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Fable 4, Return of Magic, Very, very long.

BenBalverineSlayer

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Fable 4,

The return of magic to the world,

200 years in the future, as of the end of Fable 3, a new family has been ruling the
joint-countries of Albion and Aurora, with Samarkand as a trading partner, the bloodline of the Archons has been diluted with the breeding on non Heroes, and have been needed less and less over the years as the magical creatures of the world have been going into hiding and being hunted to exstinction. Do the bloodline gave up the ruling of the kingdom and over the years they have just been adventuring and doing mercenary work, etc. Guns are a very common weapon by now. ( I myself hate the addition of guns but it must have sense of realism with the evolution of the world, don't worry, as you may have read this is "Fable 4, The return of magic to the world,"

Pirates sail the seas, the main city of Aurora has been transformed into an enormous sandstone city, spanning miles along the coast and sandstone cliffs, ships are constantly coming to port bringing in building materials and ships are constantly leaving taking out gems and oil found in Aurora. Bowerstone has become one of the richest cities in the world, there is hardly any poverty, bower lake has been enveloped by the city and become a park.

Swords are still common, I'm not saying we're like modern now, not at all, infact not much more advanced than Fable 3 in terms of technology.

The Gypsies are many, and have created a permenant city in the forests near Bowerstone, though nobody permenantly lives there, people constantly come and go in their caravans, and houses and tents are taking by anyone. the poor usually stay here and enjoy the hospitality of the gypsies.

so, you're character is the descendant of the Hero of Oakvale ( The Greatest of all Heroes possibly ) and the blood of his/her ancestors is being diluted generation by generation with the constant mixing of non hero blood. Your Hero however knows this, and has been searching for a way to reawaken the power of the blood and restore the bloodline. You have been searching for years and collect several notes written by someone only called "the Archaeologist" and clues as to where he died, you take all the notes and try to find out by searching around, asking around, and following the notes on where he said he might go next in order to find his final resting place.

You find a small, multi-room home dug and carved into the side of a cliff on a mountain, its filled with shelves of notes and objects. His body is nothing but skeletal remains under the sheets on a bed, with a piece of charcoal in one hand, and his open journal in the other. In his journal is everything about his life and his studying of the bloodline, the focus sites, the Heroes, the Old Kingdom, The Septimal Key, everything!

He wrote that he found the location of The Septimal Key, but that he was dying and couldn't find it himself. You follow his instructions to the old Heroes Guild, where you go through several secret passage-ways and halls that had been untouched by time, far below in the Guild. You find the Septimal Key on a Pedestal in a room filled with Old Kingdom and bloodline arifacts.

When you touch the Septimal Key, the souls of all your past ancestors flow into your body and you are thrown back and levitate in the air while the same green glow that gave power to the Hero of Oakvale envelopes you. You have visions of Jack of Blades, all of your ancestors, and you experience the battle between Jack of Blades and William Black through Black's perspective.

Theresa appears, angry at you, telling you that you should have let the world take its course. The walls begin to crumble and you grab a glowing, but plain looking sword from the wall and run out of the chamber. The walls begin to pulse, as if a newborn heartbeat, but you hear dark evil laughter, and the voice of Jack of Blades, thanking you, and stating the has been reborn in a more terrible form than ever been. his power is weak however, as he has only just come back into the world, and it will take much time for him to be at his full power. You are attacked by Jacks minions as the heartbeat gets stronger and the Guild falls apart completely.

As you finally reach the surface you notice that the sky has gone a dark red. There is a large pulse and a deafening noise. As you run off away from the guild, you hear screams and see a village being attacked by Balverines, and for the first time in 200 years, White Balverines. Their eyes glow a bright red, as if suddenly filled with rage. You feel empowered after touching the Septimal Key and hear Theresa's voice in your head, and she tells you what youve done and teaches you about new Will Powers you have unlocked. The Archon could change the world itself with Will, The Hero of Oakvale was a master of Will, and neared the power of the Archon. The Hero of Bowerstone had far less magical power, and never really achieved the amount of power as the Hero of Oakvale. Even worse, the Hero of Brightwall couldn't even use magic without the assistance of magical gauntlets.

Theresa teaches you how to use some basic Will abilities and you save the village with the use of them. As the Balverines retreat you hear loud, strange magical sounds in the surrounding forest, and feel like the world has changed somehow. You find out that Bowerstone was also attacked, and that creatures that have been exstinct for hundreds or thousands of years have been attacking all over Albion. Unknown to all at this moment, hundreds of citizens around the world have also been altered by this event, and the Hero blood in their diluted bloodlines have been unlocked aswell. The Archon's bloodline was just a very powerful family, all other Heroes had their own family bloodlines, but they all died out or were simply diluted to nothing over the centuries.

Aurora has been attacked by several kraken along the coast, and the old Necropolis ghost city has all of a sudden begun to glow and eerie green, ghosts, and many other manner of ancient icy beasts have been lurking and attacking villages. The Oracle, reawakened after centuries asleep, and has led to thousands making the pilgrimage to the Oracle to ask questions from across the world.

Witchwood, which had been rid of Balverines for more than 60 years, all of a sudden was assaulted by giant white Balverines, who had transformed the old Witchwood Arena into a giant Balverine den. Knothole Glade, which had been re-inhabited and expanded after the original inhabitants left to Knothole Island, is constantly under siege, they have fortified their city to protect against Balverines, and almost every civilian is equipped with a Silver ammunition Shotgun.

