and we'd get our wish.


Right... our wish. With all our living on the streets amongst the slums of the seediest neighborhood in the most rundown district of Bowerstone, their was nothing we wanted more than to live within Castle Fairfax and all its majesty. Everyday, we would gaze upon the mountainous keep and tower, longing to be inside its walls, safe, warm, and well fed. How we desired to be their, as guests in Lord Lucien's homestead. A sad story Lord Lucien, and it only grew sadder as time passed. But as of then, it was still a dark tragedy, having lost all his family. His wife, daughter, mother, father, everyone close to him. How their deaths have haunted him all his life, twisting his soul into a pit of darkness and despair. But that story is for a later time.


Having apparently thoroughly searched this nook of Old Town, we began back to where we first saw the trader, in hopes of there being other labor for us on the other side of town. On our way, a wind blew a sheet toward us, Arfur behind it, chasing after it like a wolf after its prey. Rose stomped her foot down upon the paper, assuming it to be something of importance for Arfur, perhaps the final warrant, the one for his arrest. The perfect bargaining chip. He scowled at us a bit, and demanded that we hand over that warrant, in addition to the others we had gathered, all five of them. He said he would pay us a fine gold piece, the same Derek had offered, if we conceded them to him. Nervous about the situation, I looked toward Rose, and then to the slime ball himself. Figuring a gold piece now would be better than one later, as time was of the essence in our little quest for gold, we agreed to trade with him. We didn't want another person deciding to fork over their allowance for hopes of a wish. He smiled greedily, quipping that it was a pleasure doing business with us, and left us on our way after having the warrants. We'd just one gold piece left before we could afford the box.


Walking aimlessly through the streets, trying to avoid the eye of Derek, I'd have a hard time telling him that we sold his warrants to the very scum they were for, and the knowledge that we could pass him before gaining our last coin meant we could have just gave them to him and foregone our deal with Arfur. Passing by his post, we overheard the sounds of love flying betwixt a whelp on the ground, and a maiden in a balcony. The lovelorn pair were interrupted by the damsel's mother, and the man was sent about his way. He bequeathed us to aid in his struggle of love, asking us to venture inside forthwith and give a letter from his heart to his love, requesting her hand in marriage. We agreed, for a gold piece, and ran to the house, hoping that upon knocking, it'd be the lass, and not the matriarch that answered. We were unfortunate in that it was the old maid. Thinking we were couriers, she went about searching for a gold piece to pay us for postage. Fearful of her wrath if we snuck upstairs to her daughter and privately gave the letter to her, we stayed our place until she gave us the gold.


She handed us the coin, and we to her the letter. Rose and I agreed that it would be for the best if we fled from their, lest the tempers rose from the house and we be caught within them. Upon leaving the house, now having our five gold, we raced down to the merchant and eagerly purchased his music box. He chuckled, saying how smart we were to have purchased it, and how we should find a nice quiet spot before we turned the crank. His laugh made me second guess the validity of the box, but our hopes were too high. We were going to get our wish, I just knew it. We ran over to our look out over Bowerstone, the one spot where we could see the whole of the city, and the majesty that was Castle Fairfax. Placing the ancient artifact on an old box, Rose turned the crank three times, and we made our wish. Instantly the box opened, and a mystical display of lights and music shot forth from its opening. It was wondrous, but soon distorted and exploded, leaving us behind as it vanished.


Distressed at what had just taken place, Rose and I decided it was a moot point enduring another waking hour of that wasted day, and so we departed for our hovel, only to find that we had company. The dog was there, enjoying himself on our porch, if it could so be called. Giving in to his relentless assault of pleas, we let him stay, welcoming him to his new home with us, if only for the night before he would wander off and leave us be. I don't know how later that night it was when Rose woke me, but the moon was high in the sky, and it was a bitter cold. Guards were sent to our shack to bring us to Castle Fairfax, by request of Lord Lucien himself. Neither of us could believe it, our wish was coming true, we were going to be so happy, the daughters he never had. Rose looked jubilant then, beyond me, the happiest I can remember seeing her, ever. Finally she could take care of her little sister, her little Sparrow.


Our trip through Old Town and the Market took hours as we walked through the snow, crunching the fresh felled powder beneath our ratty shoes. There were few people about the streets, most having drifted to sleep long earlier. As we marched into the gardens aside Castle Fairfax, the intimidating presence of the keep was then truly felt by Rose. She gasped, as I did, at the wondrous magnificence that lay before, and towering above us. The stone steps of the entrance felt different than to those that litter the walkways of Bowerstone. They felt, regal. We ambled through the front door, betwixt the squadron of guards. Before us was a still vibrant tree, despite the freeze of the outside realm, kept live by the radiant heat of the seemingly hallowed ground the castle inhabited, and as we left the gardenous antechamber, I heard not only the doors of the grand halls opening to us, but the peculiar sound of shifting stone beneath our feet. I ignored it, as another part of the magic that was this castle.


The grandeur of the throne room was awe inspiring, but it twas not the destination we were to be led to. No, we were sent up a spiraling stairwell toward a stretching hall, lined with artistic marvels worth more gold than we've spent in our lives each. At the end of the hall was a large doorway, I could just make it out from the first end. I remember the last time I walked through that hall now, how this feeling of nostalgia filled me as I did. The memories that followed that fateful walk that night, how grim they are. Our escort from the hall to the study was an elderly man by the name of Jeeves. He was, at the time, Lord Lucien's butler. Why he failed to greet us earlier escapes me, but it matters not. As he walked us down the hall, attempting to then introduce us to another figure of importance, Garth, he made sure to remind us to keep our manners about us, for we were to be addressing a Lord. The man in whose hands all of Bowerstone lay.


Rose and I shook with anticipation as we entered, leaving Jeeves for his master. Lord Lucien had an aura that encompassed him like a shawl. He demanded authority, respect, our attention and best behavior. His voice too portrayed a sense of power and will. This I do remember. He asked us about the box, and we were truthful with him. Upon hearing our tale, he asked us to kindly stand in the raised circle that adjourned his stained glass window. When we did, a bright powerful light rose from it, responding to us. Lucien was interested, but not entirely surprised by this, claiming us to be of heroic blood. When he attempted forth into the circle with us, it hurt him, and its color shifted, its meaning became darker. Lucien was scared, frantic, rambling, but more so afraid were my sister and I. We had no way of knowing what was to befall us now, we were far too young. Lucien finally calmed, only to draw a pistol on us. First he shot Rose. I remember her screams as she died, as they echoed in my dreams for years after. He then fired upon me, knocking me forth from his tower, through the glass, and down many feet to the ground.


I believe this is an apt place to end my first chapter here, and will continue writing in the morrow. As of now, my children are calling for me to tell them of my quests. I shall refrain from this story, and perhaps tell them of when I fought in the Crucible for the first time. That account will be writ much later, as there is still more to my story. Until I lift my quill again, dearest reader, I bid you, adieu.




And that's all I have so far. Not too shoddy (I hope) considering I only started it yesterday. Anyway, read and review, please. Thanks. Also, I've already begun the second chapter, so if you read and enjoyed some of it, any suggestions would be nice before the second chapter is up. Also having someone wanting more always makes typing funner.
 
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NoD Obelisk

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Re: Some fables are true

nice story dude, cant wait for ch 2!
 
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