Vero's Grand Hall Of Poetry.

[Vero Caerso]

Vero's Grand Hall Of Poetry.

I just made this thread so people could post poetry if they wanted to, and also so that i could post my poetry rather than posting them in someone else's thread.

Screams of Pain.
You screamed as you slept,
You screamed as you walked,
You screamed everywhere you went because your pain is everlasting,
You cannot stop your pain because it was already took its tole,
You just wish you could turn back to the day this all began.

Thats just one at the moment, i'll be posting more later.

All comments are welcome ^_^

 

[Another Spartan]

Re: Vero's Grand Hall Of Poetry.

Thought I'd take a go, so
Vengeance.

The feeling of vengeance, is so sweet.
It's really amazing, can't be beat.
Of course when you take it, you do not fret,
Until that wondrous feeling, turns to regret.

Feel free to criticize greatly, as that was the first poem I've ever created.

 

[Vero Caerso]

Re: Vero's Grand Hall Of Poetry.

Your mask has been taken from you,
Your mask has revealed your true self,
Your true form has been showen to the people that you hid from all these years,
you cannot pretend to be the person you want to be.

 

[Another Spartan]

Re: Vero's Grand Hall Of Poetry.

Is this JOB or a poser?

I bite your hand,
it tastes grand.
I'm not a cannibal...
I sure hope so...
Eat your feet,
their a treat.
Please don't come here.
You don't want to.

 

[Phantom]

Re: Vero's Grand Hall Of Poetry.

Does everyone on these forums have Poetic Skills?
I'm a loner

 

[Vero Caerso]

Re: Vero's Grand Hall Of Poetry.

Wow spartan person that was so lame..
No offence but it was pure ****...


And what the hell? I have more poetry skills than you danton.

 

[Xeon]

Re: Vero's Grand Hall Of Poetry.

I lived in pain I died in vain
for I am evermore a.... sparrow

for the sparrow that is I..... I hate poetry

 

[Another Spartan]

Re: Vero's Grand Hall Of Poetry.

Wow spartan person that was so lame..
No offence but it was pure ****...


And what the hell? I have more poetry skills than you danton.

The point was for it to be stupid.

 

[Vero Caerso]

Re: Vero's Grand Hall Of Poetry.

Well you achieved it >__>

I just hate people when they rhyme >_< I dont know what i just dont like rhyming poems.

 

[Hexen_Harlot]

Re: Vero's Grand Hall Of Poetry.

Wow spartan person that was so lame..
No offence but it was pure ****...


And what the hell? I have more poetry skills than you danton.

Yours... wasn't that much better. Sorry, I really can't think of a nice way to say that.

 

[Phantom]

Re: Vero's Grand Hall Of Poetry.

Does everyone on these forums have Poetic Skills?
I'm a loner

What I meant there, Vero, Is that I'm a loner because I can't write poetry, and It seems that a lot of people on these forums can.

 

[Hexen_Harlot]

Re: Vero's Grand Hall Of Poetry.

I can only write good poetry in German lol

 

[Vero Caerso]

Re: Vero's Grand Hall Of Poetry.

AHAHA your so funny, not.

Go to a german site and do poetry maybe people will care.

Oh news people i have improved my skills amoungst the ones that i have done By the way "frat boy" who looks like a girl, those weren't even well thought poetry, just a 5 second thing.

 

[Cobalt Gamer]

Re: Vero's Grand Hall Of Poetry.

Poetry you say?

Empty sky
I lay staring up at an empty sky,
No stars, no moon, why oh why?
Where have they gone away?
I waited so eagerly during the day,
To look up at the stars all alone.
Thinking of you and the love I've shown.
The memories of our past,
they stay with me they''ll always last.
I turn to face an empty site,
All alone now, I shake with fright.
Your not in my life all the stars go away.
I long for you each pressing day.

You kept me going so many times before,
now I can't even make it out the door.
We talk all the time, with a smile on my face.
But you go to someone else for a warm embrace,
the hand which I once held
with another person, your hands do meld.