The walls are taller than the trees, and extremely thick, all sides of it covered in scratches from Balverines trying to claw their way in. The ruins of the old Temple of Avo have created a protective ring, filled with beautiful ponds and trees. Balverines are harmed when trying to enter this Safehaven, some small villages have been built inside this ring for obvious reasons.

Dragons are spotted in the mountains of Albion, and giants Sandsnakes are rumored to be swallowing entire caravans in Aurora. All magical creatures seem to have multiplied and become more aggressive. Cullis gates have activated all over the world, sending off blue flares into the sky upon coming into proximity with a Hero.

So anyway, after fighting the Balverines Theresa notes something about your weapon, here there will be some different lines depending on how you fought the balverines. Slow attacks, make the blade more like a cleaver, make it thicker, etc. Fast attacks, make the blade thinner, sharper, lonegr, etc. and each Balverine killed gives the blade a more and more Silver look, Balverines claws, teeth and bones attached to it by string, fur used as decoration, etc. She will realise it is the sword of their ancestor, the Hero of Brightwall.

The sword can either be left in ever-changing mode, where depending on everything you do, the sword will change. The more magic you use, it will become more of a short-sword, with glowing blue runes, but if you also use it for killing Balverines aswell, it will have the traits of both magic user, and Balverine slayer, then you can lock and save that state. So you can start a blank state and start forging a new specialized weapon for killing say Kraken, or you can switch to the Magic/Balverine Slayer state when you are facing Balverine. So eventually you will have a different state which is the BEST possible weapon against the creature in question.

Onto magic, like Fable TLC, there are Evil, and Good oriented spells. and the more you use each will effect the appearance of your Hero. Evil magic gives you Red Will lines, eventually your hands will always be glowing and crackling with red lightning. Evil Magic gives Blue Will lines, white, longer hair, ( no wrinkles though >:C)

Bring back experience Orbs how they used to be, I think the best version was the Fable TLC, although Fable 2 was okay, I really didn't like the giant coloured bubbles that popped off enemies when you hit them. They broke my precious, precious immersion. The regular, bright, green, general experienceo orbs worked just fine. With the other special skills simply going up by using them. That made sense.

Each spell, or skill you buy with experience points in any of the three Hero attributes, increases your overall power in that tree, and allows you to unlock side skills and further up abilities.

Now, armour. Armour is something that lately I've been disappointed by in the Fable series. craftable armour needs to make its way into the Fable franchise. Creatures need to drop loot, because, we all love loot. But don't make it one of the main focuses of the game, Fable still needs to be unique. Try and handle it kinda like Mass Effect, or just go back to the system used in Fable 1. But the amount of loot needs to increase. Kill a Balverine, take its hide, craft the hide into Balverine skin armour, and using various materials like metal bars, leather plates, etc. You can craft spikes of different shapes and textures, plates which you can arrange into your own armour style over the basic armour you're creating. place the spikes on some metal plates you crafted and place it on the shoulder as a shoulder pad. Then hit the craft button, and wear it right there.

Armour can be enchanted, and there is a corresponding rune for each enchantment, the rune is then placed wherever you wan on the piece and it is given those effects.

You shoulb be able to dismantle already made sets of armour and use the pieces on another set. Then save that set once you've got the look you want and name it.

Now, onto something I think could be really cool.

The Archaeologists home is filled with documents and codexes, and his journal gives clues to locations of Silver keys, Demon doors, Cullis gates, and various other magical Old Kingdom locations which should be unmapped, and ready for the Hero to explore, following the Archaeologists clues and notes. None of them give an exact location, but speculation about where you would be able to find them. The Journal can be opened at any time and turned to any page to read up on a certain Demon door, or powerful weapon, or Silver key that you're hunting.

The scaling of creatures difficulty can be explained as the creatures of Albion slowing growing in power after the "Rebirth" triggered by your Hero. Speaking of Heroes...

Slowly as the story goes on, several individuals begin discovering their own Will abilities, or extreme stregnth. or skill. The hundreds of Hero bloodlines that had survided, but had slowly been diluted have been reawakened, along with the rest of magic itself. You are urged by Theresa to found a new Heroes guild in order to combat the growing threat of Jack returning to full power. hunting down new Heroes, helping them control and hone their power, raising enough money and getting enough power to rebuild the Heroes Guild. hiring instructors, Hero and non-hero, paying for expansions, WRITING quest cards as Guildmaster, sending apprentices on missions, leading hiring ranking missions yourself, building up your fellow Heroes skills and individual specialties.

instead of the world being seperated into zone upon zone, why not have each split up into four major zones, as opposed to one huge open world, or 20 different mini zones.
Cities having their own zones, aswell as some large towns, caves, ruins, mountains, etc.

Blueprints for different houses can be bought from Architects, and the documents for materials can be bought from traders. Each village, or city has its own style of building, and so blueprints for each type can be bought at their respective city, and built on any open ground. To place you home, you activate the blueprint in your inventory, and then a ghostly outline of the house will show infront of you, wherever you place it, the trees and stones will be cleared, ground smoothed out, etc. after you place it you must wait several days before the house is completed. Upon completion a Cullis gate will be built and activated in the main entrance.

