Cobalt Gamer
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i was bored in maths and wrote this randomly does anyone think it would make a pretty good story?
"He rose up from the ash's cothered in dirt and blood, he looked up towards the sun and gave a sigh of releif. "It's finaly over", he looked back towards where evil had once dwelled and lifted his sword in triumpth, but somthing was wrong he didnt feal the joy of victory or the blood lust, he felt emtpy inside, all he had worked for all these years finaly over now what? . . . ., he picked up his bag and walked into the sunset waiting to see what adventures where over the horizen."
ok i know it's an ending but i wrote it in maths and my teacher took it off me and was smug saying "oh what have you got here a love letter?" i was like eeerm no so she read it out to peopel to embarris me and people liked it so i was wondering what you guys think and if i should right a story for it?
i was bored in maths and wrote this randomly does anyone think it would make a pretty good story?
"He rose up from the ash's cothered in dirt and blood, he looked up towards the sun and gave a sigh of releif. "It's finaly over", he looked back towards where evil had once dwelled and lifted his sword in triumpth, but somthing was wrong he didnt feal the joy of victory or the blood lust, he felt emtpy inside, all he had worked for all these years finaly over now what? . . . ., he picked up his bag and walked into the sunset waiting to see what adventures where over the horizen."
ok i know it's an ending but i wrote it in maths and my teacher took it off me and was smug saying "oh what have you got here a love letter?" i was like eeerm no so she read it out to peopel to embarris me and people liked it so i was wondering what you guys think and if i should right a story for it?