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The Tale of Mad Dog and The Crucible

Rad

Old Name: Zencidal
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The Tale of Mad Dog and The Crucible

The Crucible, ahhh yes the place where the strongest heroes, adventuers and fighters show what they are made of. People all over Albion would come and Watch or Compete in the 7 life threatning rounds.

But only one champion, one record holder would be the best. That would be the Amazing Mad Dog, he and his trusty axe the Legendary Chopper. Mad dog was known in all of Albion as being the best at what he does, Competing in the Crucible.

Every few days Mad dog would put on a great show and always make it to the end. No matter what the foe was he defeated every Bettle, Hobbe, Baleverine, Bandit and Troll he faces in the Crucible. His chopper had incredible power and Mad dog focused only on his Strength... But Strength isn't the only thing that makes someone a Champion.

Mad Dog was heading to his house in Westcliff. Some bandit told him that someone wanted to challenge him to a battle in the Crucible. He just laughed at the thought of someone actually defeating him. He accepted and went straight to the Crucible.

He entered the room where the challenger awaited him. He was a skinny guy, he wore some kind of white uniform with blue trimmings. He wore a hood and had a arrow set on his back and a rusty iron sword. Mad dog pulled out his Chopper and laughed. "How could this pathetic whimp defeat me!" said Mad Dog. The challenger was quite and so the battle began.

The Challenger then used some sort of will and quickly dashed tward Mad Dog and struck him with a Sword, Mad Dog got up and was confused he started swining his axe. The challenger was to quick he was rolling around and shooting his long bow. Mad Dog couldn't believe what skill he had! Then out of nowhere lightning struck Mad Dog then a Fire Ball. "WHAT ARE YOU!!!!!!!!!" Mad dog screamed.

Mad dog was on the ground gasping for air. He was hurt and Defeated. The Challenger wasn't there and nobody saw him leave. Everyone remebered the day that Mad Dog got defeated. People thought the challenger was a Warlock and a Threat to Albion. Some thought he had something to do with the infamouse Heroes Guild. Mad Dog shamefuly locked his Axe in a chest, and gave up his crucibling days.

Maybe one day someone will take the title of Champion in the Crucible and take ownership of the Chopper. But only time will tell..........


Note: (Crucible was 7 rounds back then in this Stories, It's actually 8 now so don't post about that, Thanks =))
 
Re: The Tale of Mad Dog and The Crucible

I think as many of your other stories it was OK and short. Make a longer one because with all these shorts one it just seems like you want more rep.
 
Re: The Tale of Mad Dog and The Crucible

anain12;257144 said:
I think as many of your other stories it was OK and short. Make a longer one because with all these shorts one it just seems like you want more rep.

Anyone can feel free to Derep me i'm doing this out of boredom really. Im not asking to rep me. Everyone who reads my stories chose to rep me. I really wouldn't care if people derep me. I'm just doing this for fun and want to express creativity O.o. So please don't get the wrong idea

*update*

Well there should be a Derep system i just realized that there isn't so like someone should add that o.o
 
Re: The Tale of Mad Dog and The Crucible

again awsome story and keep to what you like writting yourself not what others think you should do
 
Re: The Tale of Mad Dog and The Crucible

Skormsarrow;257718 said:
again awsome story and keep to what you like writting yourself not what others think you should do
I didn't tell him to stop doing what he does or like doing but a criticism can help him get even better at it.
 
Re: The Tale of Mad Dog and The Crucible

anain12;257730 said:
I didn't tell him to stop doing what he does or like doing but a criticism can help him get even better at it.

I respect ure opinion and I'm actually glad that you can use criticism in a positive way so I thank you. But honestly i'm just a short story writer. If you prefer long ones. Then please feel free and not to read them since all of my stories will be in this format. =)
 
Re: The Tale of Mad Dog and The Crucible

Zencidal;257980 said:
I respect ure opinion and I'm actually glad that you can use criticism in a positive way so I thank you. But honestly i'm just a short story writer. If you prefer long ones. Then please feel free and not to read them since all of my stories will be in this format. =)

/cheer