The Aliphite

[Vegeta]

The Aliphite

The Aliphite.

There Was once an Aliphite named Sivu.
The Planet he lived on was a peacful one... The planet was small and it was unknown to most people. This is Sivu's story.
Sivu was 15 and he was always just a "Weak Boy" His father said. One day on this small planet Banilites Were looking for a planet to Plunder when they came along Aliphiss. When they got there they had the element of surprise. The little soldiers that the planet had were to weak and the planet was taken over…2 Years have passed on the planet and Sivu couldn't take this slavery he had to be free! he didn't know what to do but he had to do something.​

(More later) ​

 

[Angel]

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*Thread moved to Barrowfields Art Gallery

 

[Vegeta]

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The Aliphite p2.​

Everybody working suddenly stopped and looked at Sivu in Awe at his amazing power. He said angrily “Stay Back!” as he walked over to his father. He checked to see if he was dead, He was and he gave him a proper burial. Later the next day After Sivu got all the prisoners to a hidden camp he left to figure things out in his life. When Banilites saw that production on the side of the world that Sivu was supposed to be working was 0% he sent 15 Trained Banilite guards out to see what happened. When they saw no one was there they Immediately warned the king. The king knew about the Legend of The Aliphite and was scared. He ordered all of his elite men to stop making the people work and go find Sivu. The minor guards watch the people so they wouldn’t run away as the Elites looked for what seemed to be the Lost Aliphite.

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[Vegeta]

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I changed it so that you wouldn't here all about it before it even started.

If anyone wants to add to this and they have ideas PM me with what ur part/idea is and ill let you or not.