An old lady and young woman

[MazeisMaze]

There was once a train station
Filled with long forgotten dreams
Filled with long forgotten souls

There was once an old lady sitting at the train station
With long forgotten memories
Of her past and her dreams
She once wanted to be a pilot
But never had time
And never could pull herself up

There was once a young woman
Who still wanted to be a pilot
She saw the old lady sitting
She felt sorry
She come over to her
Past the ocean of cigarettes

The old lady looked up
And saw the young lady handing her something

It was a ticket

"want to travel with me?" said the young woman
"why, stranger" said the old lady
"Once I met someone who said that if you wait things might come to you"

The two went to Spain and Australia.
They developed a bond
An old forgotten bond of a Mother and her Child

 

[This is my Albion]

This really sounds like a setting for a final scene of a black and white film.

 

[MazeisMaze]

I kinda felt like I didn't get the real "feeling" in the end

 

[This is my Albion]

If i had to be honest, its not your best one....
It was a tad shallow compared to your other poems but i enjoyed it nonetheless. Works well as a scene for a story though

 

[MazeisMaze]

ya, I agree. maybe next time I could go deeper in thought.

 

[Daniel Ray]

You're a poetic chicken!!!! AHHHHHH!!!!!

Still, love the story in this one. You continue to prove yourself as ProjectEgo's Poet!

 

[Gikoku]

Saw the title and I was expecting something kinky, when I got towards the end I sure enough thought it was going that way... and then it didn't.


Still, not bad.

 

[MazeisMaze]

Saw the title and I was expecting something kinky, when I got towards the end I sure enough thought it was going that way... and then it didn't.


Still, not bad.

Of course you were expecting that