Made Something Quickly

[Zjuggernaut]

Made Something Quickly





Yeah, I've been playing Tales of Vesperia and decided to make something quickly. Just messin' with effect and stuff.

I personally think the glow's a bit much and the black background's a bit plain but I'm just to lazy to change it.

Any feedback would be appreciated. I'll take it into consideration for future signatures.

 

[Relinquished Reality]

Re: Made Something Quickly

its not that bad

 

[zDominik]

Re: Made Something Quickly

Tbh your text placement is a bit bad,and the choice of coulours could have been better.The black BG does not help much either.

 

[Sephiroxas]

Re: Made Something Quickly

Tbh your text placement is a bit bad,and the choice of coulours could have been better.The black BG does not help much either.

:Lol: I didn't even know there was text until you said something. ^_^

Nice colors, and I agree about the text placement. And the black background could use a little spiffing:ninja:

Also, the 'render' itself, has a white lining around it, not sure if it was on purpose, but a little black would clear that up as well.

 

[Gikoku]

Re: Made Something Quickly

I think I've just been given an idea from this..

The white outline is bothering me, and the text I would have either left out or tried to work it as part of the image (blend it in somewhere). I like what you had going there.

 

[Havik]

Re: Made Something Quickly

I do like it, As others have said, The text is too little and too hard to read. The white line is bothersome, But over all 6/10

 

[cheezMcNASTY]

Re: Made Something Quickly

my only problem is dimension. the colors feel flat. you should add some shading effects to give them some dimension, or use a cool foreground to make them more blurry. they're just sitting there looking a little plain.

the text should probably overlap over everything somehow to, again, add dimension.

and the background could be fixed simply with a cool foreground.

 

[Sean]

Re: Made Something Quickly

That's really good ZJ.

 

[Zjuggernaut]

Re: Made Something Quickly

I suppose it's time for me to say a couple of things.

I don't use photoshop, so that's why my "art" isn't amazing. Not using it as in excuse because you can produce some cool stuff with paint.net

The white line is there because I couldn't be bothered to go around the render and erase all the choppy bits.. So I covered it in white.

If I decide to post a new signature, you'll probably notice that I've taken what you said into consideration.

Thanks everyone.