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The Midnight Shadows!

The Midnight Shadows!

Once there was a young hero named Irvine.Irvine had a dog and his dog's name was Shottsy.Every day Irvine and Shottsy would wander through Albion looking for things to shoot but then Irvine and Shottsy got ambushed by a group of bandits and highwaymen!Irvine said:"Not to worry Shottsy I have my trusty gun with me and you of course".Irvine shot just once in the air as a warning to them,but they said:"He's just a kid get him"!Then the bandits and highwaymen charged at Irvine and Shottsy with their swords and shouting:"Aaaahhhhh"!Then Irvine had shot just one bullet that went through all of the bandits and highwaymen in places where you would never want to be shot!The shot was amazing!As it rikashaded off trees,walls,birds,rabbits,swords,everything basically!

Ten years later..........

Irvine had finally done it!He had finally finish making the most legendary and powerful guns!One were two dual-wielded clockwork pistols called the Black Death Twins.And the other was a turret rifle called the Black Storm.Irvine is a master and a legend at shooting and forging!Hell he could shoot and enemy 1000 killometers away blind-folded!And his dog Shottsy can also use a gun but only if Irvine throws one up in the air Shottsy can jump real high and bite the trigger with one tooth and the bullet would go at and insane speed!Irvine still doesn't know that he is a hero.

Three years later.........

Irvine hears a voice calling out to him saying:Come Irvine your time awaits you.And no I don't mean it's time for you to die I mean come to the Heroe's Guild for Reincarnation.Irvine thought to himself:Why would anyone want me to go to the Heroe's Guild?I mean it's not like i'm a hero.Irvine went to the Heroe's Guild anyway and when he got there there was a shadowy figure in the distance of the tomb.Irvine walked over to the shadowy figure and asked:Why did you call me here?The shadowy figure answered:To start your training.

Ten years later.........

Irvine and Shottsy are once again roaming Albion to find something or to shoot someone.Then they are ambushed again by more bandits,highwaymen and apperently assassins as well!Irvine said:Well this should be interesting.Irvine threw up his Black Death Twin pistols for Shottsy to shoot the ones in the back and he got out the Black Storm for himself to shoot the ones in the front.When Irvine was just about to kill the final assassin the assassin said:Wait!Don't kill me when you can join us.Irvine had thought for a moment to himself about whether or not he should join the assassins.He thought:Eh!Why not.Could be fun!Irvine spared the assassin and said:Lead the way!

Seven years later.......

Irvine is now the master and legend of the assassin association.And is now recieving his final tattoo.This tattoo is the tattoo of legend!After the ceromony was over Irvine had left the association building and went off to do some assassinating!He started with slaves then bandits then highwaymen then hobbes then travellers then villagers then guards and finally his relatives!

Three years later.......

Irvine is now king of Albion and has made a castle to his liking a castle he named Castle Albion!Everyone had feared and welcomed Irvine.Noone liked him except his dog.Even the assassins wanted his head!Then everyone had formed a meeting about killing Irvine the King!The villagers,bandits,highwaymen,guards,travellers,slaves,assassins,hobbes and many more people discussed how to kill Irvine the King of Albion!

Two years later......

Irvine is having his dinner which today would be fancy steak and wine.The waiter and butler had given him his wine with a unsenseable taste or smell of poison in it!Irvine had drank the wine and a day later the people came to see if he was dead.He was not for he had built up an immunity!Since he was still sleeping as was his dog the people decided to just shoot him in the head since he liked shooting people they said it was the perfect way to kill him!Irvine the King of Albion was nomore!
 
Re: The Midnight Shadows!

Hey!
Fan Fics are supposed to be fun right?
Well it takes away the fun if you go:That was terrible!Or:That was appauling!Or:That was Awful!Or....etc you see where I am going with this.
Anyways the point is"I just did it for fun and you shouldn't take stories so seriously!"
And I don't say or type things like that to people on their threads/stories.
If it's a short story i'll read it and say it was awsome!
Where as if it's a long story I'd just skip it and post:Awsome story you should write more!
 
Re: The Midnight Shadows!

fable freak 37;275288 said:
No,no,no you got it all wrong.
I was talking to the other guy who said it was terrible.

ok. Good luck with any other fan fic you might be writing.
 
Re: The Midnight Shadows!

I thought ninjas were already rogue. I don't know where this idea that ninjas are men/women of honour. They were just thugs for hire. I'm not saying there anything wrong with the story, because its fan fic and it can be different from the real world, I'm just complaining about why ninjas always seem to be portrayed as some honourable man/woman. What ever happened to samurai's? Well I'm finished my random speech. I can't wait to read the rouge ninja.
 
Re: The Midnight Shadows!

Rouge Ninjas and Ninjas are not the same.
Ninjas go on missions that have ranks:S,A,,B,C and D.
Rouge Ninjas are ninjas that left a village forever and has a slash across their forehead protector and have stories on why they left their village.

Those are the differences between Rouge Ninjas and Ninjas.
 
Re: The Midnight Shadows!

Too short a choppy, I try to take at least an hour out of my day for fan fic, and that is just to update my 1 story, which has more detail, and I spend more time on them, and if I have to go do something, then I leave the window open I finish it when I get back, I like the idea, but you need to spend more time with it.But what the hell I'm fellin generous, and I wanna use a smily, so:
+rep
 
Re: The Midnight Shadows!

Well that was certainly fun.
I read it in my head as a song to the tune of that awful nickelback track, Polly-something or another.

lolWhite Knight