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now you do...
now you do...
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Re: Poems v.2
Yep Arckon & blu phoenix are good poets...
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Yep Arckon & blu phoenix are good poets...
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Wow this candy is really sour.
Before its taste I do cowar.
So it is only fair to warn you.
This candy tastes like poo.
It may just be.
That opinion is just me.
So be free.
To eat with glee.
But as far as I can see.
This candy is disgusting by my decree.
Poem, I now end thee.
I think I might go climb a tree.
Wow this candy is really sour.
Before its taste I do cowar.
So it is only fair to warn you.
This candy tastes like poo.
It may just be.
That opinion is just me.
So be free.
To eat with glee.
But as far as I can see.
This candy is disgusting by my decree.
Poem, I now end thee.
I think I might go climb a tree.
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I keep a journal of poems from when im depressed but theyre kinda secret.
I keep a journal of poems from when im depressed but theyre kinda secret.
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As The Devil rises,
To Kill all the liars,
I try to run,
but it gives satan more fun,
I lift a sword from the ground,
Then I go round,
I drop the sword,
As I see the true lord,
Who I thought was the Devil,
Was only God.
As The Devil rises,
To Kill all the liars,
I try to run,
but it gives satan more fun,
I lift a sword from the ground,
Then I go round,
I drop the sword,
As I see the true lord,
Who I thought was the Devil,
Was only God.
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I got about four hundred sets of lyrics I've written over the last 10 years, on and off, that I keep for exactly the same purpose.....kinda theraputic I guess...:wacko:
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I got about four hundred sets of lyrics I've written over the last 10 years, on and off, that I keep for exactly the same purpose.....kinda theraputic I guess...:wacko:
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Hey all I am back from the dead.
The king has risen and the soldiers and knights fall to a knee
Though I have a shinny new axe in my head
loylety is true.You want proof, there it is bowing to me.
Theres nothin wrong with that,
I write poetry for fun, its somthing I do,
I am a good poet, you could be too.
Hey all I am back from the dead.
The king has risen and the soldiers and knights fall to a knee
Though I have a shinny new axe in my head
loylety is true.You want proof, there it is bowing to me.
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Theres nothin wrong with that,
I write poetry for fun, its somthing I do,
I am a good poet, you could be too.
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Indeed - I've had a few published too (mostly in promotional material, but still pretty cool). Your stuff isn't half bad, you know. Nice work - have you had anything come of your poetry at all?
Indeed - I've had a few published too (mostly in promotional material, but still pretty cool). Your stuff isn't half bad, you know. Nice work - have you had anything come of your poetry at all?
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yes oneof my poems is in the poetry contest, and I am in the semi finals right now. :shifty:
Angel;20305 said:Indeed - I've had a few published too (mostly in promotional material, but still pretty cool). Your stuff isn't half bad, you know. Nice work - have you had anything come of your poetry at all?
yes oneof my poems is in the poetry contest, and I am in the semi finals right now. :shifty:
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Excellent! So what's the prize if you should win? All I got was a crappy stationery set with the company logo all over it so I was too embarrassed to use it.....my school got cash though, which I thought was rubbish seeing as I did all the work....
But then again I was about 9 at the time so times must have changed in the last...oooh.....15 years?
Excellent! So what's the prize if you should win? All I got was a crappy stationery set with the company logo all over it so I was too embarrassed to use it.....my school got cash though, which I thought was rubbish seeing as I did all the work....
But then again I was about 9 at the time so times must have changed in the last...oooh.....15 years?
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Arckon
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I got $1000 if I win the contest, plus I have a chance at the anual $10000 it they choose my poem
I got $1000 if I win the contest, plus I have a chance at the anual $10000 it they choose my poem
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i just made a poem/ song thing today but i dont think its good enough so im not gonna post it yet...or at all
i just made a poem/ song thing today but i dont think its good enough so im not gonna post it yet...or at all
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Good enough by whose standards? No one is gonna give you a bad critique here, are they?
I for one would be very interested in seeing it
And Arckon? That sounds awesome - I really hope you win
Good enough by whose standards? No one is gonna give you a bad critique here, are they?
I for one would be very interested in seeing it
And Arckon? That sounds awesome - I really hope you win
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Oh Poppycock, please post your ryhme,
Have I laughed at any poem any time?
You post your poem, we can't judge,
If you post your poem I will send you some fudge!
Oh Poppycock, please post your ryhme,
Have I laughed at any poem any time?
You post your poem, we can't judge,
If you post your poem I will send you some fudge!
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Arckon
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U get fudge too.Angel;20923 said:
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I would like some fudge too.
I hope it does not taste like poo.
Listening to this song I am hearing,
I can imagine a crowd cheering.
Without Fable, I would perish,
thats why it is a game I cherish.
I must go to bed,
so I may rest me head.
Farewell all,
go forth and have a ball.
My dreams will be of many things,
hopefully of a beautiful girl who sings
a song of love and beauty.
My oh my is she a cutie.
This rhyme is no more,
time to close the door.
I hope you enjoyed this rhyme,
I hope it didn't waste your time.
I would like some fudge too.
I hope it does not taste like poo.
Listening to this song I am hearing,
I can imagine a crowd cheering.
Without Fable, I would perish,
thats why it is a game I cherish.
I must go to bed,
so I may rest me head.
Farewell all,
go forth and have a ball.
My dreams will be of many things,
hopefully of a beautiful girl who sings
a song of love and beauty.
My oh my is she a cutie.
This rhyme is no more,
time to close the door.
I hope you enjoyed this rhyme,
I hope it didn't waste your time.
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