The side i try to hide

[HodgePodge]

Re: The side i try to hide

Guys, stop getting off topic. It's getting ridiculous how often you're doing this in every thread.

 

[Shadow Knight]

Re: The side i try to hide

Well its not completely off topic its still on subject but i guess I will leave this thread sorry Blue Crow!

 

[Frostmourne]

Re: The side i try to hide

Good, but you need to split the poem, instead of making it a paragraph. People can easily tell its a poem by seeing the space between each sentence.

Sorry, but I know its sad your girlfriend left and all, but there's something called the Phone, Email, Aim, etc. After all, this is also off topic.

I liked the poem though, keep it up crow

 

[blue crow]

Re: The side i try to hide

Thanks everyonei am thinking about makeing a part 3.

 

[Triz]

Re: The side i try to hide

Yea.... keep it up...

 

[FableFreak]

Re: The side i try to hide

Kinda depressing if you ask me...

 

[Shadow Knight]

Re: The side i try to hide

Kinda depressing if you ask me...

Thats what I thought but all a sudden its great keep up the good work it was weird I can't really say that there needs to be continuations of it or it would lose its uniqueness.

 

[blue crow]

Re: The side i try to hide

Part 3

Hate i am full of hate seems its all i can fell these days. I am forever reminded of a horrible life that it like i gate i cant leave and no one can enter. Fadeing away everyday seems like my life will not change. Hell awaits sinners and heavan awaits the people of faith but what awaits for the son of a sinner and the son of the people of faith?My life is in vain full of pain there is no gain. Liveing or dieing its all the same when you know your days are numbered.