Yet Another One Of My Tiresome Comics

[HobbeBrain]

Yet Another One Of My Tiresome Comics

And the link, if it's not big enough to read:

http://img153.imageshack.us/img153/3489/al9000.jpg

This one's pretty long compared to the other two, I think it's a bit of a jumbled mess

Any feedback is appreciated ^_^

 

[D3m190d]

Re: Yet Another One Of My Tiresome Comics

**Necropost?**

Quite funny. The part where he needed 3 lemons was the best of it. =D
Of course, there's always room for improvement. Some of the humor was somewhat... Dry. it just, just didn't do it give me a 'good' laugh. More crazy stuff, like that of the three lemons! That's awesome!

You'll definitely get there, if you do it on a slightly regular basis.

 

[Gikoku]

Re: Yet Another One Of My Tiresome Comics

**Necropost?**

Nope, you're fine. Anything under 3 months is okay.

Nice comic by the way. ^_^

 

[HobbeBrain]

Re: Yet Another One Of My Tiresome Comics

Thanks Gikoku, and thanks for the constructive criticism D3m