Theresa tells you to meet her in the ruins of Oakvale, the swamps and darkness of Wraithmarsh, caused by the Shadow Court had subsided, as with the return of Jack, they left to help him restore his rule. The ruins of Oakvale and the Wraithmarsh instantly was transformed into an overgrown forest, green and full of magical animals and creatures. Ocassionally ghosts roam the overgrown ruins. You meet Theresa in the centre of Oakvale, you sit with her on an old bench infront of the massive Oak tree in the village square. She explains who Jack of Blades is, and the lives of William Black and the Hero of Oakvale. Being the first Hero of The Bloodline to face the threat of Jack in more than 700 years, you are the only one who has the power to defeat him again.

She explains that when you touched the Septimal Key, it caused a rebirth of the bloodline, and all things magic. A Hero of the bloodline had not had that amount of potential power since the Hero of Oakvale. Theresa tasks you with finding several artifacts of the bloodline before Jack does, in order to build up power and eventually fight him back with the rebuilt Guild of Heroes. Scythe arrives, old and weary, even more of a shell than he was at the time of Jack's original return. he explains who he is but it cut off by the arrival of Jack of Blades. you fend off shadow minions and the members of the Shadow Court, killing one before Theresa decides that they should all escape. Scythe blasts Jack with a massive Will surge, and destoys several minions with his scythe while they all escape into the forest.

The forest begins to burn, dark shadows and minions surge forward after the trio. You escape with Scythe while Theresa splits off from you and instructs you to meet her at the Archaeologists old house. You and Scythe eventually reach safety, and he tells you his home is not far. Along the way he explains his role in all of this, and who he really is. Upon arriving at his home he teaches you about the Bloodline, and unlocked untapped potential, like The Hero of Oakvale's mother did to him.

Scythe and Theresa are your advisors throughout the game, each with different opinions on each morality, and each choice you make. Though neither of them are evil or good.

Quests are divided in to Gold, Silver and Bronze.

Gold quests are the main storyline quests, and quests that involve finding bloodline relics to increase your power.
Silver quests are main side quests, quests that improve the guild, guild missions, and side missions assigned by Scythe or Theresa.
Bronze quests are small, short quests, such as killing a den of Balverines, clearing out caves, etc.

Creature spawn rates will be effected by the amount of a certain creature you kill. If you decide to quell the Knothole Glade Balverine siege, you can run through the zone hunting down every Balverine, so when you re-enter the zone, the amount that spawn will decrease, the more you kill, the less spawn. if you leave Knothole Glade alone for a few days, the population of Balverine will increase naturally. To dramatically reduce the amount of Balverine, you must kill the Balvorne Broodmother which has made its den in the Witchwood Arena.

This will be a Silver quest given to you by the Mayor of Knothole Glade, if you take this quest early on, you go in with the help of some local hunters. But large silver quests can also be put up on the map table in the Guild after you've rebuilt it. Heroes and apprentices who walk around the Guild will check the map table every day and apply for quests that match their skills or power level. After a certain time, the applications are closed for that quest and the Heroes that YOU choose accompany you on the Quest along with the hunters. Each Hero should have dynamic dialogue for each possible combination of situations with different Heroes, quests, etc. So that you actually get a feeling that you're getting to know your fellow Heroes.

I still have a ton of stuff in my head, so part 2 will be coming soon.
 
I think they're great ideas, looks like it would have taken a while.
I'm not going to say I agree with everything, because I don't, though I thought it was an entertaining list of ideas.
Unfortunately, it is likely none of that will ever be developed into the game, seeing as Lionhead has the forward tendency to "Appeal to a larger audience"...
Larger Audience = Less players...
Who knows though, I may be wrong, and I think you should keep writing.
-Again- Who knows, maybe a Lionhead developer might drop in on us in the old Fable forum.
Anyway, I liked it, made a comment, so... Peace out...
 
-Cracks fingers-

Okay, part two coming up, thanks for the comments, hoping this might get noticed if enough people who like it spread it around. Go ahead and post your own suggestions, feedback, changes that you don't agree with me on, etc.

When you arrive at the Archaeologist's cave you find Theresa has set herself up there, stating that they will need a base of operations while they hunt down the artifacts. She has taken the time that you've been travelling to her to look through the Archaeologist's notes herself, and says that you need to find an object of great importance to Heroes, a Guild seal. The last known disappeared with the Hero of Brightwall, and so Theresa found an alternative. To explore the ancient ruins of a Smarkand based Heroes guild, she says an old friend of the bloodline who she has had dealings with before is also there. and that they will help you once they discover your identity. She also found out that the Archaeologist fled there on his was to the Western lands after his part in helping with the defeat of Jack, but returned to compile his life works, and everything he knew. (That is actually canon that he fled to the Western lands after the events of Fable) So she says to keep and eye out for evidence of him being there.

You sail to Samarkand and ask around the villages, and search the archaeologist's notes for the location of the ruins of the Guild. You finally discover the location and enter the ruins, inside is Garth, the powerful Will user who aided the Hero of Bowerstone in defeating Lucien. After the events of Fable 2, he travelled to Samarkand as a sort of retirement, his strong bloodline and will power allowed him to stay alive for the roughly 200 years inbetween Fable 2 and Fable 4. When the Hero triggered the "Rebirth" he was empowered aswell, and searched for the cause of the strange phenomenon, coming to the conclusion that if any evidence were to be found, it would be in the archives of the old Samarkand Branch of the Guild of Heroes.

