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Avo and Skorm (My first FanFiction)

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TheRaven

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Avo and Skorm (My first FanFiction)

Hey, well before we get into the story let me just say that I love this site, and my only other post (in the introductions forum) was very warmly recieved and I was touched by that.

Avo and Skorm
Chapter 1: The Chapel of Skorm and The Temple of Avo.
Skorm lay in his eternal prison, waiting patiently for another Death to give him strength. He felt someone new in his Chapel of worship-a young soul, nervous, perhaps lost.
He heard the faint whisper of his voice:
"Oh- um hi... I'm kind of lsot, the Hero escorting me was bit by a balverine and said for me to go get help over here... but if you don't...", its-no HER- voice trailed off-the soul was that of a woman.
"Oh yes" rumbled the deep voice of Orl, the first follower of Skorm. "It was Reaper who sent you here wasn't it?"
"Been a naughty girl have we?" cackled Ven, the second follower of Skorm and a friend of Reaper himself.
"I-what!?" said the girl dumbfounded and quite flustered. How did they know-think she was "naughty"? She hadn't done anything wrong that they could know- she was perfectly law-abiding.
Then a strange thing began to happen. She started to float, over to a campsize-size fire in front of a black stone gargoyle.
"Skorms Insect Infestation seems quite fitting- espicially for this soul"
Skorm himself heard the screams, and savoured the burst of energy that a Soul passing through Skorm's Fire granted him.
Of course Skorm did not kill the persons sacrificed at his temple. They found themselves either at their destination or where they were to start they're journey through Darkwood, with seemingly fitting memories to prove this so. Skorm, even as strongly imprisoned as he was, was not without mental power.


Avo lay on his finest silk bed, graciously accepting a grape that appeared right in front of his mout, out of nothing. A huge burst of energy richoucheted throughout his body- someone had given a very genorous donation at his Temple of worship- Gladiator no doubt.
Why, that man couldn't keep his money away from his mighty self.
Avo chuckled and summoned a jester to keep him company with riddles-not too hard, Avo always had to win! Oh what Albion would do if they knew that he had hardly defeated Skorm, that it was a trick by which Avo had prevailed. He let out a hearty laugh. and what would they say if they knew that Avo, the mighty God himself, lived in the back of his very own Temple! Of course, a normal person may have gone amd all cooped up. But each gold donation only increased Avo's Experience in the Will and he had many people to live with, most of them entertainers.
He had all he ever wanted in his temple- unlimited anything. And where was Skorm? Locked up in a secret spiritual rift between Life and Death that physically resided in HIS Chapel- not in the wall or back of the Chapel but in the Black Stone Gargoyle behind Skorm's Fire! And he was trapped their for all eternity! Avo graciously smiled at his jester, even though he hadn't been listening.
 

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Excellent. I do not enjoy reading most fan fictions, but I decided to read your since you're such a nice guy.^_^

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Nice story, even though Avo and Skorm don't exist, but that's just a minor detail :lol: :thumbsup:...
 
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Arseface;84477 said:
Nice story, even though Avo and Skorm don't exist, but that's just a minor detail :lol: :thumbsup:...

What!? I can't have sacrificed so many bandits and mercs for nothing! Stupid oracle, wrecking my story...

droded;84467 said:
Excellent. I do not enjoy reading most fan fictions, but I decided to read your since you're such a nice guy.^_^

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Aw, thanks droded.
 

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nice i liked it
 
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I thought it was good. You going to do anymore. Maybe explain how Avo imprisoned Skorm inside the statue? That would be cool.
 
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that story keeps me thinking +rep for excellent story
 
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excellent +rep, but quick fact not ment to mess up the story or anything but a trader in need of moneymade two temple in to different location where will energy was strong, in witchwood good will energy was strong, and in darkwood evil will energy was strong, isn't the snowspire oaricle great.
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Arckon;89513 said:
excellent +rep, but quick fact not ment to mess up the story or anything but a trader in need of moneymade two temple in to different location where will energy was strong, in witchwood good will energy was strong, and in darkwood evil will energy was strong, isn't the snowspire oaricle great.
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Yeah but what if Avo and Skorm are just con-artists. It's great to imagine.
 