I lay alone staring at the empty sky,
The stars are gone alone I cry.
I stare into the sky and see your face,
I wish you would take me away from this place.
Back with you laying in my arms.
Your voice, my soul it calms.
Then the stars returned at once,
and the moon returned no more a dunce,
you lay beside me happy as could be.
I'm no longer alone, now I finally see.

AMADOINITRITE????

Oh and for the record vero, don't go making fun of members, we're a nice little community here, but that doesn't mean we don't bite. Your poetry is on the level of a four year old, whether it was done in 5 seconds or not.

 

[Psychosis]

Re: Vero's Grand Hall Of Poetry.

Vero, don't you think you're being a little bit rude? You said yourself that you made this thread for people to post some poetry. As soon as a couple of people write a few lines, you snap at them and start biting their heads off. I hope I don't insult you with what I'm about to say, but your poem wasn't exactly impressive.

 

[Firis]

Re: Vero's Grand Hall Of Poetry.

Well with poetry eating my insides trying to claw out:
I feel I gotta shout
I feel I gotta pout

I gotta secret, it's on the tip of my tongue and on the back of my lungs.
And I just cannot keep it, tell it scream it weep for it!
Living dead and alone no path to be shown.
I will squeal and scream 'till humanity squirms in wretched pain tearing you insane.
I said it before and I'll say it again, "If you think your alive then your better off dead!"
**** stains on the carpet from wear your mouth defecated your dirty words and lies
**** built up to my thighs, covered and smothered lovign and shoving in a sick cliche. (I think that is how you spell it, as in a social group "cliche" or is it "click")

Sorry... Was lsitening to Metalcore XD

 

[Vero Caerso]

Re: Vero's Grand Hall Of Poetry.

Time goes by with the words you say..
I get lost in your eyes as you look at me,
I wish i could have you but i dont want to try,
The last time i was with you i could have died,
Storms in the winter.. Showers in the snow..
could you come save me from this i dont know?

 

[Noctus]

Re: Vero's Grand Hall Of Poetry.

*Looks at thread*

Woah woah woah Vero, cool down. Different poetry means different things to different people, and just because it doesn't reach out to you doesn't make it lame. You shouldn't be so full of yourself, give people a chance.

These are the lyrics for a song I'm writing for my new album coming out next year called Rebirth. The song is called Storm.

Oh pathways of mist and monuments of old
Show me the secrets you've been condemned to hold
I die below the stripped, dead trees
And wait for this winter and this world to freeze...

Salvation will never come
The stars will shine no more
The storm is here...

Clouds of black, and world of white
Bereavest me of all things light
Soul of fire, and body of frost
Glance upon what we have all lost

Winds of rage, a blackened void
Look upon what you've destroyed!
Storm of ice, this world will die
Your rage has scarred the shattered sky


I look around and see no light
The world is dead, cold and white
The winds are dead on this shattered earth
Now we wait for humanities rebirth...

 

[Psychosis]

Re: Vero's Grand Hall Of Poetry.

That is brilliant DS, very chilling. Here's a quick song / poem that I put together last night whilst listening to Tarja Turunen's new un-released single on her upcoming album. I decided to name it 'The Sacrifice'.

You lift the curse
On the dark side of me
Under that spell
Lies a fate true and free

Your ending sorrow
My burning pain

This night of evil
Begins once again

Run while you can
The time is drawing near
My bleeding heart
Shall fill you all with fear

Once a good friend
To a world I knew well
A restless demon
In me begins to dwell

I've opened up now
No turning back

Dare to defy me
My heart fades to black

A part of me
Remains under this shell
Reach out your hand
Release me from this hell

Sacrifice made
One that is not in vain
My human form
Becomes your dreaded bane

Now I will be
Your burden forevermore
You saved my life
For that I'll be your whore

 

[Firis]

Re: Vero's Grand Hall Of Poetry.

In the glistening sun
Shining off your cheeks
Staring at that smile
Minutes feel like weeks


Tongues reach from the ground
Licking my eyes
Blinding them with lust
A feeling most profound

You take my hand
I lean in for a kiss
You return and we enter bliss
Autumn leaves fall on us
A warm orange worthy of love

Life so prosporous... All for us...