With the help of Garth you make your way through the ruins to the Guildmaster's quarters, where you find the remains of Zuna Daichi, the owner of The Daichi Katana, and Guildmaster of the Samarkand Heroes Guild. On her body is her guild seal, upon touching it, the soul of Zuna Daichi flows into the body of your hero, Garth recognizes you as one of the Archon's bloodline, and pledges loyalty to you. In return you grant him the title of Guildmaster of the Samarkand Heroes Guild, and leave him in charge of rebuilding that Chapter.

When you return to Theresa, you find Scythe waiting with her aswell, he talks for a short time and says that although the Rebirth restored some of his power, he is nothing of what he used to be, and takes an instructing position at the Guild instead of taking a more direct place in the fight against Jack.

Speaking of Jack, after spending some time improving the guild, one day while arriving at the guild, the sky turns the same red it did on the Day of Rebirth (as its being called) and the voice of Jack is heard in every Heroes head, all the apprentices and students, Hero-blood teachers, clench their ears as he booms through their head. "Your reckoning is coming, little Heroes, flee for your lives! abandon your posts! ahahaha! the final destruction of your kind has been far too long overdue! When that ANCESTOR of yours destroyed me I thought I should never return! Until YOU, came along newblood. Thats riiight little Heroes, your fearless-leader is the reason I've returned, when he/she just couldn't stand her loss of power. Greedily searching for a way to bring back her lineage's strength. Ahahahahaha, this world will burn as it did before. but none of you will live to see it..." Everyone in the Guilds went silent, those around the Hero stared, startled at what they had just heard. Theresa communicates with you "Hero I think you should return to the Archaeologist's Cave, I'm assuming you heard that? We must speak at once" Theresa talks to you very urgently, that she feels Jack is about to attack. Scythe tells you about the possibilty of another powerful Hero relic in the mountains of Albion, The Twin Blades of Holdr, Commander of the Dragon Knights. Garth teleports in and rushes towards you yelling "They're attacking the Guild in Albion! The Knight of Blades is leading and army of Dark minions and shadows!"

You arrive at the guild to see a giant Black armoured knight bearing one of the masks on Jack's chest belt. He smashes one of the towers of the Guild with a giant Greatsword made of shadow and black steel. You run through the guild fighting off shadows, hobbes, wraiths, and minions dodging the Knight of Blade's giant sword. You eventually fight him until he melts into shadow and flows away to escape. You run through all the injured Heroes, dying minions being executed by Instructors, and rubble over to Scythe, Theresa and your top 3 most powerful Heroes who you have been on the most Guild missions with. Everyone agrees that they should go after the Twin Blades before Jack attacks again in force, you take your 3 top Heroes and Scythe to the Eastern mountains of Albion, to hunt for the blades, while Theresa stays with everyone at the guild to defend against the Minions that Jack was constantly sending in.

You, Scythe, and the Heroes ride Horses through the minions and off the Guild grounds, towards the mountains, along the road Scythe gives more backstory about Holdr, the Dragon Knights, and his Twin Blades, which were lit with Dragon's fire. you make you way up the mountain, facing rock trolls, another creature that was hunted to extinction before the Rebirth, and Dragonlings, a created that hadn't been seen since Jack of Blades took the form of a Dragon at the time of his return. as you reach the top and look down into the valley of the unexplored eastern lands, you see a huge nesting area for dragons, spanning the land for miles. Giant spires, with Dragon dens carved into the side dotting the rocky landscape. Cracks in the ground leading to lava pools and underground caves. The land had been completely scorched by Dragon's fire, the cracking ground constantly falling apart into the lava lakes below. An immense black cloud loomed over the entire, broken land, red lightning filled the cloud, always the sound of thunder was heard to some degree. Ruins of massive cities, advanced skyscrapers in the style of the Spire could be seen crumbling away into ash and dust.
Blue glow still eminating from them, as if the last of their Will force was crumbling away with the building.

Nearby is a tomb, which Scythe says is the tomb of Holdr, when he died and was entombed at the old Heroes guild, after a time the spirit of Holdr spoke to the Hero of Oakvale, and made the request that his remains be moved to his place of birth, in the mountains of the Eastern lands. He agreeds and had a tomb built to guard his body.

Scythe leads on, rushing to the Tomb, avoiding overhead Dragons. You enter the tomb, make your way through several puzzles and fighting the ghosts of Dragon Knights, whose bodies were moved there to be with their Commander. Eventually reaching his chamber, you find the same Sarchophagus from the Old Guild of Heroes, and slide off the lid, inside is the skeleton of Holdr, covered in a full set of Armour, and weilding his Blade, pressed against his chest.

The helm is shaped like a Dragon's head, gives protection against fire and grants a special Fire Breath spell. The Chestplate has large spiked pauldrons and gives protection from fire. The gloves are shaped like Dragon claws and give protection from fire. The boot have spiked wings on them and give protection from fire, and also allow Lava Walking.

The blade's hilts are shapped like Dragon's heads, and the blades are in the shape of Flames, covered in Flaming runes meaning "Holdr, Dragon of the Eastern Flame" When Equipped they light with Dragon's Fire, burning all enemies.

