try to add a twisting plot. one thats keeps readers on each, then when they expect something to happen, BAM they get a 32 megaton surprise.quote]
That's what I'm doing. It's a first view and he is trying to figure out who had done it. The plot is even confusing to me. :lol: At the end, he finds out the government set him up. He expose the government tried to do that because they want to set example that graffiti can ruin some-one's life. I didn't things on there that I wouldn't see in the movies. My intro just explains who is he and were he lives. The very first line is a augment... But I think it could give a little more to it, but then I don't put things I don't see in hit movies and books.