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Arckon

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Then I would probly go to Avo first and last I still want my soul
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fabler

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i liked it... it was weird how there is nothing behind temple of avo.... but their should be!
 
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Re: Avo and Skorm (My first FanFiction)

Hey everyone, sorry for being so long but I am continuing this story. I havent finsihed Chap. 1 yet (that was the prolouge) but here is a breif outline of what I will make clear:
The Great war between Avo withhis "Holy Warriors" and Skorm with his Daemons.
How Skorm was improsined
Where Avo is now and how he got there
The TRUE story of the apparent trader making these temples for money (those comments gave me an excellent idea! :) )
AND
A great cruel power arising- something stronger than Avo or Skorm!?

I will finish the chapter outlined above in a day or three and will post it then!
 
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Arseface;84477 said:
Nice story, even though Avo and Skorm don't exist, but that's just a minor detail :lol: :thumbsup:...
Ah, not nessecarily :cool: Some saw they're manifestations of the heroes that once were, others say their mere inspirations. Mixed opinions in the game.

Anyway, nice story! Blends well with the Fable 1 storyline, also. So, keep the chapters coming bro :lol:
 
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Re: Avo and Skorm (My first FanFiction)

Hey guys, its me the Raven (I am now theravenofskorm due to the fact my computer stuffed up and I lost pretty much everything-including my password!).

I will post some more of this story in a day or two. Have fun reading!
 
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Hey, here's the next chapter.

By the way, the first few chapters of this story are set all over the place, to create the backstory of the actual plot so try to keep up!

Just to clarify, in my timelin of this story, Fable/Fable:The Lost Chapters occured in...lets say 1200. The begging of this chapter is set six and a half hundread years beforehand, so 550.

The year 550.

And his wrath was felt.

All across Albion, Avo's terrible wrath was felt. Crops withered, children fell sick, buildings foundations weakened-the whole land felt his fury.
Skorm had betrayed him. His best and closest friend had betrayed him. His secret was broken and the paradox on which he took his strength was closed. Avo had lost his greatest secret to his greatest friend. And on that moment, Fate seemed to have woven a tangled skein through Skorm and Avo's life and history was truly created, in that moment Avo's hate for Skorm was born and in that moment the greatest rivilary between two Hero's was born.


13 years later- 563.

Skorm sat cross-legged overlooking the great town of Bowerstone from his hidden vantange point on the spire of a castle. 'This land is so beautiful' he though to himself 'How can anyone one to destroy it?'. That last musing was thought with the old touch of pain-he hat never gotten over Avo's hatred of him, and he knew that he still loved Avo. [For all you immature Fablers, I am reffering to the love one experiences in a FRIENDSHIP not...er...anything else]

However, how could he stand aside and let Avo wipe all the people of Albion out? He knew that Avo didn't at all wish the fair people of Albion Death, he wished only he, Skorm, Death. However, in his attempts to inflict Death upon he, Skorm, who knew how many people would be wiped out in the process? Skorm then decided that he needed to take public action...he would openly ask for the company of Avo tommorow and attempt to reason with him. He knew that he could not reason with Avo but he had to try, and he needed to stop Avo killing any lives unjustly.

And on tommorow it did happen. And I'll write about that soon. Within two days. I swear.
 
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TheRavenofSkorm;135833 said:
Hey guys, its me the Raven (I am now theravenofskorm due to the fact my computer stuffed up and I lost pretty much everything-including my password!).

I will post some more of this story in a day or two. Have fun reading!

there is an option during login to click if you have forgotten your password...
you're only meant to create one profile... =]
I'm sure one of the Admins could let you back into your original profile...
 
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Re: Avo and Skorm (My first FanFiction)

^I have a new email, lost the password for my old one so forgotten password doesn't work. I am not fussed however.

So what did you think of the story?
 
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TheRaven

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Re: Avo and Skorm (My first FanFiction)

Hey, I wrote to projectego and got my old account back. Hooray!!!

More on the fanfic later...I am actually thinking of doing a rewrite from scratch, let me know what you think!

-Samuel

EDIT: Yeah, I'm going to rewrite the entire story and post it...thanks everyone for your re-I mean help! :)
 
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