The Complexities of Arckon

[Arckon]

Re: The Complexities of Arckon

poem #5

My alighnment has from hero
to villan, but I still kill zero after zero
My heart has done some time in the Prison of Bargate
And My heart is like the prisons wardon
Seeking out its fate
Some say my heart needs to harden,
I say my heart must stay with the one I seek
For now my heart feels like a bird without its beak
I try and try
But my heart cannot fly
Without her I am nothing, like one of a hive of bees
And right now I am on my knees,
praying for her to come back to me
But she is as free,
as you, I
And for her I would willingly die
But this is fates doing not mine
Dice are thrown and I hope she comes to the state of the pine

 

[blue crow]

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Wow you must really like her. Maybe you go and find her and tell her how you fell about her. Or you can send her a email.

 

[Arckon]

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I wish it were that simple for one she lives in arizona, and for two she has checked her email in about 7 mounths

 

[blue crow]

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Reply to person above you to see my answer.

 

[Arckon]

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Thnx I didn't plan on giving up on her anyway

 

[blue crow]

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Good you should never give up on some one. Maybe i should heed my on advice.

 

[Arckon]

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You should, If its worth heeding, that heed it.

 

[blue crow]

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Damit i wish i was numb so i wouldent fell pain. Cause of a girl that i like and has a lot in common already has a boy freind which hurts me every time i look upon the face of an angel.

 

[Arckon]

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Be patient for if you force a break up
Your love will not be returned
And you will feel more pain than you do now
and you ask me how
I know this, I have faced the second worst thing
a heart can go through
Upon the face of a former girlfriend lips meeting
They were not my lips though, and it was one of my best friends too
Face red my heart burned
and yet it still beats
no matter the different heats
Cold and dying, young and hot
my heart has died not

 

[blue crow]

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Thats deep man and your poetry is top rank in my books.

 

[Arckon]

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My poetry is good you and others say,
but I am supposed to say its not that great,
but I think its good aswell
I think its pretty good for a person whos gone through hell
Wondering if his love is not returned,
Or worse his true love is lost

 

[blue crow]

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But remeber one thing easy come easy go. Remeber there are more fishes in the sea. But heed this keep you eyes close cause your eyes can lead to lies.

 

[Arckon]

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poem #4

Aye there be many fish in the sea
But there is only one fish for me
as I see it there is no other choice
and I sing with my own voice
not that of which people tell me
But there is but one girl for me
and she is there in the vast sea

 

[Darg]

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poem #4

Aye there be many fish in the sea
But there is only one fish for me
as I see it there is no other choice
and I sing with my own voice
not that of which people tell me
But there is but one girl for me
and she is there in the vast sea

Interesting poem. It has a message, though I can't really say what. +rep though and keep on writing.

 

[Arckon]

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It means when it comes to true love, you have to think for yourself and never ever givup hope

 

[Arckon]

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poem #5

On an ocean a boat bobs up and down
and on that boat, the sea does frown.
It will most likly sink
But not I think.
The boat might make it to port
Or even to a coastal fort.
Never once did that boat ever spring a leak
Even when it's future seemed meak.
The captin kept on going on through the storm of rain and wave
But the boat never once gave
It kept a steady coarse traveling with the eye
And from the crows nest "land I do spy"
and it seems I am right, a portthey did find
But I have one mor secret, this boat is my mind.

 

[Sephiroxas]

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Does it mean to never give up?
IT's great though.

 

[Arckon]

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yes thats what it means
and yes i thought it was pretty good.

 

[Darg]

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poem #5

On an ocean a boat bobs up and down
and on that boat, the sea does frown.
It will most likly sink
But not I think.
The boat might make it to port
Or even to a coastal fort.
Never once did that boat ever spring a leak
Even when it's future seemed meak.
The captin kept on going on through the storm of rain and wave
But the boat never once gave
It kept a steady coarse traveling with the eye
And from the crows nest "land I do spy"
and it seems I am right, a portthey did find
But I have one mor secret, this boat is my mind.

Hey, I can rhyme and put into some sense of order with meaning in it, but you sir are a true poet! I love it! +rep for that amazing piece. I can't wait to hear more.

 

[Arckon]

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Thank you
Poem#6

I am sent into a world dreams
where nothing is what it truely seems
I am falling into the abyse below
and a voice awakens me and it's my phoenix, I know
I stop falling, and I stand still, motionless
Blue flame around me, and I am shivering with eagerness.
but I awaken, into what seems to be my life
but what do I find in my chest a knife
There is a knife in m heart
and I realize me and my love can never be apart
I awaken once more, only to fall back with eyelids heavy
Know I know not everyone understands me.