I am open for criticism. I need the experience.
Nothing can make a sound
Nothing can make a rhyme
For life is a crown
For only those with the sign
Nothing can live
Nothing can cry
For the creative
For only silence is mine
Rhythms make us
Rhythms seek me
For the usual plus
For all I could see
Rhythms make happiness
Rhythms make joy
For hopefulness
For it's not a toy
Rhythms are everything........
Nothing can make a sound
Nothing can make a rhyme
For life is a crown
For only those with the sign
Nothing can live
Nothing can cry
For the creative
For only silence is mine
Rhythms make us
Rhythms seek me
For the usual plus
For all I could see
Rhythms make happiness
Rhythms make joy
For hopefulness
For it's not a toy
Rhythms are everything........