apprenticeship

[Skorm's Son]

Re: apprenticeship

Some people think I'm rude
but actually I'm just crude
Someone once told me
"Don't step on the grass"
so I did......and they kicked my ass
Yeah I know that this poem sucks
but on ebAy I could probably get
a couple of bucks $$$$$$$$

 

[Arckon]

Re: apprenticeship

And as the young Dr fell,
he ran and ran, with a face of red
ya he ran to hide under his bed.
If he comes back with another bash
it tis he I will smash
and send to hell!!!!

 

[blu phoenix]

Re: apprenticeship

i am no poet
because i can't think of anything to rhyme with poet...boo hoo...

 

[Skorm's Son]

Re: apprenticeship

You know it

 

[blu phoenix]

Re: apprenticeship

You know it

 

[DrZoid]

Re: apprenticeship

...your all losers.

 

[blu phoenix]

Re: apprenticeship

...your all losers.

that's rich! and mean too..:realmad:

 

[DrZoid]

Re: apprenticeship

Losers indeed are all of you,
You can all rot and die till you stink of poo,
Try and smite me with childish goodbyes,
But in the end I'll laugh when you die.


Moving on from that childish verse,
Here I can tell you: you were never first.
Instead your the last,
A real big loser..
Now and in the past,
So time to be a boozer.

As for blu phoenix...
Taking sides with this sh*t,
Was stupid like V-Necks,
Cos this next little bit,
Is reserved for you,
To insult and degrade,
And say you smell like poo.

Aaaaaand I'm sick of rhyming now.
So don;t have a cow.

 

[blu phoenix]

Re: apprenticeship

Losers indeed are all of you,
You can all rot and die till you stink of poo,
Try and smite me with childish goodbyes,
But in the end I'll laugh when you die.


Moving on from that childish verse,
Here I can tell you: you were never first.
Instead your the last,
A real big loser..
Now and in the past,
So time to be a boozer.

As for blu phoenix...
Taking sides with this sh*t,
Was stupid like V-Necks,
Cos this next little bit,
Is reserved for you,
To insult and degrade,
And say you smell like poo.

Aaaaaand I'm sick of rhyming now.
So don;t have a cow.

nice poem there zoid...meanie!!:devil::noexpression::'(

 

[DrZoid]

Re: apprenticeship

Was only meant as a joke.

 

[SorenSwift]

Re: apprenticeship

Soren try if you dare
but all you will achieve is a gruesome scare
ending with fishing your body out of the lake
after being battered to death with my rake!

While Drakan sings his crappy song.
I sneak up behind his giant fat head.
And set loose upon him the mighty King Kong.
After this poem Drakan might close the thread.
But thats alright cause i've got his head!
Apprenticeship of arckon is mine
Autographs I shalll soon sign.

( )

 

[blu phoenix]

Re: apprenticeship

While Drakan sings his crappy song.
I sneak up behind his giant fat head.
And set loose upon him the mighty King Kong.
After this poem Drakan might close the thread.
But thats alright cause i've got his head!
Apprenticeship of arckon is mine
Autographs I will soon sign.

( )

nice poem there soren! :thumbsup:

 

[SorenSwift]

Re: apprenticeship

Thank you blu pheonix
For complimenting my poem
It was try number 6
I might write a tome.

 

[blu phoenix]

Re: apprenticeship

Thank you blu pheonix
For complimenting my poem
It was try number 366
I will have it written in a tome.

wow! some great poems here soren

and i know i am not rhyming....

 

[SorenSwift]

Re: apprenticeship

Rhymings not that hard.
Embrace your inner bard.
You can do it blu.
To yourself just be true.

 

[blu phoenix]

Re: apprenticeship

i am not really a good bard
my poems are like lard
but hell i give it a try
and then say bye-bye
to blu the lamest poet on earth!!

 

[SorenSwift]

Re: apprenticeship

Incredible, Hidden talent revealed!
Blue phoenix your fate has been sealed.
You must become a great poet.
That was a great poem and you know it.

 

[DrZoid]

Re: apprenticeship

Yeah sure why not,
We secretly know that poem was rot.

Kinda like this one,
So i'll stop writing now,
I can't rhyme this line,
So this poem won't shine.


Well that was probably the worst poem I've ever atemtped to write lol.

 

[Arckon]

Re: apprenticeship

I have chosen.

One who ryhmes so well
Such as the Dr.
Cannot be my apprentice
So down you go to hell.

Soren you have much talent in you
But you do not ryhme with you heart.
You ryhme with your brain.
And If you ask me your brain is rather tart.

Draken you ryhme well
but ummmmm no
go back to Bevivel

Blu you need to be my apprentice the most
no offence but some of your poems are crunchy,
sorta like toast.

To be my apprentice I choose.... blu
because I find all of her poems true.
True from her heart not her head.
Blu Phoenix you can choose to follow the path up ahead.

If she chooses no,
I will take no apprentice for another day
So Blu Phoenix what do you say?

 

[blu phoenix]

Re: apprenticeship

you all are bards
because your poems are not lard
but my fate has been sealed
like soren once revealed.