I messed up, bad

[James Butts]

I messed up, bad

Hi, I desperately need your help, I messed up with a friend bad, can you make this sound more organized and sincere, please, I am terriible at apologizing and writing:

BTW he thinks I hate him now, I want to try to better myself so I will be more accepted and succesfull at life, starting with this.

 

[TheJJMax]

Re: I messed up, bad

So you're a fat person that farts and eats garlic? I don't see the problem :ninja:

 

[Cobalt Gamer]

Re: I messed up, bad

What the hell did you actaualy do O.O from the snippets in there I'm rather disturbed, But i can help I'm amazing at apologising seeing as how I do it all the time.

 

[Man]

Re: I messed up, bad

you should probably confront him in person instead of a letter if you werent planning on that already. other than that, im no good with this, maybe the others can help out

 

[James Butts]

Re: I messed up, bad

I would love you forever if you helped me, and give you +rep X5

Basically what I did was:

Stink up the car for seven hours two ways

Tried to make myself stink on purpose to get the back seat

Was rude to his family

Acted way immature

 

[TheJJMax]

Re: I messed up, bad

I would love you forever if you helped me, and give you +rep X5

Basically what I did was:

Stink up the car for seven hours two ways

Tried to make myself stink on purpose to get the back seat

Was rude to his family

Acted way immature

So you acted like a jackass on purpose? :ninja:

 

[James Butts]

Re: I messed up, bad

The only thing I did on purpose was make myself stink.

 

[TheJJMax]

Re: I messed up, bad

The only thing I did on purpose was make myself stink.

Why stink on purpose? I only stink at Math :lol:

 

[Wonderfoole WINO]

Re: I messed up, bad

The letter sounds alright to me, If possible calling him might be better. Just make it honest and from the heart and it should go fine.

 

[James Butts]

Re: I messed up, bad

So I could secure the seat in the very back that had windows, which I now realise was selfish.

 

[TheJJMax]

Re: I messed up, bad

So I could secure the seat in the very back that had windows, which I now realise was selfish.

You could have just asked "Can I have the backseat?"

 

[James Butts]

Re: I messed up, bad

In normal surcustances I could have, but not these ones.

 

[Tsuyu]

Re: I messed up, bad

A letter is something you write to apologize to the queen of England, mate. Not to a pal! An apology in person is just that - more personal.

 

[Arseface]

Re: I messed up, bad

That was.... weird.

And yeah, an apology in person would definitely hold more weight.

 

[cheezMcNASTY]

Re: I messed up, bad

that looks fine, but at the bottom of the first paragraph change it to
"less immature and more respectful"....other than that though it looks fine.
hope the response goes well

EDIT: Tsuyu's right on this one. if you're mind is set on a letter we can't really help you there, but saying it in person is def a better choice.