The Complexities of Arckon

[Arckon]

The Complexities of Arckon

I am Arckon
son of king Archon
Of the Archon order
And what are you balverines doing over,
over your border.

poem #1

Life hath left me, and I grow cold
My body covered in the mourning dew
I wished to see my phoenix fly on the horizon blu
I wish'd to grow old
But that is a story often told
Some say "i am to young to die"
But my hourglass wasn't flipped over says I
My body stares blankly at my spirit in the sky
As my phoenix blu begins to fly
Nothing ever happend worse than this,
but to find out what "this" is
You must already know it.

 

[Skorm's Son]

Re: The Complexities of Arckon

nice......to bad she hasn't seen this..........has'nt really been on in 4ever... :'(

 

[Arckon]

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How you think I feel :'(

 

[Skorm's Son]

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it's funny that I was here for like 3 months and I had about 800 posts and she cam and it boosted up to 2k really fast ...:lol:

 

[Arckon]

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Poem #2

My jaw is left a jar
Emenating with anticipation
for the one to return with my most admeriation
I live for a second and die a seconed later
for what I saw was HER
And I'd die again in death
Just to see her face one mor time
and I hope she hears this ryhme

 

[Skorm's Son]

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....wow

I wish I was as poetic as you..........

 

[Arckon]

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Read poetry and learn from the best, such as Edger Allen Poe,Robert Frost, and Shakespear.

 

[Skorm's Son]

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Poem by Arckon (NOT ME)

Where Be my phoenix of blu
You can give a phoenix of gold and silver too
But it won't be the same
She made posting a game
It was then I learned that she could not be tamed
I am a red phoenix lost and floating in the past
But I am at last saved by a familior voice gentle and soft
And my soul runs a loft
just to find it was only a dream
but dreams are never what they seem

(I like Poe....and Dani Filth.....he's technicly a poet)

 

[Arckon]

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Poe was a Patriarch of poetry that he was, never heard of Dani Filth

 

[Skorm's Son]

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Dani Filth is the lead singer of Cradle of Filth

 

[Jester.]

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....edgar allen poe owned the end thank you ver much good day sirs

 

[Arckon]

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Poem#3

Through the soundless forest
To the vast oceans
I submit to you my best portions
of poetry, and though they art not my best
They still are high up there with the rest

I wonder endlessly through the blanket of shadow
only to find a fallen tree in my way
So I sit there andwait until day
Day has come and the alternate path I shall find.
Aye, I shall find another path through my mind.

 

[Darg]

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It's brilliant and beautiful in its own way Arckon! +rep and I must say I'm glad to have you and your awesomeness back on board. I can't wait to hear more.

 

[Arckon]

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Now your just sucking up, plz continue

 

[Darg]

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Now your just sucking up, plz continue

On the contrary, why don't you continue. These poems are way better than I could do, so... take it away I guess.

 

[Arckon]

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poem #4

I got notin













Fooled you

I sit here and type away
I type nonstop day after day
then I realizee I have a life to live
and a gift to give
I have the gift given to a bard
for me poetry was never to hard
than I learned of a feeling I have not felt
a feeling that makes ones heart melt
a feeling of love and joy
a feeling not felt by any ordinary boy
Then that feeling is taken from me when summer ends
and I get a new feeling, the feeling I have friends.

 

[Darg]

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HOLY CRAP- THIS GUY CAN WRITE! That was incredible! Trust me, it's not sucking up, it's just that you are quite impressive, beyond impressive my friend!

 

[Arckon]

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Your all to kind I am not a pro, to be a pro I have to have a book published, but I have been published in a book and on CD, I guess thats an accomplishment

 

[Darg]

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Your all to kind I am not a pro, to be a pro I have to have a book published, but I have been published in a book and on CD, I guess thats an accomplishment

An accomplishment indeed! I'd say that you are a pro in your own way, a way that is your own style. That's the thing with writing: you have to find your own style or you end up as just another brick in the wall...

 

[Arckon]

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Darg, you have a toungue like silver
very cunning and witty
You are the night fox very well educated
but I would like you to know my reading level is 12th grade and I am 15.
My reading level me be higher than most adults, but you are still much more witty
and I am humbled, you think my poetry Magnificient. I thank you
I hope i didn't sound, like I was bragging.