"This is only a game"

[Firis]

"This is only a game"

A simple mind isn't hard to find so put your brain on rewind, retrace your life and lose what is divine.
An engraved stone, a sharpened bone shoved in to the side of her head-throne.
Blood drips and her heart slips, falls, crashes and turns into ashes in a grey ocean of sperm and hate.
A sarcastic laugh flows from teh mouth of a golden mouth lined with dieingmonds and demigods singing to the fire of the Red Queen's crown.
Alice sits in the corner hanging herself from the lamp post of her highway hair, Eat me written over face.
A love as equal to the droppings of a dove on the face of your life, balanced on the edge of a knife, take a plunge.

 

[D3m190d]

Re: "This is only a game"

Wow... Pretty awesome, I guess. ^_^

demigods

w00t. + Rep just for that.

 

[Sephiroxas]

Re: "This is only a game"

A simple mind isn't hard to find,
So put your brain on rewind,
Retrace your life line, <---( Sephi Added that word.)
And lose what is divine.
An engraved stone,
A sharpened bone.
Shoved in to the side of her head-throne.
Blood drips and her heart slips,
falls, crashes and turns into ashes,
In a grey ocean of sperm and hate.
A sarcastic laugh flows from teh mouth
of a golden mouth lined with dieingmonds
and demigods singing to the fire of the Red Queen's crown.
Alice sits in the corner hanging herself from the lamp post of her highway hair, Eat me written over face. A love as equal to the droppings of a dove on the face of your life, balanced on the edge of a knife, take a plunge.

I added in something and tried to add a little formatting into it. Though towards the end it gets a little less rhyming and little bit freeform. I love it though. +rep

Sounds a lot like my old poems Except less depressive.

(THAT NO ONES READ )

Link <--Shameless self promotion.

 

[Firis]

Re: &quot;This is only a game&quot;

Thanks y'all.
I think I read those before, really enjoyed them. I am not so much depressed as purely... Morbid.

 

[Sephiroxas]

Re: &quot;This is only a game&quot;

Thanks y'all.
I think I read those before, really enjoyed them. I am not so much depressed as purely... Morbid.

Yeah well, I said yours were LIKE my depressive ones. :lol: Morbid IS the better word. :ninja:

 

[Firis]

Re: &quot;This is only a game&quot;

I've had some weird ones, my prose are always based on dreams (The one I post here anyway) and my poems are just usually freestyle off the top of my mind, usually influenced by the tellie or music I am listening to atm.

 

[Sephiroxas]

Re: &quot;This is only a game&quot;

Well, again, I really like it. It all flows well.