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Hex's head

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mm it does make me feel cold..O.o
I really like it.
I like the smoothness of the last lines. ( frozen in time at this point, at this point in my life, at the edge of a knife, it's all turning black as the blade in my back, I'm turning down all of the lights)

Very nice, as always. Baldy Beardy Bardy. :rolleyes::P
 
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Wow Hex, another great piece! +rep :D
 
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Green Plasticine

They had a dream
To make themselves
Remake their hearts
With green plasticine
you and me
the sum of a dream
They worked so hard
Was hardly worth it
All they built
Just fell and wilted
Majestic towers
Symbols of power
But we could not stand
Would not play
They built us tall
then watched us fall
they faltered as we altered
we could not remain unmade
they made us all the same within
without their help we made ourselves
I couldn’t say what I became
But I’ve become myself
They shout and cry
As though we’d died
We could not be
What they would be
We’re left unseen
Green plasticine
Left to dry and crumble
We walk alone and stumble
Down the path that isn’t there
And we brace to take the stares
They watch with hate
At all they’ve made
Their walking talking
Broken dreams
They made us so we’d be
But all we can be is green plasticine
 
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Very good again hexi. :P
 
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Wow how the hell did you make a piece of writing about green plasticine sound so deep, meaningful and profound, if you will? O.o

Thats really good... and ive said it before and i shall say it again 'You have real talent!'

:thumbsup:

+rep
 
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Drums

The liars mass
Their fists are raised
The trumpets blast
The dogs give chase
The fires rage
The time draws near
The war is waged
We can’t stay here

The drums still call for war
This heady pace
I wish I wasn’t sober
Huddled on the floor
Protect your face
Soon this will all be over
One way or another, this will all be over

See them run
Like hunting meat
War for fun
The raging beast
Snapping teeth
Are at the gates
Cold deceit
We’re tempting fate

The drums still call for war
This heady pace
I wish I wasn’t sober
Huddled on the floor
Protect your face
Soon this will all be over
One way or another, this will all be over

The lies they told
They’ve raped our lands
Their souls were sold
With bloodied hands
Hunted by
The walking damned
Prepared to die
We’ll make our stand

The drums still call for war
This heady pace
I wish I wasn’t sober
Huddled on the floor
Protect your face
Soon this will all be over
One way or another, this will all be over
 
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Wonderful! this is great!
 
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These are awesome poems Hex plus rep
 
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Very Very impressive Hex, always like reading these and i am always constantly impressed by them! +rep
 
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See

I see life through a window
Wavy glass distorts the scene
Hiding from the drunken widow
Ripping at my seams

I see life through a mirror
But all I see is lies
Reflections washed with bitter tears
The shards still cut my eyes

And in my dreams the jackals stalk me
Seeing all I cannot be
I sought to save you from the nightmares
Now that’s all that’s left of me

I see life through a mist
And myself is slightly blurred
History left me hopeless
Told me not to speak a word

I see life through the shadows
And the darkness feels like home
It walks me to the gallows
It’s the only thing I’ve know

And in my dreams the jackals stalk me
Seeing all I cannot be
I sought to save you from the nightmares
Now that’s all that’s left of me
 
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Another great one hexi. Rep+
 
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Another really awesome piece Hex still impress me more and more with each one +rep

:thumbsup:
 
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That one has a sort of sweet comforting sadness to it. Very nice
 
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Albion Knight;71834 said:
That one has a sort of sweet comforting sadness to it. Very nice
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Well said. I love your poems, Hex. They're a heck of alot better than any I could do, and I like the scenes you set. It sounds beyond even the professional level at the moment. Bravo and +rep.
 
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this one's not autobiographical for once... I guess I ended up writing a story of sorts in the form of prose... it's pretty self explanatory...

Final Plea

I stand before the chair
Electric death to suit my crimes
I’ve made my peace with what is fair
Now be dishonest one last time
I’ll not proclaim my innocence
It matters not who hears me now
What I must know begs ignorance
Of all you’ve heard of me somehow
If I were to ask, I know you won’t
To say that you believe
To think I’m lying but say you don’t
Pretend that you could grieve
Tell me that I don’t deserve this
Could never have been me
Lie and say I will be missed
Before you murder me
It won’t be true I know
But I’ll be gone so quickly
Could you just put on a show?
For one last time trick me
They’re strapping me into my ending
A murderous sight of a man
I know that I’m not worth defending
All I ask is pretend that I am
 
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Wow... thats another really awesome piece Hex im impressed as usual. Thats quite some talent you have there ^_^ +rep
 
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I like how you're not quite sure of the guilt or innocence of the person. That's the point I'm guessing
 
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