The moment the Hero touches the Blades, the soul of Holdr flows out of them into your body. You and the Heroes notice the sets of Dragon Knight Armour and Solus Greatswords on the walls, and you decide to revive the Dragon Knights, starting with yourself and the three most powerful Heroes in the Guild. From now on they hold the title "Dragon Knight" and now that the Eastern lands have been unlocked, they will be very useful in Silver quests that take place in this zone fighting Dragons. They will now always wear sets of Dragon Knight armour and weild Solus Greatswords like the Dragon Knights of old.

Now that all the old threats of the world are returning, the old Orders that were in place to defend against them are returning aswell. The Heroes with the return of Jack of Blades, the Dragon Knights with the return of the Dragons, etc.

Scythe then declares that the best next course of action would be to speak to the Oracle in Snowspire far in the Northern wastes. The only way to reach the Northern wastes is by cullis gate, the only one that leads directly to it is on Hook Coast. Over the 700 years from the first game, Hook coast has been enveloped in ice and snow, a huge glacier formed overtop of the town, and the lighthouse crumbled and fell long ago.
After making it through the ice caves and over the icy tundras of the ruins of Hook Coast, you find the Cullis gate, protected from ice and rubble in a Will bubble. a defense mechanism placed in all cullis gates to keep them from being destroyed.

You and Scythe go through the Cullis gate, teleporting to the Lost Bay up to your waists in snow. Slowly trudging through the blizzard it becomes so blinding that you and he get seperated. You begin to feel the cold, starting to black out you hear soft, ghostly voices as you fall face first into the snow.

You awaken hanging from the ceiling of a large room in the ruins of an empty, ghost city. The walls eerily glow a pale green, and moans can be heard coming from back alleys all across the city. A ghostly woman floats up to you and welcomes you to the Necropolis, city of the broken hearted. The Ghosts of the city died so quickly that they don't even remember dying, and go about their undeath in constant hunger, confusion, and fear. She lets you down and tells you that she will help lead you out of the city. You cut your way through mindless, terrified mobs and seas of ghosts, through empty town squares, across broken bridges, through Balverine dens. Eventually coming to the city gates. The ghostly woman sadly says goodbye, but asks that you bring her something from the cities of the living if they ever return.

You make your way out of the Necropolis and through the snowy pine forests to Snowspire, the main level of the city is where the original town was built, but over the years the city needed to expand, and so they built onto and into the side of the Cliffs and rocks surrounding the Oracle, who, after Jack was originally defeated, eventually simply ran out of Will, and became part of the cliffside. When the Rebirth occured the Oracle was reawoken, and the giant three faced behemoth breathed for the first time in centures, shaking the cliffs and destroying several homes in rock slides.

The upper city is where the Mayor's homes, and Museum of the Archon have been built. The museum was begun by Scythe, who had originally had it built in the lower city, some time after the defeat of Jack.

You run up the stairs to the Oracle, and see Scythe exiting a large, thick, fur tent he set up beside the Oracle.

Aaaaand now I'm off to write Part 3
 
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Pt 3

I know I haven't said anything about Aurora yet because, honestly, I forgot about it. only thing interesting there was the Crawler, who didn't make any sense and was totally tacked on anyway. So Aurora can just pop out of existence for all I care. Maybe I'll write something about some main quest that I could squish in earlier on to cover Aurora. But for now I'ma just leave it unless people request that I write something for it.

ANYWAY, back to Fable 4...

Scythe says that the Oracle refused to tell him anything until you arrived, for it wouldn't matter until the Hero knew. they tell you of the sword of Aeons, and Avo's Tear, and that one must be used in order to even stand a chance against Jack. The Sword of Aeons is in the posession of Jack himself, after he was destroyed and banished back into the Shadow world, there was waiting the Sword, after the Hero of Oakvale banished it into the void. He reclaimed the Sword, but had no way of returning to the mortal world. When you triggered the Rebirth and opened the way for him to return, he was reborn as a new, more powerful form of himself, though having only just come into the world, he was in an extremely weakened state, and still at this point in the game has only recovered a small amount of his power. Although he protects the sword with his life, he cannot weild it without having regained his power.

Avo's Tear was entombed with the Hero of Oakvale, in a sprawling undergound temple. Filled with powerful spirits, charged with guarding the Blade with riddles, puzzles, traps, and ghost soldiers.

Here you can decide to either go after The Sword of Aeons, or go after Avo's tear. Not going to go into full detail but you find out where Jack has set up a base, sneak in, steal sword and fight the Knight of Blades again, destroying part of Jack's base, killing the Knight of Blades with the Sword of Aeons, and absorbing his soul into the sword, increasing its power. If you go to the Tomb of the Hero of Oakvale, you eventually make your way through all the puzzles, past all the Ghosts, and find Avo's Tear in the Hands of your ancestor, who is wearing the full Archon Plate Armour from Fable: TLC.

Each piece of Armour grants increased damage with Will powers, and a 25% boost to all experience gained.

Avos' Tear does Extra damage to evil creatures, Regenerates your health by 4% every second while not in combat, and causes evil creatures to explode upon death.
The Sword of Aeons is the opposite, and instead of regenrating while not in combat, it regenerates 2% every second while in combat, and 3% every time you hit a good creature or NPC.

