Tale of a Trader

[TheJJMax]

Tale of a Trader

'Tis but a tale of a wandering Trader
Who set out to find an Adventurer
And when he found one
What did he find?
He found that it was a Balverine in disguise.

 

[Xeon]

Re: Tale of a Trader

I don't think this poem deserve its own thread, remove it.

 

[TheJJMax]

Re: Tale of a Trader

I don't think this poem deserve its own thread, remove it.

*cough* If you don't like it, leave. *cough*

 

[Cain]

Re: Tale of a Trader

Its ok but its too short to have its own thread.

 

[droded]

Re: Tale of a Trader

I think the concept and story could be quite funny, but you didn't really pull it off well enough for me to laugh.

 

[TheJJMax]

Re: Tale of a Trader

Part 2

Whilst navigating the bowels of the Balverine
The Trader noticed a sign
That said
Welcome to the Balverine Pit
Where your best friend may rest