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A fatigued fighter.

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A fatigued fighter.

Ok im gona give this a shot and hope for the best...

There once lived a very noble man to look at him you whould think he couldnt even do basic maths but his mind was far more powerful than any ordinary man. some used to say he was a prophet as on day he claimed a womans child would be born blind and to everyones surprise it did.the man one day became sick and people questioned whats the matter with him he answered ''i am overcome with evil ,there is only one way to stop it for not only i am sick right now but there is also...... and the man died.

9 months later ..

The noble mans wife had a child the child was born with abnormalites such as immense upper body strength,his body was ripped and toned like a true warriors this was truly a great sign from avo.....to be continued..

ok i will continue this if you think its good ill edit it up a bit put names in dates etc but it will have a good ending hence the title but need feedback and idaes of what peopl want so let me know....
 
Re: A fatigued fighter.

Wow, I am looking forward to reading the rest! ^_^+Rep
 
Re: A fatigued fighter.

realy cool ill work on it any thing you want to see let me kno im all ears...

well not literaly but know..
 
Re: A fatigued fighter.

good i got lots of ideas in my head but had to get them out in brief so no one beat me to it...
 
Re: A fatigued fighter.

Wow really nice!!!! +rep cant wait for more.
 
Re: A fatigued fighter.

I reckon as a kid he should be like a gentle giant of sorts..
 
Re: A fatigued fighter.

ill take it into consideration and thanks vegeta mate ant suggestions..

any suggestions*