After retrieving Avo's tear, the Knight of Blades and a legion of Minions sent by Jack break through the wall and attack, sent to retrieve Avo's Tear before you did. You defeat and kill the Knight of Blades, banishing his soul to the void, increasing the sword's power. whichever you chose, you end up killing the Knight of Blades and stealing/banishing his soul, you then take the mask with you and place it on the wall in the Guild, leaving room for two more masks...

If you chose the Sword of Aeons, Jack retrieves Avo's tear successfully, corrupting it into a twisted shadow form like his own sword. If you retrieve Avo's tear, Jack will still hold the Sword of Aeons, and use it when he regains his power.
 
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I would be writing everything, because I do literally have EVERYTHING in my head, about the puzzles in HoOV tomb, the way Jack's Palace looks, the appearance of the Sword of Aeons, Avo's tear, etc. My fingers are frankly ****ed. And I'm too tired to keep typing xD

So goodnight, and if you've actually read everything up to this point, you are equal to Bear Grylls

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He rapes mountains,
Thats like one of the ultimate achievements of badassery,
Close to Bungee jumping inside volcanoes,
And being struck by lightning while wrapped in 100 lb copper and gold chains,
and not breaking a sweat,
 
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Still Great, the new parts were as good as the first.
I had a reoccurring feeling of Skyrim while reading some of it, though that is probably just me.
The re-awakening of the old creatures seems like a great way to bring them back.
What stage in evolution is this set in? What I mean by that is, is it a modern era, medieval era, ancient, etc.
Do you think the darkness will make an appearance?
Any chance of the old guild master appearing on spirit form or something.
Maybe ghosts of the past hero's, corresponding to your most recent save game from the past games.
I think enchantments would ruin the whole augmentation system they have going.
If Jack is back, will he still transform into a Dragon, or some sort of Apocalyptic Monster from the Void?
Just some things I felt like typing, so, okay then.
Also, I think Aurora would be good to have a small reference, though after the last game, nothing that really affects the Main story-line, maybe a bronze quest.
Hopefully you will keep writing.
 
Ahahaha, I had the feeling of Skyrim aswell sometimes, which can't be avoided I suppose, just how Kingdoms of Amalur couldn't escape it, just how any RPG has elements of Skyrim, because its the staple of RPGs at the moment.
And I just finished thinking up a whole storyline with Reaver, Jack and the CRAWLER in Aurora that could be fit in as a large Silver Quest :)

For some reason the word Augmentation completely left my mind and I thought that they had always been enchantments, but thats what I meant :)

I was going to bring back GM in ghost form somehow, but thought maybe people would expect that too much, I'm trying to introduce old characters who hadn't been given enough screen time. Scythe, come on, we all know we love Scythe like no other. Having him as a main character makes up for his lack of appearance in Fable: TLC.

Although I did spend some time writing up a little side quest with a small appearance by the old Heroes that died.

About Jack's form, I honestly havn't thought of it yet, thats why I've been vague about details, but I would imagine that around the time of the Rebirth, he sort of comes back like Voldemort did in HP4, a sort of husk, and the more souls he has his minions feed the Sword of Aeons, the more his own power increases. If you steal SoA and leave Avo's Tear, he will corrupt it and continue the process, if you take Avo's Tear, he simply continues feeding off of the souls the he is keeping inside SoA, sort of as a transfer chamber to himself before he becomes powerful enough to wield the sword himself. But I'm getting off topic, so I was imagining his form as sort of a giant Void Beast, unseen before, meant to be the true form of Jack, you can see a glimpse of his mask, half covered in shadow, almost being eaten by the True form of Jack himself, supposedly it is said somewhere in Lore that Jack has never actually been in Albion in his true form, he has only ever possessed people with the mask.

Anyway, back to writing, think I'll write up that Quest with Reaver, Jack and the Crawler in Aurora now :)\
Trust me you'll love the way it plays out.
 
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Aurora:

I forgot to talk about Aurora at all in previous posts aside from a few descriptions of the place and the fact that Kraken's attacked the Shoreline after they were enraged by the Rebirth.
I didn't find it all that interesting honestly, first of all I didn't like Fable 3, and will be posting a differences between TLC and 3 soon, you'll see its pretty ridiculous.
And Aurora itself wasn't too interesting to me, there was sand, the Crawler, and a single Auroran city, hardly ANY quests in the entire continent, etc.
I could go on about how much Fable 3 disappointed me, for hours. But back to writing :P

So here we go...

After retrieving the Guild Seal from Samarkand, you get a silver quest to leave for Aurora, and speak with the owner of the mining operation about his workers going missing in the Caves and ruins they are stripping for valuables and oil. You sail into port, seeing massive wreckage of ships, docks, enormous teeth marks, bits of scaly flesh, and people shoveling corpes and Kraken parts into the Sea. The city of Aurora now extends all the way to the Darklight Caves, which are being mined. As you make your way through the poverty stricken slums of the city you notice a tall, black robed man, you catch a glimpse of the side of his face, though not realising it you can make out a white mask , but he promptly disappears before you get a good look at him. you reach the bottom of the steps to Darklight and see a tall man yelling at an Auroran worker. "Just because the city gets attacked by Kraken does NOT mean you get to stop working! chop chop!" He hits the man with the butt of his pistol, the man begs to go into the city to see if his wife is alright after the attack. The man simply smirks, saying "You've probably lost me a whole HEAP of jewels just distracting me with this tosh" He slides the sword from his Bodyguards scabbard, who doesn't flinch. The man then impales the Auroran through the knee and shoots him in the chest, cleaning off the sword and returning it he walks off into the Caverns, yelling at the other works to stop staring and get back to work.

