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Fable 3: A new start.

chasep2829

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Fable 3: A new start.

-Chapter 1-

The sun rises onto a new day in Bowerstone. The town is bustling with news of the big day. "Sparrow's child is getting married today! Meet you in Fairfax garden!" Sparrow steps out of the house with her spouse at the door as he slightly bows. "My lady! You look... devine." Sparrow smiles. She is wearing a formal gown with a lovely hat and umbrella. She steps down and her spouse notices something."Honey, you don't have to carry that gun with you. Its been ten years since you have been attacked. After Lucien died and you retired." "Yes, dear but its Alexandra's big day and I don't want any... suprises." Sparrow says after getting into the carrige and riding off with her husband at her side.

A huge party was gathering in Fairfax gardens. The news spread fast and everyone important came. The bide was getting ready when she called for Sparrow. An hour passed and the ceramony was just biginning. As the couple put the rings on each of their fingers a loud thump was heard and gunshots. Sparrow got up, followed by everyone else as a guard got up and shouted, "Run! Somethings coming!" The guests scattered throughout the gardens screaming and bumping into each other. As sparrow got her gun there was a pause as she teleported and was gone.

Sparrow hit the ground with a loud thud and got up coughing. She was in the Chamber of Fate. She hadn't been in here for 10 years and was confused. 3 lights shown from nowhere and there stood Hammer, Garth, and Reaver. All looking 10 years aged. A voice spoke out shaking the halls, "You have been dormant for 10 years. That is a long time heroes but there is a new evil that is making its way into the world. i need your help." "Are you kidding?" Hammer spoke out. "I am retired! Done with the hero biz, you here?" "As am I." Spoke Garth. "We are far to old to be playing these games." "Haha, speak for yourself Reaver said looking rather youthful than ever." "Anyways, I don't want to be here." Hammer said. The gang started bickering whilst Sparrow said Nothing. "SILENCE!" commanded the mysterious voice. "You must help me. I believe you remember Theresa? She has been corrupted by the spire. She drained all of its energy and now uses it as her personal gain. Please help me." Garth spoke up and in an I-don't-know sort of tone said "Fine." The voice was relieved and said, "Step into the light." One by one they did as they were told. Their youth and beuty was restored as was their strength.

The voice said, "Your first quest is not of a simple one. But first before we can do any work..." There was a since of power rising in the air as the room rebuilt itself t almost new. The cieling sparkled with blue as did the outline of the walls. The floor was newly repaired and there was huge amounts of furniture in the room. The voice spoke again, "Heroes are being born throughout albion and powerful ones like you. You must search for them and bring them back here so their blood can be awakened and they can be trained. Each of you must find one. You will see the guild has been rebuilt in secrecy. You no longer can open the door on the island for I have sealed it and there is no more rock in these halls. You can not tell it is a cave. It has many rooms for sleeping, studying, and training. Feel free to explore. I am afraid we can not meet yet. Until then, I am putting in a consultant almost exacly like Theresa was. She will help you in your journey for now until she is well enough to join you." And the voice dissapeared and in it's absents teleported Rose. Sparrow's long lost sister, who hadn't aged a day.

To be continued....

I will only wright more if someone asks
Copywrite 2008! Idea belongs to chasep2829.
 
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Re: Fable 3: A new start.

i like the idea i enjopyed reading this and i like how the guild has been rebuilt in secrecy and how rose is back and how you have picked up on key points of fable 2 if i were you you should submit this to peter mulleneux but have somebody proof read it first. great attention to detail. i look forwards to reading more.
 

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Re: Fable 3: A new start.

BLAZING SNIPERS;231113 said:
i like the idea i enjopyed reading this and i like how the guild has been rebuilt in secrecy and how rose is back and how you have picked up on key points of fable 2 if i were you you should submit this to peter mulleneux but have somebody proof read it first. great attention to detail. i look forwards to reading more.

Thank You. :D
 
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how long did it take for your thread to appear because i posted mine about 3/4 days ago and its still not up, and its not like there was any inapropriate language, i may have been slightly gorey though
 
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fable2rules123

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:(If it is going to be like that. Garth, Hammer, and Reaver is gonna be like "I'm gonna have to take orders from a kid.:O LOL
 
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Dagger-Daemon

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Really good, keep writing, but making it a little bit longer cause it felt rushed, but other than a few grammer errors, it looks fine to me!
 
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hero-of-pain

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Amazing post. I dont think of it as rushed I am just a bit upset i cant read rest of the story yet. And who else has notice that Theresa is your sis from the first game.
 
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yeah i thought that, there are just too many elememnts, e.g the eyes, how she said that it was along time since she had been in oakvale. ect. shes sooo gonna be evil in the next game
 
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Xeon

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I hope the guildmasters ghost returns in fable 2 or 3....
 
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xB0NExCRU5HERx

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Absolutely brilliant. if this was the actual idea for Fable III, i would buy the game in an instant. please write more, i look forward to it.
 
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lindenlewis

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yeh I love it also, great twist to it :O who would of thought?
but then again I better hurry up and finish this one, im going to get left behind!
 
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RyuKotsei

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That...was...awesome! I loved it, who would have thought Theresa would turn evil!
 

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Re: Fable 3: A new start.

^ i would have tought :p

BUT

I WANT MORE I WANT MORE :p
 

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copyright this... its a great idea but definately get it proofread
 
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DanF2F

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its good but a bit too much like fABLE 2 but still keep writin it
 

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Re: Fable 3: A new start.

Isn't it supposed to be like Fable 2 because it's in the "Fable 2 Fan Fiction" section
 
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eracio12345

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i beleve this new fable game is going to be great. i havent played fable 1 but i have played fable 2. who knew theresa was going to be evil and i knew rose was coming back because i got a note when i beat the game that theresa told rose that they would be together soon
 
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Darkbloodraven

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This is so awesome i want this game it is so EPIC!!!!!!
 

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wait a minute!
theresa's evil!
that can't possibly be true!
because i just completed today on all endings in one playthrough(in the end i accidently chose the evil ending) and it didn't look like she turned evil.
 
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