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Arckon
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Re: Poems v.2
Hey try a color poem. You need the practice.
+ I need a counseler that can write very well. pa, pa, please
Hey try a color poem. You need the practice.
+ I need a counseler that can write very well. pa, pa, please
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blu phoenix
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but i just can't. i am not very good at poems and coming up with them quick like you....it usually takes time for me...besides you don't want to hear my stupid poems... it was bad enough putting that one about shoes/converse up.
but i just can't. i am not very good at poems and coming up with them quick like you....it usually takes time for me...besides you don't want to hear my stupid poems... it was bad enough putting that one about shoes/converse up.
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Arckon
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Re: Poems v.2
hey u can make poems out of anything
Trust me, this isn't com'n from the bard king
A poem is just a short song
Heck it can even be about a chinese gong.
It doesn't take much.
all u have to do is make a ryhme and add the right touch.
hey u can make poems out of anything
Trust me, this isn't com'n from the bard king
A poem is just a short song
Heck it can even be about a chinese gong.
It doesn't take much.
all u have to do is make a ryhme and add the right touch.
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Arckon
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Re: Poems v.2
As long as you're trying,
Just let the words flow.
Soon enough the words will be flying.
All it take is a ryhme, and a blow.
Then you will have a poem, fo sho
As long as you're trying,
Just let the words flow.
Soon enough the words will be flying.
All it take is a ryhme, and a blow.
Then you will have a poem, fo sho
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blu phoenix
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Re: Poems v.2
alright just give me time to think...
in the meantime save the color silver for me or blue. and let's hear more poems from you....
wait that rhymed...strange...
alright just give me time to think...
in the meantime save the color silver for me or blue. and let's hear more poems from you....
wait that rhymed...strange...
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Arckon
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But it ryhmed with a meaning
u kept it on subject
It might be a bit short, but it is inspiring
and you gave me some poetic intelect
But it ryhmed with a meaning
u kept it on subject
It might be a bit short, but it is inspiring
and you gave me some poetic intelect
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blu phoenix
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Arckon
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Re: Poems v.2
But wut do I inspire,
Do I inspire u to set fire,
To Snowspire,
village,pillage.
plunder,and burn
But now u must ryhme for it is your turn
But wut do I inspire,
Do I inspire u to set fire,
To Snowspire,
village,pillage.
plunder,and burn
But now u must ryhme for it is your turn
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blu phoenix
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Re: Poems v.2
No you inspire
all of the fire
to come out in me
so that i can always be free
arc your poetry is the light
that ignites the dark and eery night.
but my poems are not very great
they suck and this line doesn't rhyme
unlike yours my poems are nothing
your poems are much more and this poem it seems rhymes no more...
sucked didn't it???*sigh* oh well...tried...listen like i said i am not a poet.
No you inspire
all of the fire
to come out in me
so that i can always be free
arc your poetry is the light
that ignites the dark and eery night.
but my poems are not very great
they suck and this line doesn't rhyme
unlike yours my poems are nothing
your poems are much more and this poem it seems rhymes no more...
sucked didn't it???*sigh* oh well...tried...listen like i said i am not a poet.
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Arckon
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Re: Poems v.2
It twas good,
but it'd be better if you had confidence.
Let your words flow onto the page
Trust me this is litericy not rocket science
Poems can build powerful expretions that get stronger with age.
But what would
happen if i told you that i started ryhmeing this year
at one point There would be an empty page no words just a tear.
It twas good,
but it'd be better if you had confidence.
Let your words flow onto the page
Trust me this is litericy not rocket science
Poems can build powerful expretions that get stronger with age.
But what would
happen if i told you that i started ryhmeing this year
at one point There would be an empty page no words just a tear.
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blu phoenix
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Re: Poems v.2
you see even when you aren't writing poetry you are good with your words...i don't know what it is...
Arckon said:
you see even when you aren't writing poetry you are good with your words...i don't know what it is...
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Arckon
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Re: Poems v.2
All t takes is a heart of gold.
You have one. Trust me.
You just have to know what words mean.
thats all u need. for poetry
All t takes is a heart of gold.
You have one. Trust me.
You just have to know what words mean.
thats all u need. for poetry
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blu phoenix
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Arckon
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Re: Poems v.2
yes blue u have a heart of gold
if not siver or blue.
It is an expression for being very bold.
And yes wut i say is true.
No matter wut poetry resides in your heart.
No matter if it is tart
yes blue u have a heart of gold
if not siver or blue.
It is an expression for being very bold.
And yes wut i say is true.
No matter wut poetry resides in your heart.
No matter if it is tart
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blu phoenix
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Re: Poems v.2
see great words again...what's your secret really?hehe! thx for heart of gold thing and bold thing...
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see great words again...what's your secret really?hehe! thx for heart of gold thing and bold thing...
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Arckon
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Re: Poems v.2
This my prayer of poetry
all who read, remember it.
Let it be written,
and so it shall be.
A prayer to the Lord,
Will set ones heart free.
You just need to learn,
If it is a poem you urn,
That every one has good ryhme.
It just takes a little bit of time
This my prayer of poetry
all who read, remember it.
Let it be written,
and so it shall be.
A prayer to the Lord,
Will set ones heart free.
You just need to learn,
If it is a poem you urn,
That every one has good ryhme.
It just takes a little bit of time
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