You make your way up the stairs where The Hero of Brightwall was forced to leave Walter Beck at the time they were stranded by the Crawler, the inside of the ruins is filled with slave workers and starving men, you come to the Foreman's office, and instantly notice it is much more lavish than any other part of the continent itself! Filled with artwork, silk, fur rugs, gold, etc.

You enter and begin talking to who is obviously Reaver, though he makes no introduction, he looks much older than he did ever before, shoulder length dark hair, filled with streaks of grey, a well trimmed moustache and goatee line his face. A gold tooth can be seen whenever he smiles, and a scar on his left cheek, where his heart tattoo once was. He says typical evil aligned Reaver things, as over the years he seems to have lost all sense of emotion for other people. "You must be here to sort out my missing workers eh? No need to worry, we've already found someone" Just then a man runs into the room, a messenger "H-he's here Reaver, the man you sent for" "Well don't just stand there! let him in!" "I did sir" "You, let someone, ANYONE into my precious mine without my permission first?" Reaver promptly shoots the man lazily, by pulling the trigger on the gun on his desk, while it was still laying, almost set up to shoot messengers and other bringers of ill news.

For a split second you see the same black robed man from the town walk past the door, and hear a faint, dark chuckle go through your head. Reaver smiles, "Ah, there he is, we're sending him down into the unexplored parts of this little cave. If he is fails, I atleast don't have to pay him. Though on second thought, I will most likely shoot him if he is successful."

You hurriedly run after the robed man, but after turning the corner, you see that he has somehow already made it all the way over to the other side of the chaber, and is speaking to one of the workers outside a dark hallway. You make your way across the room, slightly paranoid of the man, but when you finally arrive you only just catch the sight of him walking into the Darkness as loud, booming laughing rings through your head. Everythng goes silent for a moment, then you hear an unknown voice, which seems to be speaking to everyone. "The Children have come to play... ahahaha..." Glowing eyes begin to show themselves in the dark of the passageway, slowly, black, oozing shadow seeps from the door, flowing across the walls and dripping from the ceiling, the torches lining the walls all go out, and you hear the gnashing of metal, and glowing eyes come from all around you. Eventually you, Reaver and his bodyguards defeat the shadows and Metal statues that had come to life, the torches are re-lit and the shadow subsides from the room, but you can see it leaving out into the city itself. Barrels of oil all across Aurora, that had been mined from that very cave, burst open, shadows possessed by the Crawler oozing out into the city streets, killing and destroying.

Reaver attempts to leave, but the exit to the surface in covered in black ooze the moment the gets close, grabbing his hand and tearing off his glove. You then look to the way further down, as the ooze that was covering in slides to the floor you hear the voice of Jack, and the Crawler at once "Come insiiiide, ahahaha" as you make your way into the unexplored regions of the ruins, slowly you begin to notice the Bodyguard's numbers are dwindling, eventually only you and Reaver are left, as you fight off shadows and living ooze, cutting a path down into the darkness, Reaver is attacked by a giant wall of black slime which envelopes him and chases you deeper and deeper until suddenly disappearing.

You come to a large open hall, the many bodyguards are strung along the walls and celing, attached by shadow and slime. Reaver stands in the middle, Beside Jack of Blades himself, perched upon a throne, the black cloak he used as a disguise strewn over it. Reaver's eyes glow a pale red. His mouth opens, but it is not his voice you hear "The children will feast on your sadness and despair, give in to the darkness, for it fuels my master's power!" You are then attacked by Reaver's many body guards, who have been possessed by the Crawler, as Jack simply watches, chuckling every so often. After you defeat them, Reaver's possessed body attacks you. -Insert boring description of boss battle here- You finally finish him by impaling him in the chest, you see the Crawler leave his body and be banished back to the void, as he regains consciousness, he says one thing before succumbing to death "Finally"

(My theory is that he was sort of like Maze, terrified of death, however welcomed it when it was forced upon him because he realised all the horrible things he had done... or some emotional crap like that)

Jack applauds you, says some final words of taunting, he then calmly stands, and wraps his cloak around himself, but before you can attack him, the cloak falls to the ground, as if there was never anyone underneath it.
 
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Considering you didn't find Aurora interesting, that's a rather large section on it.
Still, great new section, it's starting to sound somewhat like a short story, which is a good thing in my opinion.
So, After living for an extremely long time, Reaver is meant to just, you know, die?
No sacrifice or anything, just another Walter Beck moment.
Interesting cloak idea you have there by the way.
It sounds somewhat like a Gold quest, if you were to ask me, which you now probably won't.
You clearly know your Fable Facts, and I shall now like the rest of these posts.
 
