Darkness

[TheJJMax]

Darkness

When I turn off the light, I see Him. When the light is on, He isn't there.
When I'm alone, He is there to comfort me. When I'm with people, He sits in the shadows.
When I am sad, He takes me to a different world. When I am happy, He waits in the Darkness.

What do you guys think?

 

[Vero Caerso]

Re: Darkness

Wow ummmm.. Diffrent i must say from the ones that i write.

Very good though, very deep etc etc.

Keep up the good work ^^

 

[Zarkes]

Re: Darkness

sounds like evil to me

 

[TheJJMax]

Re: Darkness

Wow ummmm.. Diffrent i must say from the ones that i write.

Very good though, very deep etc etc.

Keep up the good work ^^

Do I get teh +rep?

sounds like evil to me

Evil ftw, you know.

 

[ScareCrowReturn]

Re: Darkness

Did you REALLY make this? ... If so, Very good.

 

[The Guardian Angle]

Re: Darkness

Nice!
It made me turn to check behind me a good 3 times...just incase.

 

[Xeon]

Re: Darkness

Is this a gay poem about satan

 

[TheJJMax]

Re: Darkness

Is this a gay poem about satan

NO!

Nice!
It made me turn to check behind me a good 3 times...just incase.

Heh... heh... heh..,

Did you REALLY make this? ... If so, Very good.

Yes.