My Poetry

[Vero Caerso]

Re: My Poetry

Angelic Salvation.
Your wings of silver spread from below,
Your heart beats with terror,
You are to save us.. From what is to come,
You are here to be our salvation,
Spread your wings to save us all,
Save us from curtain death,
Save me. Save them. Save us.

Demonic Degree

Your eyes burn with suffering..
Your heart beats with distress
Your wings burn with torcher..
I want you to stop,
But you shall never forget..
The day they killed your saviour..
The day they killed your life.
(Yes i do mean life, not wife xD)

Tears In Vain
Your tears flow from your eyes..
Your tears endlessly flowing..
The screams you make.. only deafened by the demonic curse,
Your tears will only be in vain, Because the devil will forever torture you.

Comments would be nice.

 

[seress]

Re: My Poetry

I like your poetry DS. And yours too, Vero Caerso. Cheers.
You guys are talented. Keep writing.

 

[Fabled Ravrn]

Re: My Poetry

I thought this post was dedicated to D's poetry, and the fact that Phantom's post was made by, or so he says, Vero Caerso probably isn't a good idea, but good poems you got there (I'm assuming there's 3?).

 

[Noctus]

Re: My Poetry

Angelic Salvation.
Your wings of silver spread from below,
Your heart beats with terror,
You are to save us.. From what is to come,
You are here to be our salvation,
Spread your wings to save us all,
Save us from curtain death,
Save me. Save them. Save us.

Demonic Degree

Your eyes burn with suffering..
Your heart beats with distress
Your wings burn with torcher..
I want you to stop,
But you shall never forget..
The day they killed your saviour..
The day they killed your life.
(Yes i do mean life, not wife xD)

Tears In Vain
Your tears flow from your eyes..
Your tears endlessly flowing..
The screams you make.. only deafened by the demonic curse,
Your tears will only be in vain, Because the devil will forever torcher you.

Comments would be nice.

Loved it. Changed the title of the thread.

Just in case you want to fix the typo I bolded, the correct spelling is torture.

 

[Vero Caerso]

Re: My Poetry

Mk thanks for the comments =P
I'm also at the moment writing poems about someones drawing they made,
It was phantom's by the way.
So im working with him on his picture, well i'm just giving poems he can use if he wants to.
Anyone else need any poems written for anything?
I'm more than happy to do so, if needed.

 

[Vero Caerso]

Re: My Poetry

And yes there are 3 poems there.
Oh and heres another 1.

The words.

The words you spoke,
The words you sang,
The words you cried out in pain,
No one can hear your words,
No one can hear yours screams,
Only those who truly care can decode your horrible dream,
If you lay there breathless at night,
If you find the key to your true dreams,
Scream out the words,
The words of the angels, the words of the devils,
The words of those who screamed for you at night,
The words that they tried to save you with.

 

[Phantom]

Re: My Poetry

Those are probably the best poems I've seen so far by you Corey (apart from the Phantom ones)

 

[Noctus]

Re: My Poetry

Autumn; The Sudden Realisation Of A Dead World

At the edge of mortality
I see my souls reflection
Leaving me to die
In a bitter silence...

Oh, the bittersweet demise
Of the earth; making way
For a cold blanket of winter
To penetrate the lives of the trees

The leaves fall to the floor
As dead as the earth it falls to...

And the silence grips the land...

What was once green is now red
With the blood of mother nature
Oh why am I filled with dread?
It's too much for me to endure...

The silence speaks to me
Bitter words in angel rays
Shining through every tree
That died this very day

Screaming to skies on the perth
Darknened in depressing cold
Ablazed by the souls of the earth
That fly through skies once bold.

Oh forest, why do you die?
Why have I no protection?
From the depression of humanity
I see in my reflection...