Ahahah thanks, and KEEP CRITICISING. I'm not too sure about Reaver's death either :/ but SOME old characters have to die in order to progress and introduce new ones, and Reaver has had a bit too long of a run I think. But remember probably none of this will make it into Fable 4... But I can change anything and everything in accordance to what people like or don't like :P
 
Also posted this in a new thread, but might aswell put it in here incase people don't see it

Fable: TLC to Fable 3 degeneration

TLC, one of my favourite games of all time, the reason for my entire personality, that game shaped my childhood for upwards of 6-7 years.
Why did Molyneux have to over-hype every other installment of the series and destroy everything Fable was? Idunno...

Bandit Infiltration Quests:

In TLC you sneak your way past the outer guards of the gate, slip inside while they aren't looking, and make it to the outer camp. Some guards recognize you as an intruder and sound the alarm, you fight your way through the outer camp, picking up pieces of a Bandit disguise along the way, eventually making it to the "Inner-Outer" camp, donning the disguise and waltzing in. You then find that you need a special bandit seal to gain access to the Elite camp, which you can get a hold of multiple creative ways. Once inside the Elite camp, you find another creative way to get into the next gate by distracting the guards. You enter Twinblade's personal camp, and find that he had been waiting for you all along, you then face off against a once mighty Hero, who fell in with Bandits and became their king. After this you find out that your own SISTER had been living with the bandits and that she had been with them since the attack on your village. EPIC twist and amazing progression through the camp.

Fable 3's infiltration quest goes something like this. Enter bar. Hold A to strip clothes from convenient lone Bandit who came to town and got really drunk. Be sent on an EPIC journey, to the local barber to get a beard and tattoos... Then arrive at bandit camp. Be recognized almost instantly. Cut down 20 minutes worth of copy pasted bandits, one shotting the lot of them. Find Saker, defeat him. Leave.

Bosses:

Lets just get this out of the way, Crawler. Made no sense. You arrive in a far off land, go into some dark caves for no reason, completely forget about objective, get lost. Some creepy dark creature begins sending dark shadows at you. Me: "YAAAAY! Maybe this is where they start revealing REAL plot points and start explaining things!" Nope. They never explain anything about the Crawler. The only piece of Lore is a single sentence Kalin says "It came here 5 years ago" Yep. That is literally all we know about it. It has nothing to do with you, no ties to anything related to you. All of a sudden Theresa is all like "Oh yeah. and now that Logan's gone you're screwed because this thing we like to call the Crawler is coming to blanket us all in Shadow and death... Iunno why, ask Molyneux"

Fable TLC's Jack of Blades,
One of the greatest video game villians of all time, this guy had the cliches of the perfect villian, but he was just so well made and thought out that the cliches actually made sense. DESTROYED your home town. Sent the leader of the Guild of Heroes, who he was secretly manipulating, to exterminate the bloodline which he had been combating since its creation. Locked away your mother in an Albion prison which was also being secretly manipulated by Jack. Cut out your sister's eyes and left her in the woods to die. Has been hunting an evil demonic blade which has the power to destroy the world, controls a vast army of minions and dark creatures. After he is finally defeated and his sword cast back into the Void, his soul lives on and returns beyond a Bronze gate in the form of a Dragon. Just Epic.

I'm not even gonna talk about Logan...
Well no thats a lie,
I'm gonna rant about Logan

So, Fable 3 starts out as a fully grown man/woman, you wake up. Go kiss your boyfriend/girlfriend goodmorning, walk to have some fighting practice,
You see some people outside who are ****ed because of taxes, Logan gives you the decision to either, kill the mob who you only saw for about
a split second through a window. Or kill your boyfriend/girlfriend who has spoken maybe 5-6 sentences to you that you actually remember hearing, who
you just met, have no emotions towards, etc, etc, etc. Then you decide, everybody's ****ed, so you go off all of a sudden on a mission to get everyone
to gang up on your brother, who is being a very, very naughty king, and not eating his veggies... I can't even take this seriously the more I talk about it.

I don't think I need to explain Fable: TLC's story, because I bet everyone actually REMEMBERS that one... (I honestly had to check the Fable wiki page for
Fable 3 because I just didn't care about the story and forgot)

This next category should be amusing...

Fable TLC vs Fable 3's DLC

Fable TLC, adds new potions, new weapons, new armour, new gear, new places, new people, new quests, new bosses, new creatures. All of which were unique, the ONLY thing I saw that was lazy is that the Frost Balverine were just a re-skin of the Balverine model. But thats just nit-picking. Everything new was different than before, a giant Oracle, a Necropolis ghost city, frozen, icy continent known as the Northern Wastes, more demon doors, more keys, more chests, more EVERYTHING. An epic qust chain to Harvest souls of different types of Heroes in order to open a Bronze gate which is said to be holding back the destruction of the world. All leading up to a confrontation with Jack of Blades in the form of a Dragon.

Fable 3's DLC... Some clothing dyes... roughly 3-4 more small quests, with almost no reward at the end, and uneventful conclusions... A set of armour that makes you look like William Wallace... Some new dog breeds... A five star dog potion, which was already in the game, along with all the other little ****** "DLC" packs before they decided "Okay, lets just not let them have the black dye, so that they'll go to the marketplace to unlock it! Even though its already technically in the game! Just hidden!" Bastards... Oh and DON'T FORGET THE DOG COSTUME!!!

Its like a whole new game... /sarcasm

I rest my case... I think we can take it from here Molyneux...
 
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