Treid writing a poem :)

[Cobalt Gamer]

Treid writing a poem

Just for you. <3

Infinity is not enough time,
To say how much i love you.
Your beauty is somthing divine.
Angels would have to sing anew

You make me smile when im frowning
You bring me back to reality when i wonder too far
When i'm not with you i feel like i'm drowning
But i love you for who you are.

I'll Love you forever
I'll Hate you for never.


I know it sucks right?

 

[Firis]

Re: Treid writing a poem

it is surprisingly good... not your best but good none the less

 

[Cobalt Gamer]

Re: Treid writing a poem

Thanks im not really good at poetry but i thought id give it a try.

 

[Firis]

Re: Treid writing a poem

I stole it

 

[Cobalt Gamer]

Re: Treid writing a poem

GO ahead
I wrote another poem.

Old Dirt Road

I used to walk alone, along this old dirt road, but now we walk together.
We've been through it all and come out better then when we went in.
Forever just me and you walking this road no matter the weather.
We will never lose together are only option is to win.

Time has passed faster then hoped.
Pretty soon we are to be eloped.
But i'll never forget that old dirt road.
Where our love blossomed without abode.

We're old and wrinkle now laying in bed.
But this memory It will not leave my head.
The memory of that old dirt road were my love
I took you to be mine forever.

 

[ScareCrowReturn]

Re: Treid writing a poem

Yeah it does suck.

Haha, Joking. Its good!

 

[Cobalt Gamer]

Re: Treid writing a poem

Yeah it does suck.

Haha, Joking. Its good!

Thanks, i think X]

 

[moonfever]

Re: Treid writing a poem

I love it. I think it's beautiful.

 

[Cobalt Gamer]

Re: Treid writing a poem

Angel, i call you by your name.
I cry out for you every time.
I sit here waiting in my shame.
A face as ugly as mine.
To meet with one of an angel.
Brings a tear of joy to mine eye.
just by how you talk i can tell.
You love me so much you want to cry.
Those tears of joy.
The kind we share.
The kind which show you care.
Maria~

eeeerm another love poem ^^''

 

[TheJJMax]

Re: Treid writing a poem

Just for you. <3

Infinity is not enough time,
To say how much i love you.
Your beauty is somthing divine.
Angels would have to sing anew

You make me smile when im frowning
You bring me back to reality when i wonder too far
When i'm not with you i feel like i'm drowning
But i love you for who you are.

I'll Love you forever
I'll Hate you for never.


I know it sucks right?

:ninja:

If I didn't say it once I'll say it again.

Sorry.

I'm not emo :ninja:

 

[Cobalt Gamer]

Re: Treid writing a poem

You really are a complete tool...
Ok ya know what? Do better, go on make a better poem, oh and no it can't be about how "ooh i pulled out my gun ( which i drew rather poorly) and blew away dis guy cuz he wa eating ma pie ya dig?". unless you can, kindly don't negativly coment on others work.

 

[TheJJMax]

Re: Treid writing a poem

Yes, I'm a screwdriver.

Ok I won't "negativly" comment on your poems.

I'll negatively comment on them.


And guns are awesome

 

[Cobalt Gamer]

Re: Treid writing a poem

This is the internet, not a spelling test, at least i have someone to write about....

 

[TheJJMax]

Re: Treid writing a poem

okz th3n dudez i liek d0nt (ar3 cuz im kewl liek tat



3DIT: im4 g0 n0w

 

[Cobalt Gamer]

Re: Treid writing a poem

Everytime i read your posts i feel like i lose 20 brain cells =__=''

 

[TheJJMax]

Re: Treid writing a poem

You actually lose thousands every day.

And thats your happy thought of the week.