Drowning in Acid

[Relinquished Reality]

Drowning in Acid

Gee, With a bit of experimenting, I made this! Idk what to think.. any suggestions?
Comments?
Kind of brutal in my opinion..

In other news... I started a DeviantART. Support is appreciated
Here is a link to my page. Not much on it at this moment, this 17th or May, at 9:12...
I will upload more in the future tho.

 

[zDominik]

Re: Drowning in Acid

Now I like this,except the black blank part in the middle,but I dont know what you should put in there,sorry,cant really give you any better advice...

 

[Evan]

Re: Drowning in Acid

You could have the head of the evilist of all skeletons in the middle, which green smoke type effects being relinquished from the skull.

And the "D" in your name looks faded enough that you don't know it's a "D", so I'd suggest just giving that a quick fixer-upper.

 

[SORAYISS]

Re: Drowning in Acid

JESUS it hurts just looking at it.

 

[cheezMcNASTY]

Re: Drowning in Acid

looks a little dark for my tastes. but those are just that, my tastes.

my only problem is the dimensions seem a little awkward. for a picture that has so much horizontal emphasis (skeletons going left-right, text going left-right) the picture feels a little too "tall".

there's my 2 cents, take it or leave. nice work regardless!

 

[zDominik]

Re: Drowning in Acid

JESUS it hurts just looking at it.

Very constructive:ermm:

 

[Relinquished Reality]

Re: Drowning in Acid

Thanks. I knew the D was a bit screwed up. Paint.Net was acting up anyways.

 

[Sean]

Re: Drowning in Acid

That's pretty good bro.

 

[Zjuggernaut]

Re: Drowning in Acid

It's nice.. Just a bottom is plain.

Which has been mentioned. Maybe just take that bit out? Make it transparent?